| "Fight For The Hikari Cherub" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: pissedfan On: July 08, 2003 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOO,do you not realize that reading these stories is my life. I have nothing better to do during the summer. You have to a least try to update while in Canada. I mean, I understand that you have a life and your going on vacation and don't want to waste it typing and being on the computer, but come on, my happiness rest in your hands. Do you know how utterly difficult it is to fine a decent story around here, especially a decent yami/yugi without yami having to share his feelings with seto (man that pisses me off). Anyway *eyes droop in saddness* I hope you have fun and learn plenty of French ok( I think Canadians speak French) and try.....at least try.....to update and sorry I don't have any ideas I leave the writing and creativity to the writers, but you can make Yami win the race because somehow he figures out that it's Yugi, no no, Seto figures it out and....and....heeeeee....ah, sorry, all out of ideas. *knocks on forehead* Yep, its empty....gotta go recharge. Have Fun! |
Reviewed By: gypsy&carl On: July 08, 2003 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
gypsy: poor yugi everything always happen to him. His lover is starting to make out with someone else, but in reailty he is making out with the correct person, but yami doesn't know that, therefore he is making out with the wrong person because he thinks it someone else, when it is the right person, but not in his mind, which makes him a cheating whore.
carl: O.O?
gypsy: don't worry I didn't expect your underhanded mind to comprehend something as complex as the thoughts of my mind *sticks head up in a boastful attitude way*
Carl: *sweat drop*
gypsy: *aggravated from Carl's lack of speech* Don't just stand there looking stupid, say something of great importance, or not, just....SOMETHING!
Carl: update soon.
gypsy: @.@
Carl: *smiles with satisfactory |
Reviewed By: fairy On: July 08, 2003 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon. pleeeeeeaaaaaase. I'll give you a my size teddy bear if you do -_-!* holds up 6 inch teddy* |
Reviewed By: fannywanny On: July 02, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++(you get the idea right) please hurry and get back I can barely wait right now nonetheless one and a half weeks. hurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy. I can't stand to wait. i'm very very impatient when it comes to things i want and i always get what I want when I want it *shoots a killer glare* |
Reviewed By: Joey'z sk8ter gurl On: June 30, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! I know that you broke Seto and Jou up, but can you make it so they could get back together,pwese? I simply adore that paring and it was perfect in Elemntal Mages ( is that right?) but it makes me sad that Seto broke up with Jou for Yugi ( no offense but he sucks!). |
Reviewed By: pissedfan On: June 30, 2003 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
EVILNESS! How can you just leave it there. my heart is pounding- I must read the remainder of the story. Please have it up by tomorrow. I'd just read... as you call it.....E.M and it was great. So I just had to read the sequel today as well. but it's not the whole story* starts stomping feet* It's not faaaaaaiiiiiiiirrrrrrrrr. Please update soon....real soon....like in a matter of hours.....no minutes soon( would say seconds but I know sending in this stuff takes time.) thanks for sharing your talented writing. |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Boy, this is getting tense. Write more and update as quickly as you can. |
Reviewed By: DarkFaeryTea On: June 18, 2003 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi.. getting taken away from his Yami-koi.
Both of your stories are wonderful, I enjoyed them a lot.
Seto might be to evil for my liking, but that's prolly because I'm a huge Seto/Jou shipper.
So... great job and keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Shade Azuna On: June 17, 2003 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^______^ I hope you continue soon!!!! I can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: Nick On: June 17, 2003 10:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved the first story and can't wait until you write more of this. please continue soon |
Reviewed By: Yugi_chan On: June 17, 2003 08:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Yugi. You can't just rip those two from each other. They belong together. I hope Yami and Yugi will get together soon. Great start, you really got me hanging there!
Please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 12:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sheesh I know there is gong to be Yaoi in this but PLEASE don't do TOO much! *boobo lip* Otherwise this was very good! |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 18:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, I've been waiting for you to update! I love this story so much, especially since Yami found out on his own that Yumi was Yugi! Keep it up Shadow-Specter, and Malik's Girl just shut up^_^! GO YAOI! |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
POOR YUGI WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! |
Reviewed By: fannywanny On: August 18, 2003 21:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
are you back yet, its been 9 days since your last update and I love this story so I was kinda hopping you could continue. I saw you continued on 'Goin down in Flames' I like that story too. Yall are so awesome. *starts bowing down* we are not worthy oh talentd one. But please continue even though we are not worthy (well I am, I don't know about everyone else. : ) ) |
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