| "A Cop Story" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn - this is an absolutely fantastic story, RM!
It reads like a movie. You didn't simply focus on one or two characters and ideas; you interspersed so many different characters, themes, and scenes throughout, and still managed to draw everything to a nice close.
I found myself wanting to take up bowling! ;-)
The pairings that you introduced were done in a manner that I could believe - even hunky Raditz and Yamcha.
I loved how you portrayed Vegeta's inner turmoil over his feelings for Bulma, especially his "what if" thoughts about life on Vegiitasei without her.
And don't even get me started on your lemons! Just let me say it's fan-fucking-tastic to read such tantalizingly descriptive text from a man! ;-)
Well, I could gush on and on, but I think you get the jist of my review. If you have any kind of mailing list, please add me to it.
I'm off to read your other fics now.
Meliza |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: October 12, 2002 02:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
Aaah! RM!!! That was sooooo good! Absolutely fantabulous!!! Everything about it just made me smile! 'Specially when Vegeta was talking to Trunks. How adorable is that! Great stuff! And I'm loving your new fic! Anyways, sorry I can't gush some more about how excellent you are, but I've gotta boogie on outta here! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanPassion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I am so glad that you finally wrote an epilogue for this story. I loved it. Especially the light jealousy with Vegeta at the beginning. Well, I guess I better get to working off my writer's block. Also, Thanks for the cyberhug. It really helped :)
Ja!
~SaiyanPassion |
Reviewed By: Kat...Kitten On: October 09, 2002 20:08 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love the last chappie...and I could so see Veggie saying that to his son. Hee hee...thanks for emailing me!!!! LOVE YOU LOTS RM!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello ^_^
I'm glad you were finally able to post the epilogue. Dude! I love it! You write Vegeta so well. The whole beginning scene was a wonderful and funny opening. It was cool to see Goku win "fight" for once. There are so many interesting and entertaining elements your fic. It saddens me that this is the end to such a great story. You keep up the good work though. And update your other fic soon. ^_^
~ Eevee |
Reviewed By: W-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2002 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! It was too hilarious to read about Chi-Chi and Juuhachigou (18) being pregnant at the same time. I don't think I've ever seen that in a fic before. How cute. Ahh, brought back memories. The father/son scenes between Vegeta and Trunks were priceless, along with Vegeta's possessive thoughts about Bulma's boobs. LOL! This is quite the ending to a fabulous story, and I loved every minute of it. Thank you for sharing it with us all, and I look forward to reading the rest of your work. Much love, shinnotomo!
~ Wanda |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 20:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I first saw the summary for this fic I thought this A/U was going to be way out,Veggie and the gang as cops? Wow was I wrong, you took the WHOLE gang put them in a cop setting and kept them in character. Love that Veggie, give him some cuffs, a tie, a open window and Bulma and boy did he put on a show. |
Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 19:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first read this fic on ff.net and I was completely blown away by the high quality of the plotline(s) and the writing. It was one of the first stories on my favorites list and I used to read it at least once a week. Now I can read you after 10/12 and you've made some changes/additions to drag me back into the tale! You're gooood O^_^O |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, just read the epilogue :) Wonderful ending, I'm still hoping for Cop Story 2 though! ; ) |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 05:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, I only started reading this because I looked at the summary, and assumed it had been written by some illiterate 13 year old high on their latest (insert popular cop show of the month here)fix. I wanted some cheap laughs. What I got were genuine ones.
How can you take all the characters, put them in such a different situation, and yet manage to keep them true to themselves? How can you manage to alter their situations so much, and yet give us such an excellent quality fic?? So many inspired moments - The 'Jisu Rule' has to be one of the best fanfic ideas ever! Garlic Jr and Pilafs break up...I could go on forever.
It takes true talent to do what you have done, this has to be one of my favourite fics ever. There are so few decent DBZ writers out there, you certainly belong with them.
Thank you, thank you, thank you!! |
Reviewed By: Rev Kurame [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 22:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... that has to be one of the best fic i have ever read. i'm a big fan of a/u because i think the 'three years' have been way over done. i like the whole cop spin and the many subplots u had going on. very nicely written and it is now one of my favorite fics. thanks for writing it!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Big fan guy On: October 05, 2002 14:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yajarobi was funny nice touch when you put in the old maid thing but still us fat guys are offended a bit |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's all your fault that I've been so sleeply lately at work. If you hadn't written such a fantastic fanfic, I would have gone to bed at a decent hour and awakened refreshed. Instead, I stayed up until the wee hours of the morning reading this fic and then woke up with WAY too little sleep. I screwed up too many things at work today, but nobody would have believed me if I had told them that it was all because I couldn't stop reading this great fanfic... (First off, most of them would have asked me what a 'fanfic' was!)
I absolutely love this one! You have such a wonderful writing style - your portrayal of the characters is so captivating. I'm totally hooked now. Consider me an addition to most likely a growing number of groupies. 8-)
Meliza |
Reviewed By: Ianjohn On: October 03, 2002 23:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your're story. It's quite original and very fun to read. Grat Job |
Reviewed By: margaretsweetpea3 On: October 08, 2002 00:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it but the gramer could use some work but I liked it none the less. |
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