| "Fight For The Hikari Cherub" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 17:55 CDT
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This chapter is pretty good. You did really good and all but in the end you still had to put some evil in it? Oh well as long as Yugi-chan and Yami-san get to be together in the end its ok! |
Reviewed By: dark_fairy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 11:06 CDT
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meany!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
u better put them back together or u'll be the next one in the shadow realem i have a friend that will let me use the yami yugi to send u to there and he will be very very pissed! |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 12:29 CDT
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Oh, your so evil to Yugi! :Hugs Yugi then gives him a Yami plushie: There, plz update soon so I can figure out your next evil plot. |
Reviewed By: fairy On: August 20, 2003 22:30 CDT
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see this is what I like to see, updates. When I see that yellow update sign or red new sign next to story that I like, I get excited and its all thanks to you. You make me happy when you do things like make another chapter. And do you know what happens when you make a fairy happy?......you get any one wish you want, yep that's what happen. So close your eyes and make a wish............ |
Reviewed By: pissedfan On: August 20, 2003 22:21 CDT
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Just a sec. I have to take this time to laugh at Yami for losing a duel *lolrotf* Ok. I'm alright I just think that is really funny, 'yugi_i failed you' *laughing again* Yami/yugi only lost one duel and that's because Seto threatened to kill himself, I say he should have attacked, but that's just me you know. OMG, I can't believe you let yugi be pregnant, I mean how unexpected was that!?! So is he gonna be pregnant as a guy as well, you know like on that movie where they made this guy pregnant (can't think of name) NEwayz, wonder what seto has in mind for our sweet, innoncent hakari (pleaze, not anymore he's not, he's a little slut that what he is, your nothing but a whore yugi and that's all you'll ever be to anyone) sorry about that slight outburst. Wow I wrote a lot. Go Me. Maybe I should be writer, Oh yeah. Well I'll stop now, thanks for updating- please do it again. smiles |
Reviewed By: dark fairy On: August 12, 2003 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good i would review in ny acount but it doesnt work here ill get it later ^^
keep on goin! |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good. Kaiba is being viewed as the jerk he is to me. I never liked him, even from day one. |
Reviewed By: pissedfan On: August 09, 2003 13:46 CDT
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'I'll make a great lemon when yugi turns back into a boy' hmmmm, does that mean yugi _will_ turn back into a boy. Oh Goody, but I guess that still doesn't mean that it is yami that won the tournment, but then again, you wouldn't but yugi in a lemon with some other then yami now would you. I guess I'll just have to find out on the next quick update, riiiiight!?! by the way, I love long chapters you get more out of them. this is your loyal fan "Pissedfan" signing out. |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2003 22:05 CDT
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If you don't like the storie or the pairings, why read it or better yet don't review. Just be nice and not review... unless you think a certain part can be improved to help the author/authoress. Ok that's my two cents on that, and well I love the fanfic please update soon^^! |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 04:06 CDT
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You got that right!!! Reviewers have the right to say what they like and do not like about the story but the fact that she hates a certain couple goes to far. Then I should advise her not to read this story at all. You had a warning in the beginning so if you don't like the couples don't read the story. You can always compain about the spelling or the way it is writen but not the couples the author chooses. that is pure personal. this is SHADOW-SPECTER'S story and not maliks girl. |
Reviewed By: pissedfan On: August 02, 2003 21:12 CDT
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Malik'sGirl just got dis, woaaaaaaaaa! I wish I could tell people off as good as you, could you give me a few lessons?! Well I hope you update soon and I didn't know you lived in Flordia that must be so cool: hot weather, swimming, boys, condos, disney world, boys, universal studios, islands of adventure (personal fav), boys, other disney places, water, and did I happen to mention boys ( not that you can't find them here in Georgia) well continue |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:11 CDT
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That note was very unnecessary. Obviously you aren't concerned about readers who might be offended by that. Just be careful how you respond to someone's review because you never know who will read it. Let me give you a tip: email the person, don't type this crap for everyone to read because I got very angry when I saw that. I'm thinking that it's another chapter when it's really an author with a rotten mouth. |
Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:11 CDT
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That note was very unnecessary. Obviously you aren't concerned about readers who might be offended by that. Just be careful how you respond to someone's review because you never know who will read it. Let me give you a tip: email the person, don't type this crap for everyone to read because I got very angry when I saw that. I'm thinking that it's another chapter when it's really an author with a rotten mouth. |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You tell them! I hate it when people review you negatively like that. It is so frustrating. Well, I can't wait until you add some more to your stories. They are all great! |
Reviewed By: dark fairy On: August 02, 2003 18:55 CDT
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ccooooonnttttttttiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnuuuuuuueeeeee!!!!!!!!!!
please? |
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