| "Life's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 23, 2003 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting plot; I liked how Sesshoumaru was still the more levelheaded (if still bloodthirsty) brother and I REALLY liked how he warned Inuyasha to heed human laws about killing; realistic.
The atmosphere of the story is funny, romantic and sweet, but some of the cruder terms for the male and female anatomy took away from this. (I noticed that you'd stopped using them by the second lemon; a good move!)
It makes total sense that Inuyasha would talk to Rin about his woman problems, and that she'd tell Kagome to slap him up like a little, well... |
Reviewed By: lia_girl On: February 22, 2003 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv ur fic. Things really heated up in there. Please continue to write another fic. |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 02:08 CST
Comment/Review:
ahhh Well that was great!! on to the next story. which one to read.... humm...
GET OFF!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 00:01 CST
Comment/Review:
yeah i love it when i get my tounge sucked!! *drools* :D:D *points to self* needs to get laid.
umm.... did i just say that out loud??? *blushes*
*looks down at her leg* DAMN IT GOKU!! u know, i have told u way too many times! GET OFF OF MY LEG!!!
*hiccup* oh gomen... *hiccup*
che.... stupid monkey |
Reviewed By: dreambraider On: January 21, 2003 19:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Great fic.
Just a suggestion, but are you ever going to make a Rin/Sess sequel to this story?
Please!!! pretty please!!! |
Reviewed By: Andraia jade On: January 19, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is soooooo good!!!! I loved reading it! It would be great if you could make a sequal to it. I would enjoy it sooo much.
thanks for reading
*.* *.^ ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Phlie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm used to a different title, but the story is great either way! I love you! hehehe |
Reviewed By: Josh On: December 25, 2002 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story involved a not so sick means to the end of the story although who knows what you'll write next to continue on... but in any event very good writing and I will be waiting for the next installment |
Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2002 23:36 CST
Comment/Review:
It's over but I enjoyed your fic a lot, hope you have time later to work a bit on the end, but it was Ok, and by the way I liked the firs lemon a lot. |
Reviewed By: kagome On: November 23, 2002 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 is perfect you were pufect at wrighting it. by the way my name is realy stephanie , but my friends call my kagome because i am crazy about kagome!!!She is my favorite charicter!!!! Hay maybe you can ues some my ideas because I don't have a wab site.waaaa! my e-mail is flower@san.rr.co.E-MAIL me please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: kagome On: November 23, 2002 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 8 is perfect you were pufect at wrighting . by the way i my name is realy stephanie , but my friends call my kagome because i am crazy about kagome!!! Hay maybe you can ues some og my ideas because i don't have a wab site. my e-mail is flower@san.rr.co.E-MAIL me please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is off whining in the corner* So it's REALLY over??? *sniff* But ... I'm addicted to this!! I won't be getting my Inu-Yasha/Kagome lemon fix anymore! *whines some more*
*chuckles evilly* Inu-Yasha is certainly responsible for "creating a monster." *winks* Early morning "fun" is so ... FUN!!! *lol* He he he, I need a fix! *runs off to take a nice HOT bubble bath (well, just DREAMS about it, for NOW)* The bath scene was great,btw!! ^_~
Well, if you ever get the urge again *is CURSING you, so you will!!!* then write more great fics that just happen to also contain Inu-Yasha/Kagome lemons!! (obvious where HER head is tonight!) I'll be waiting!! (not so patiently) ^_^ |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2002 18:18 CST
Comment/Review:
mwahzz!!! luv ya!!! i'll tell ya when i want the pic drawn...i have a story out, and bulma's this nice lil assasin, now all i have to do is plan her outfit, and i'm set!!! |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 00:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes! Please! Lemon in the next chapter!! A nice lil reunion between Inu and Kagome ... ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Jess On: November 18, 2002 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue soon!! You upload your fanfic quite soon too!! I hope I was like you in writing fanfic! |
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