| "Life's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan On: November 18, 2002 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked sooooooo much your ff!!
yay, it's really beautiful!!!!
I hope you update soon...
but Naraku make me sick!!! -_-'''
I hate him....I really hate him... |
Reviewed By: Megumis_Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 20:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Megumi: Don't let Naraku rape Kagome! She's too nice!
Sakura: Yea! Get Inuyasha in there so he can kick @$$!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang On: November 16, 2002 23:58 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! I am sooooooooo mad at Inu right now ... how could he do that to her?!??! What's he got against marriage, anyway?!?! I mean, that was such a horrible thing for him to do to her! Take her virginity, then ask her to be his whore?!?!?! How dispicable! GRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!
He'd better see the light pretty soon, or else he's gonna lose her....
But other than that, it was great! The lemon was SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD ... it was simply amazing. Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ...
Anywho, I need to go ... umm ... "do something" ^.~ now .... so ......... hurry and update soon please!!! ^.^ I can't wait to see what happens next ... and if it fits the situation, more lemons are good, too. ^.~
Love,
Tina
PS oh yeah and I liked the part where she told him to sit, and he sat. HEEHEHEHHE that was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Jess On: November 16, 2002 10:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon! Can't wait to read what will happen later on! |
Reviewed By: sayian_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 10:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW that was great! Write more i beg you |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**This is me REposting the reivew because for somereason it's incomplete!! -_-**
I'd give you a 20 for EnjoymentFactor if I could. ^_^ I was really surprised that you updated again today. I was SO surprised!!
That was ... great! I loved how the tension kept building before they even got to dessert. *heh*
Really?! That was your first lemon?? Wow, it's better than mine!! *lol* (the only thing you didn't mention was-- well, there's really no need to read about the "evidence" of her losing her virginity that late at night because even "I" get grossed out by it >.still shaking!! I think I need a shower, too. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 00:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give you a 20 for EnjoymentFactor if I could. ^_^ I was really surprised that you updated again today. I was SO surprised!!
That was ... great! I loved how the tension kept building before they even got to dessert. *heh*
Really?! That was your first lemon?? Wow, it's better than mine!! *lol* (the only thing you didn't mention was-- well, there's really no need to read about the "evidence" of her losing her virginity that late at night because even "I" get grossed out by it >.still shaking!! I think I need a shower, too. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: unicogirl On: November 15, 2002 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh great lemon, I love this story can't wait for the next chapter.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jess On: November 15, 2002 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is quite interesting and fun to read!! Please continue soon!! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Inugome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. I also love the song GIMME THE LIGHT. Is good to hear that I am not the only person that likes that song!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG ... yes ... make him eat her .. please ... ^.~ Heheheheheh
OMG!!! I wonder what's going to happen at dinner ... and when the lemon's coming ... I can't wait!!! GAAH!! You need to hurry up and write that lemon!!!!! Hehe, I'm so impatient!!! ^.^
Love,
Tina |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blinks* That's it??? NOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!
Oh, about the MI5thing... I'm not sure if that one exists. *shrugs* But MI6 DEFinately does exist.
Sesshomaru licked her hand!?!? The little horny dog (Go InuYasha for kicking his ass!!) ... *chuckles* That little "display" in the office in chapter7 was SO friggin cool!! You just LOVE building the tension don't you? *he he he* I like it like that! ^_~
You have some great lines in this fic. And I absolutely LOVED the last one.
Inu Yasha smiled wickedly as he remembered that he was having Kagome for dinner. o.O
*shakes head vigorously* No, not a bad idea at all! Well .... maybe just little bad. ^_~
PS Oooooo, how can you keep doing this too me!?!?! I mean, you keep building up my interest *heh* and then end leaving me wanting more more MORE!!! *chuckles* You are E-vil!! >;) |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan On: November 15, 2002 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. What'll happen if Kagome starts working for Inuyasha? Is he partners with his brother? Is that the inuyasha from long past, in the present? So he survived with the Shikon no Tama? Does Kagome forget that? Or is this an AU and am I asking pointless questions? ^^;; Anyways, keep writing! I'm going to keep reading. If you want an editor. I'm your gal! |
Reviewed By: Eiko On: November 14, 2002 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. the first time i saw it, i just passed it by, and now i'm glad that i stoped to read it. it's so awsome. please post the next chapter soon. i'm dying here. Stupid FF.net. i thought they moved servers to CORRECT this problem |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG ... she goes back to his place ... heheeheeh ... I can see where this is going!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
LEMONNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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