| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trixie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 16:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I see that you have done the same thing I have. Damn FF.Net and they're new policy so you're moving your stuff to MediaMiner. It's not QUITE as good as FF.Net is some areas, but it's still good. I just doubt that our fics will be as popular here as they were there, but I'm sure they'll still be popular! ;D Luvs ya! And I hope you'll read my fics here! (Meaning updates.) Cuz I'll definately read your new ones! :D Ja. |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 14:06 EDT
Comment/Review:
what i ment to say is i'll be your best friend if you update |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 14:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know i only came in here to upload some chapters and i saw you posted some more so i thought 'what the hell' i'll give them a glance but i just keeped on reading and now i'm adicted thats how great this is! i absalouty love it and i love androide 17 he is sooooo great in this ^_^
keep wrighting and i'll keep reading later from you best friend!
Ja' Ne |
Reviewed By: Heikgan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cooooolllll fic i love that
"You do have the right to remainsilent. Of course, if you choose to scream like a bunch of little girls, I will not think any differently of you. Of course, if you do scream like little girl
it will be used against you in a court of law
and they will all laugh at you."
that was so funny i fell off my chair twice all so i love that you put 16 in your fic most people don't. when i read this it only had two chapters then when i finshed it had three then when i'd finshed it had four. UPDATE Again SOON! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant!! Keep it going..... |
Reviewed By: seamaidian On: September 13, 2002 19:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol that was great. loved the last part. personally i think 17 is pretty damn hot but of course that is just me. love the idea you have going. if you need help make grammical fixes i would be more than willing to help. you can reach me at seamaidian@aol.com if you dont need help thats cool to. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 13, 2002 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already started reading it on FF.net. Can't wait to upload(?) more chapters. It's a really great story, and the next time I update *laughs* I tell people to read AND review!! A Loyal Fan... |
Reviewed By: Babyblew On: October 25, 2002 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can you plz write more rough sex stories on Vegeta and Bulma since they're so good. I liked chapter 20 since the rough sex u displayed between vegeta and bulma seemed so good!!! |
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