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Reviewed By: Renzu-chan On: July 06, 2004 11:15 EDT
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YEAHHHHHHH VEGETA KILLED THAT FUCKER YEAH~! HE DID IT HE DID IT HE DID IT! +cheers like a madwoman+ BETTER THAN FOOTBALL!! Wow, I bet he feels like, "OMGOMGOMOGMGOMGOMG." Hurry and heal, Kakorr! Reunite with your LOVER! xD! Okay, a nickname for Vegeta.. Hm, a toughy since you want an original one.. No ideas come to mind :/ Piccolo is just GREAT in this fic. I usually don't care for him but he's ultra cool! But how can he hear Vegeta talkin' to him by telepathy? Gotenks/Piccolo?? ARE YOU NUTS? LOL! I'm sure there's one floating about somewhere. I knew an author named FireCracker at Paco's Hotel did a whole series of squick fics. Very interesting. Very humorous. But I have one request: MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I'll do anything! +begs+
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 08:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GET HIM VEGETA!!!! Yey!!! He killed the pasty faced lizard freak! I dunno about a pet name for V. I would never have come up with Kakkor. I've always liked Geta but something tells me Vegeta wouldn't. ;-) So happy that Frieza is dead. Thought it was cool when you described V as being so out of control when he killed him! Now let him turn loose some of that passion in bed! LOL!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 01:07 EDT
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Very cathartic. Yes I'm letting my vocabulary do the walking. YES!!! It was spectacular, superb! Yeah!!!!!!! I'm using Ve as a shortened version of Vegeta mostly as a distinguisher. But I like it. I see Vegeta as the name that had to be grown into and Ve was the younger version. Hope that helps. -El-
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:17 EDT
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YEY!!!! Another chapter!! Go Vegeta!!!! Kill dat Evil Bastard... haha its funny i named my cat Vegeta n its funny she acts like vegeta some times... lol... humm nick names 4 vegeta i like Geta cause i dunno its cute... n then theres Veggie Head lol... humm wut ealse Vega lol dats acutaly a charter in one of my charters form a story i never posted ... humm Ve or V how ever you wana pronounce it is good but dats cute lol... ok im just rambling here lol... so Write more!!!!! Get Vegeta or Goku Pregant ^_- they need a baby... lol cant wait till da next chapter!! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY FREAKING GOD! These last few chapters have been freaking amazing! When I read that it was Vegeta who tortured and raped Goku, I freaking screamed! You have gotta update soon or I'll freaking die of suspense! *|Mari|*
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Title: chapter 40
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 10:23 EDT
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I read this chappie the minute you posted it wed night but am only writing the review today bc...I'VE BEEN FREAKIN CRYIN EVERY SINCE! At least you didn't wait, Ms EVIL, until the next chapt to give us hope that Kakor was still alive (he *is* alive, isn't he??? *weeps some more*) Oh and thanks for you review on adultff.net. I had to go there when mm.org went down to satisfy my review cravings. I'm glad you like my het--I may write yaoi (thinking, thinking *evil grin*) but not G/V. I love T/Gt ones. And your hot V/R in this story gave me lots of evil ideas! Til next time, your new fan, debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 00:03 EDT
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Go Vegeta. Fight it Fight it Fight it. Realize that Goku is just supressing his own ki as far as he can and KILL THE LIZARD!!!!!!!! Rip him to pieces. Go Vegeta GO GO Vegeta. yes its late and I'm tired and goofy. -El-
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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Well I am pretty new to MediaMiner.. so I just found this. Fic. I have really enjoyed reading this and can't wait for the next installment. It is nice to see someone else that has mused the Saiyan bond thing. I have started posting my own Fic. "New Dawn" and well it is long, lol. on paper it is over 200 pages. but I wanted to say thanks for this. I like the dept you have given the charaters... and I agress with reviews being food for the muse.... my Fac has gotten a good many vist but only one review *frowns* but I will lumber on, hehe. I see the ending of this one as being painfull, getting that chip out with be a trick I can not wait to see. Well I have carried on a good bit now. I just hope I don't have to go to AFF to read the next chapter like I had too with chap. 39. MM must behaving server trobles. Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Title: Chappie 39
Reviewed By: Plyric *stupid MM.org* I am logged in!!! [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never read a story that has Frieza raping Goku in any way, even if it was indirectly through Vegeta! That was brutal! I can't wait to see that bastard get his ass kicked, and I sincerly hope Vegeta finally gets his chance to shine and send Frieza back to HFIL where he belongs! =)
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Title: ARGHHHH!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 11:53 EDT
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I've never read a Goku raped by Frieza piece before. That was truly horrifying. Of course, single-minded b**** that I am, I was worried about Vegeta the whole while! Oh, was that chappie a surprise! You are an evil, evil, evil pixelgoddess! (don't change! lol!) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 10:04 EDT
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Ok I'm over my shock. I still want my mommy but I'm over my shock. There is actually something I've been wanting to ask you. Does Freeza know about Trunks? I would think that he would but I'm not really sure.
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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:07 EDT
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YEY!!! u up dated... Very instering chapter!! cant wait 4 da next one... c i didnt 4 get this time lol
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:04 EDT
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AHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHHH! AHHHHHHHH! -El-
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Title: Chapter 38
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh... Plyric *looks down at stupid review* Darn MM.org! How did that review for that story end up on the wrong story?!!! So sorry for the confusion about 56 chappies! That was my review for Unforgivable. Plyric *glares at MM.org* Anywho, I knew it, I knew it! It was an embedded chip! Plyric *dances around hooting like the monkeys on Planet of the Apes* Alright, let's see some Super Saiyan action to blow Frieza to bits again! Yeah! Yeah! Yeah!
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Title: Chapter 56
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 22:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was a shocking ending! Well, Tatoosh didn't leave me much to say since Tatoosh expressed in their review everything that's on my mind. I do want to throw in my extreme high amusement at the G/V kiss down in the "Hijinks" sections you always include at the end of the chapters. I seriously adored, as in loved!, the last three lines, especially the last line: "Vegeta: Good, then he won't see this. *kisses Kakarot* Goku: mrp???mmmm! *kisses back* Everyone else: @.@ *nosebleeds, passing out, etc.*" ROFL! I CANNOT wait for Forgiven and more Kuro's Escape!!! More, more!!!! =)
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