| "Life's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: kira/sarah
Reviewed By: kira the neko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 17:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! its in the top 5 of my personal top 5 list thingy......ok...well...i like the way you ended the story and if anyone wants to talk with me my sn is `kira the neko` well.....Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Dreg [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 19:44 CST
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DAMN IT DAMN IT DAMN IT! WHY DID IT HAVE TO END AT CHAP 13! :(
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pirdiful =D Make a sequel... put Kikyo in it O.O Though I'll get mad, literaly, and start hurting myself 'cause she's interfering in their relationship like she always does... it makes interesting things happen and makes their bond stronger *nod nod* Though it may 'cause people to get the urge to kill... it's cool =D
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story can't wait 2 read more of yur works^_^
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn i love this
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 13, 2003 18:22 CST
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Love this fic! Love it! You're first! No F&%Kig Way! This was amazing! It better than mine. *pouts* Adios!
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Reviewed By: dazer On: November 26, 2003 13:38 CST
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i have not read the fic but the responce people are giving the story is why i am going 2!!
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Reviewed By: otakugirl432 On: November 21, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really great story! I didn't get bored at all throughout the whole thing, you really are a good writer. Just one little flaw though, I think you made fluffy a little too bouncy *I don't think the two words 'bouncy' and 'fluffy/sessy/sesshomaru' will ever be used in the same sentance again.* Other than that, it's a great story. And I agree with dreambraider, you should really make a Fluffy/Rin sequal. Ja ne!
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Title: Life's a bitch
Reviewed By: Crim On: October 05, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You said this was your first fic? It good! It's better then some of the others I'v read. You should write more fics! I wanna read em! And your fic is complete, i like them when they are finished, I cant stand waiting for some one to hurry up and finish them... Well, It was great! I liked it. And it is true, Lifes a bitch, and then you die... :)
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2003 14:43 CDT
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i love this story..i think ive read it like 4 times
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Title: Lifes a bitch
Reviewed By: Hanyou-hime On: September 09, 2003 22:41 CDT
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I really, really like your fic, you should so write another one I would read it, anyway keep it up your really good at it, ja! |
Reviewed By: carmela On: August 03, 2003 03:17 CDT
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I LOVE THIS STORY! it is sooo good i had to sit and finish reading it anyway just wanted to tell you how great it was so you can get back to your life |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 04:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this really your first fan fic? Well you did a pretty good to me! You could use a few more adjetives in your writing but other than that you had a well though out plot. Comedy, action, and drama that were highly appluaded. The death scene with Naraku was a little hard to follow at the end, but I got the just of it. The heated parts of the story were more than fine. Now I might sound like hentai for saying this but I am used to a tad bit more detail. (You know longer, rawer, intense) *lightly slapping myself for writing such a thing* I can't wait for your next fan fic let me know when you write another. I'll be right there ready to R&R. ( maybe you won't have to rush the ending next time. )
Later Days
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Reviewed By: Inu-Fan On: July 02, 2003 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is soooo goood! I was literarally screaming (really). Great job. |
Reviewed By: Kitty On: April 09, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey this is like the koolist storie! i like it and all. Oh yeah I put 9 on the spelling and all cuz u spell Sesshoumaru wrong so just that! I'm very sensitive about his name cus he's so cute!!!
Ps. Notice me when u update the storie at Tinklebell2003@aol.com! |
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