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"Life's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ]
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 Reviewed By: Eiko  On: November 14, 2002 21:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love this story. the first time i saw it, i just passed it by, and now i'm glad that i stoped to read it. it's so awsome. please post the next chapter soon. i'm dying here. Stupid FF.net. i thought they moved servers to CORRECT this problem
 Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 14, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG ... she goes back to his place ... heheeheeh ... I can see where this is going!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!

LEMONNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: TsukinoDeynatsu  On: November 14, 2002 19:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Still good as it was last time I reviewed.. keep writing =P

And on the MI5 deal, yup, they're a British spy agency, I think they're underneath the Crown and that's about it. The IRA blew up their building in London a few years back and they're rumoured to have caused the crash that killed Diana (there were about 15 members in Paris at that particular moment). I can never remember if they're called MI5 or MI6 though, I think both exist...

But yes. Keep writing! I wanna see what happens at dinner ^^
 Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2002 19:06 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
:D This story is AWEsome! And I think that you'd like to know that this is the first Inu-Yasha fanfiction that I've ever read. (heh)
Honestly, I only gave it a chance at first because I haven't seen the whole series (I'm one of the unluckies that can only watch Inu-Yasha on CN's Adult Swim -_-) and this plot sounded detached from the series. But still ... I LOVE it!!

I LOVE the tension between them. And that KISS ... phew!! (is it getting hot in here?) The only thing that would've been neat to add was that scene when she modeled the lingerie(or was it the new pj set?) for him. *snickers* Now THAT would be fun!

Sesshoumaru thinks she should be Inu Yasha's misstress??? B-b-but that's just a prostitute. *sniffles* Awwwww, he called her his mate!! That is SO adorable! Heh, I liked that "love shack" comment as well.

He he he ... he went and saw her. (the perv! j/k) That was SO cute!

Okay, okay... incase you can't tell from my giddiness I LOVE this story!! Keep writing on it, and I'll be awaiting that little MM message telling me that you updated!! ^_~

PS You know what they say ... "quality over quantity." I TOtally agree! Heck, that's how I am with my fics (not that I've EVER written anything good, mind you ;)
 Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 13, 2002 15:38 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVED the UPDATE!! Soooo good!! The dream sequence is definitely better at the end ... and now there's a new question ... WHAT IS INU YASHA'S SECRET?!?!?
I HAVE TO KNOW, DAMMIT!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
Ahem. Hehe. Well, keep up the good work, I can't wait for the next update! ^.~
 Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 12, 2002 22:07 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!! My fave quote from chappy 4: " this is a place of work not a…love shack" HAHAHHAHAHA!! That was GREAT!! I love where this is heading ... I mean, is he going to marry her?! And if he asks, will she even agree!? I mean, they barely know each other, so naturally she'll have some misgivings about it! And then there's her ex-boss ... I have a feeling he's not completely out of the picture yet *shudders* although he still creeps me out!!
I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Love,
Tina
 Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 12, 2002 21:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooooooh! O_O
This is getting interesting... update soon.
Really soon.
 Reviewed By: unicogirl  On: November 12, 2002 00:34 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this, please say you are one of those ppl who update often. I need the next chapter!!!^_^ I agree with T.L. I also got a kick out of that line "she couldn't have been more shocked if he had come out and said that he was a demon and was five hundred years old." Can't wait for the next chappy
 Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 11, 2002 22:28 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hehe, yes, I do love it when my boyfriend sucks on my tongue! Or i would, if i actually HAD a damn boyfriend at the moment *grrrrrrr ... damn dry spell!!*

Anywho, I LOVE IT!!! That was a lovely kiss! and OMG, i KNEW there was something not quite right about the boss!! He really freaked me out in the first chapter, he seemed so creepy!!

Oh, and my favorite line: "she couldn't have been more shocked if he had come out and said that he was a demon and was five hundred years old." HAHA!!! That was HILARIOUS!!! ^.~

Wow, I wonder what's going to happen next ... could Kagome get a job working for ... Inu Yasha?! ^.~ And what's with his brother?!

OMG, I can't wait! You must update soon! PleeeeeeeeasE??!!?!!??!?!

Love,
Tina
 Reviewed By: TsukinoDeynatsu  On: November 12, 2002 23:45 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I figured that I'd review! ^_^ I actually really like this. I put off reading it because of the summary really, for quite a while, and then got bored and saw it and thought 'eh... give it a go..' and now I love it! ^___^

The idea's original, and the plot line's really involving! Though the bit with the health spa is a little bit confusing, I still adore it to pieces! ^^

Write more, okay??

Ah, and on ff.net, instead of chapter 4 you started to put up some other chapter. ^^;
 Reviewed By: kagome  On: November 24, 2002 20:38 CST
Rating(s):
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hay it is me kagome you know me kagome.hay um e-mail me at kagome@san.rr.com because some thing went rong with my acout so i made a new one . k. so e-mail me i'll be whatinh oh and when you do please put you e-mail address in because of coures i don't have it ok o and chapter nine i just finised it, it is perfect don't chang a thing and keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Inugome [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 07, 2003 11:04 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good fanfic. I am a huge fan of Inuyasha and I loved this episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: kagome  On: November 24, 2002 23:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
its me kagome.the last chapter is fine in fact it was so good i probuly have ended it suner.
!!!!!I KNOW I SUCK!!!!! LOL. you ROCK at wrighting and i would like to see more of your work so yep it up and thanks for you good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: kagome  On: November 24, 2002 23:10 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
its me kagome.the last chapter is fine in fact it was so good i probuly have ended it suner.
!!!!!I KNOW I SUCK!!!!! LOL. you ROCK at wrighting and i would like to see more of your work so keep it up and thanks for you good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: kagome  On: November 24, 2002 23:20 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOUR ART!!!!!(spesuly inuyasha's and kagome's dather)
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