| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this fic on ff.net and I was completely blown away by the high quality of the plotline(s) and the writing. It was one of the first stories on my favorites list and I used to read it at least once a week. Now I can read you after 10/12 and you've made some changes/additions to drag me back into the tale! You're gooood O^_^O |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just read the epilogue :) Wonderful ending, I'm still hoping for Cop Story 2 though! ; ) |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 05:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I only started reading this because I looked at the summary, and assumed it had been written by some illiterate 13 year old high on their latest (insert popular cop show of the month here)fix. I wanted some cheap laughs. What I got were genuine ones.
How can you take all the characters, put them in such a different situation, and yet manage to keep them true to themselves? How can you manage to alter their situations so much, and yet give us such an excellent quality fic?? So many inspired moments - The 'Jisu Rule' has to be one of the best fanfic ideas ever! Garlic Jr and Pilafs break up...I could go on forever.
It takes true talent to do what you have done, this has to be one of my favourite fics ever. There are so few decent DBZ writers out there, you certainly belong with them.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! |
Reviewed By: Rev Kurame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... that has to be one of the best fic i have ever read. i'm a big fan of a/u because i think the 'three years' have been way over done. i like the whole cop spin and the many subplots u had going on. very nicely written and it is now one of my favorite fics. thanks for writing it!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Big fan guy On: October 05, 2002 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yajarobi was funny nice touch when you put in the old maid thing but still us fat guys are offended a bit |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's all your fault that I've been so sleeply lately at work. If you hadn't written such a fantastic fanfic, I would have gone to bed at a decent hour and awakened refreshed. Instead, I stayed up until the wee hours of the morning reading this fic and then woke up with WAY too little sleep. I screwed up too many things at work today, but nobody would have believed me if I had told them that it was all because I couldn't stop reading this great fanfic... (First off, most of them would have asked me what a 'fanfic' was!)
I absolutely love this one! You have such a wonderful writing style - your portrayal of the characters is so captivating. I'm totally hooked now. Consider me an addition to most likely a growing number of groupies. 8-)
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Ianjohn On: October 03, 2002 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your're story. It's quite original and very fun to read. Grat Job |
Reviewed By: margaretsweetpea3 On: October 08, 2002 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it but the gramer could use some work but I liked it none the less. |
Reviewed By: LaVon On: October 03, 2002 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy this story I really do. |
Reviewed By: Princess Serenity Usagi Chiba On: October 03, 2002 17:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great bonus chapter! Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Sikimoninico On: September 29, 2002 23:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over the last few years I have read a lot of fics. And yours I have to say is the best I have ever read. You have captured the characters persona's very well. It's also amazingly addictive. Keep writing more! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2002 05:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
OK, first, I usually detest AUs this far off the beaten track.... and I mean really, really, really don't like them. So it is with no small element of admiration that I say I am thoroughly enjoying those story, thanks in considerable part to the lemon scenes. One thing I really would like to read is how the Saiyans came to be on Earth in this version.... obviously they're all missing their tails? How'd THAT happen?
I only ask this many questions when I like a story and want to read more. Your writing has caught and held my interest admirably.
More lemons! >=D |
Reviewed By: LaVon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2002 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh so wonderful, that's all I have to say. |
Reviewed By: LaVon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2002 16:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, I love this story and I'm not usually into A/U fics, but this one I'm more than willing to read. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: September 16, 2002 10:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
Howdy FatherMcroury, I'm kitten from ff.n, dunno if you remember me, but I wrote Boatworking Skills or Lack thereof...if i actually remembered to leave it on ff.n...i'm kind of upset with them. Anyway, just saying howdy and i'm glad you're posting on mm.org, now i can read your fic again, and it's awesome, if i say so myself. |
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