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Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 17:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I didn't keep reviewing, I just kept reading. I did want to say I truly enjoyed your entire fic. Thanks for sharing
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Title: ch 17
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 01:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly enjoyed this chapter...especially the part with Vegeta suggesting Goku follow ChiChi in the phone booth and Goku actually listening to him. R/Y are cute...but I don't think I'd want to read a lemon on that pairing, so it's ok with me that you didn't.
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Title: ch 10
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, I keep saying to myself I will only read 1 more chapter and then do something productive....guess what, I'm still reading!! I'm hooked...it's great
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Title: ch 5
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 03:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The volleyball game was great...it was easy to follow, in case you were wondering. I had to laugh when 18's hand slapped over her face due to Bulma distracting her own teammates...I loved that part and that Goku was still interested in the ice cream...that's Goku
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Title: ch 3
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2004 02:59 EST
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Ok, I'm taking your suggestion and reviewing even though I'm only on chapter 3 and this is completely posted. Since you have joined our B/V group, I had to check out what you've written. I really like this one, I don't know why I didn't see it sooner, probably cuz there so many to choose from. Anyway, great beginning. I like how you've used many of the DBZ characters a lot of fanfics seem to forget about and also that they all seem to be IC. I love the part with Goku stopping ChiChi and giving her a ticket with his cheery attitude. I will read on....
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 15:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an interesting fic! I wish I'd known about it as you were posting it---it really reads like a TV sitcom, with entertaining episodes surrounding a larger plot and it would have been fun to read in "episodes". I must confess I was somewhat skeptical as to how well this concept would mesh in a DBZ fanfic and I think it went really well. you did an excellent job keeping everyone in character and I found it reasonable, believable and utterly enjoyable! Nice job with the lemon, BTW.
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: crimson darkness On: January 11, 2004 06:51 EST
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wow for a first fanfic u have done a great job it's is very well written and extremely addictive i haven't been able to stop since i started but unfortunately sleep won *curses* anywayz keep up the good stories
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Reviewed By: g265 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 10:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great srory
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 07:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh, I'm so glad you revised this. It reminded me of the fic, and I've had a great time re-reading. Absolutely nothing was lost on the thrird read, it was still as inventive, clever and entertaining as the first time I read it. Thanks for a GREAT fic... Now, please stop reading this and go and work on 'Spacestation'... :D
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Title: FAINT!
Reviewed By: NSBVEGE On: November 29, 2003 20:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MY LORD WHERE THE FUCK WAS I WHEN U WROTE THIS STORY!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! HI IM NSBVEGETA!! GOD ME LOVED UR STORY , OHHHH IT MADE ME WANT TO GET ARRESTED!! YEAH BABY!!! THE LEMONS WERE FANTASTIC!!!! U HAVE A KNACK FOR THIS I ENJOYED IT LOTS WELL WRITTEN 2 THUMBS WAY WAYYYYYYY UP!!! LATER!
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Title: THANK YOU!!!
Reviewed By: the_lil_lune On: November 22, 2003 21:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! i read this fic A LONG TIME AGO. when it was still on ff.net! i'm sooooo gald you decided to finish it!!! i remember you had stop cos some people thought it was too graphic or something. god when i saw this fic it was like seeing an old friend. i loved this story when it was started and i'm so happy that i get to finish reading it. THANK YOU!!! -the lil lune
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 23:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was a great story. I loved it, and I really enjoyed reading it. You are a very good writer. I hope you will write more stories like this one. Anyways, it totally rocked! I now like cops....some what. Lmao, at least more than I did before. I actually liked you idea of putting Yamcha and Raditz together. I can really relate to the kind of relationship they had. I have a similar relationship like it with my guy friend. Putting them together also showed that you respect people no matter what their sexual prefrence is. I respect that. ^_^ I also thought it was great that almost everyone had someone to be with. (Even #16) That was a great idea. Well, anyways, your story was very enjoyable. I hope to see more great stories from you. ^_~ ~The chick with Blue hair~ *MistressChaos*
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Reviewed By: v/b On: November 05, 2003 19:27 EST
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Wow. I... wow. That was... wow. Can you do it again? Pretty please? Don't I sound perverted :) I really enjoyed this fic and seeing as I just finished it about 5 minutes ago, I think I'm gonna go check out your other work. But, there is one small request/conplaint... any way you take it. There was only one really good lemon of v/b and only ONE lemon of G/Ch. That kinda sucked. Maybe you could write more next time you post such a fabulous piece of work. TTFN
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Reviewed By: V/B On: November 05, 2003 19:26 EST
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Wow. I... wow. That was... wow. Can you do it again? Pretty please? Don't I sound perverted :) I really enjoyed this fic and seeing as I just finished it about 5 minutes ago, I think I'm gonna go check out your other work. But, there is one small request/conplaint... any way you take it. There was only one really good lemon of v/b and only ONE lemon of G/Ch. That kinda sucked. Maybe you could write more next time you post such a fabulous piece of work. TTFN
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Reviewed By: V/B On: November 05, 2003 19:25 EST
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