| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Da Bomb On: April 05, 2003 16:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
font color="dark blue">I loved this all the way and I think u are a great author. I first read this on FF.net but when it came off I didn't know u came here. I loved reading every mintue of this ja ne ^_# |
Reviewed By: vegetachanlover On: January 26, 2003 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh...i love this fic. i remember when you had it over at ff.net. it was always one of my first stories that i would go to, in order to chech for updates. i loved the epilogue...i thought that it was a nice way to end the story, with not just goku and chi chi's wedding.
i loved the humour...reading it for about the seventh time...it just gets funnier with every read. i hope to see more from you! bye! |
Reviewed By: Raska On: January 14, 2003 19:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*contented sigh*... Just felt like reading one of my all time favorite V/B fictions again. Boy, you write some seriously steamy sex. I love you. Bravo on a job well done. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 21:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have resisted the urge to read this for quite sometime...but it was recommended by so many friends that I finally decided to give it a try tpday...boy am I glad I did.
Truly amazing. One of the best B/Vs I've ever read. |
Reviewed By: Reji On: July 27, 2003 11:18 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, this fic was really hilarious!
I mean the ginyu force playing volleyball, pilaf and garlic jr owning a pizza place, and popo as a mayer!
And also very original couples. I loved it!!!
Please don't stop doing this!!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS STORY!!! IT HAD ME CRACKING UP, ESPECIALLY THE SLUMBER PARTY CHAPTER NAD THE PART WHERE GOKU SAID HE FELT LIKE AN "ASS PIRATE"!!! *wiping tears from eyes* PLUS I LOVED THE LEMONS AS WELL *evil little hentai grin* |
Reviewed By: raska [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2002 23:35 EST
Comment/Review:
You did an absolutely magnificent job! Writing style is engaging and exciting. Plently of all of the stuff the best ones are made of. Plot, original humor, action, character development, lemon (and you did those very well, i must say. i loved his line when he turned super saiyan) What makes me pause is the fact that you don't have hundreds of comments. you should. Once again, beautiful work- and i loved vegeta's character the best. He was an ass, but you brought out a realistic soft(er) side in him without taking away the lovable ass. you rock- your friends would be jealous if they only knew. |
Reviewed By: Jasp_jedi4hire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 20:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
I loved it. This was a great story. I am a police officer and ya know some of the scenes are so true to life and hilarious. Great Job! I can't wait to see more. Maybe a sequel, if you want help I can think of a few things maybe use evil buu's form? |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn - this is an absolutely fantastic story, RM!
It reads like a movie. You didn't simply focus on one or two characters and ideas; you interspersed so many different characters, themes, and scenes throughout, and still managed to draw everything to a nice close.
I found myself wanting to take up bowling! ;-)
The pairings that you introduced were done in a manner that I could believe - even hunky Raditz and Yamcha.
I loved how you portrayed Vegeta's inner turmoil over his feelings for Bulma, especially his "what if" thoughts about life on Vegiitasei without her.
And don't even get me started on your lemons! Just let me say it's fan-fucking-tastic to read such tantalizingly descriptive text from a man! ;-)
Well, I could gush on and on, but I think you get the jist of my review. If you have any kind of mailing list, please add me to it.
I'm off to read your other fics now.
Meliza |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: October 12, 2002 02:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aaah! RM!!! That was sooooo good! Absolutely fantabulous!!! Everything about it just made me smile! 'Specially when Vegeta was talking to Trunks. How adorable is that! Great stuff! And I'm loving your new fic! Anyways, sorry I can't gush some more about how excellent you are, but I've gotta boogie on outta here! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanPassion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I am so glad that you finally wrote an epilogue for this story. I loved it. Especially the light jealousy with Vegeta at the beginning. Well, I guess I better get to working off my writer's block. Also, Thanks for the cyberhug. It really helped :)
Ja!
~SaiyanPassion |
Reviewed By: Kat...Kitten On: October 09, 2002 20:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love the last chappie...and I could so see Veggie saying that to his son. Hee hee...thanks for emailing me!!!! LOVE YOU LOTS RM!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello ^_^
I'm glad you were finally able to post the epilogue. Dude! I love it! You write Vegeta so well. The whole beginning scene was a wonderful and funny opening. It was cool to see Goku win "fight" for once. There are so many interesting and entertaining elements your fic. It saddens me that this is the end to such a great story. You keep up the good work though. And update your other fic soon. ^_^
~ Eevee |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was too hilarious to read about Chi-Chi and Juuhachigou (18) being pregnant at the same time. I don't think I've ever seen that in a fic before. How cute. Ahh, brought back memories. The father/son scenes between Vegeta and Trunks were priceless, along with Vegeta's possessive thoughts about Bulma's boobs. LOL! This is quite the ending to a fabulous story, and I loved every minute of it. Thank you for sharing it with us all, and I look forward to reading the rest of your work. Much love, shinnotomo!
~ Wanda |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first saw the summary for this fic I thought this A/U was going to be way out,Veggie and the gang as cops? Wow was I wrong, you took the WHOLE gang put them in a cop setting and kept them in character. Love that Veggie, give him some cuffs, a tie, a open window and Bulma and boy did he put on a show. |
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