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Reviewed By: pannybaby123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 16:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it but im an idiot and i always 4 get i read this story when i get the alirts ::bangs head on the wall:: lol but now i hope i remeber cause i love this fic so much dunno how i could 4 get bout it... but thats the hectic life i live... write the next chatper soon!!!! i cant wait to read it!!
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Title: !!!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 15:25 EDT
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oooh, bad bad lizard! Well, that Frieza monologue explained a lot. You got the bastard down. Your Piccolo rocks too. Exciting chapter, but I'm already tearing in anticipation of what you're going to do to poor Veggie! And what's up with Karorr??? ACK! I couldn't get to this chapter til today--freaking computer blipping on me. You're really rolling--thanks for quick (yet fulfilling!) chapts! debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 01:30 EDT
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From Otherworld? He was controlling from Otherworld? That is one hell of a chip. Well lets see. You could Take out Freezas, Have another type of formal bond overide it, or have it come with an off switch. Or something delilishly clever that you've thought up that I haven't. Gohan, Quit acting like saiyadork, go mystic, and kick some a@@. That boy has so much potential nad never gets to use it. I hope Vegeta is the one that gets to kill Freeza this time. Ok Update soon. -El-
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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI, Well I was be hind in reading your fic but cought up now, is Vegeta realy going to leave Goku? hope some thing happens to Krillen. It seams Gokus is starting to go insain as well, hope not. Well sorry got to go, I realy enjoy this fic hope you up-date soon. BYEBYE LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 11:11 EDT
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aww, you reviewed 2 of my fics! I didn't expect you to read sappy het, but thanks anyway! Freaking a.c. broke here so I didn't get to your last chapter til today (didn't want to be whipped up into a heated frenzy w/no a.c!) INTENSE, I esp loved the scene where V realizes that the tail hung low, too heavy to bear higher, and that freaky face is Frieza's! The fusion and the bond--interesting concept! Now that we now what the scar's about, you gave us more suspense--where's Veg going now!!??? AHH! He can't blow himself up or anything like that! Looks pretty bad for our tortured Prince and Kakorr!! (have I thanked you lately for updating so regularly? ;-) debbiechan
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 11:57 EDT
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Brrr. Vegeta trying to dig whatever that thing was out. (it wasn't a homing device lol) Yor Freeza is deliciously evil. I almost wish that Vegeta could have killed him. Oh well something tells me that he'll get another chance. Even if its not the physical form. Now the question is what is it and how deep does it go. How hard would it be to remove?
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Title: I'm #69!!!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 23:34 EDT
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hey, just read the last chapter again so I really can post a review and be lucky #69 ! It's interesting how Goku gets rougher and Vegeta gets softer as the two bond--you never see that in B/Vs. V would've ended up a screaming boss bitch? Nah! debbiechan (who still reads and writes BVs but is ever grateful to p-goddess for expanding her horizons!)
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 16:40 EDT
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awwww, sweet dynamic with Bulma there. I like it that V&B still have some caring there (nice contrast to the Krillen thing). Think its hilarious that B finds the idea of her ex and her best friend having sex titillating! Oh well, keep up the good work! I was hoping to be your #69 reviewer on mm.org but couldn't quite wait. #68 is lucky too, I hear, in some alternative universes....debbiechan
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Reviewed By: sm On: June 12, 2004 05:28 EDT
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Excellent story. Looking forward to next chapter. On a side note, I found this story posted on adultfanfiction.net as well but further along in chapters. Are you still updating on mediaminer?
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 00:46 EDT
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Oh my gods the ship does have something to do with the scar!!!!! I was just joking. Krillin is an ass. Thank You for not making Gohan one too. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And Yes, Vegeta is actually a really great Dad. He's even a better dad than Goku, to tell you the truth. Goku was always throwing is kids in the face of danger and Vegeta was always the one trying to protect them.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 11:29 EDT
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Another very good chapter. I love the toy Ozarou. I keep forgetting theat Vegeta was there for Chichi and the boys when Goku was dead. thanks for the reminder. The story was a great way to highlight that too. The ship has something to do with the scar doesn't it? Its a homing device in Vegeta's back. Nah. Forget I said that. Ok I'm getting goofy and I need to find work so I'm going now. -El-
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Title: chocolate addict
Reviewed By: Jewel On: June 08, 2004 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe, yes i had been eating chocolate, and here you go! *hands u a box of hershey's chocolate bars* hehe, they're yummy! i sitll love this story so you'd better update again very soon!!!!! *puppy dog eyes* please?
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Title: :-)
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:27 EDT
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"You'll have to do the laundry, Kakorr." That was great! :-) Anxious for the Frieza resolution but also curious to see Chi again & all the other dbz guys. And your lemons are so damn good & fortifying I'm expecting another tossed in that's not a lovey dovey G/V one...sigh, no hardcore Raditz? Yummy yuri? Even banal yet humorous Bulma/Yamcha? Ah, my problem whenever I find a new good author is I want to boss them into writing exactly what I want! Never mind--just go on with this story. Just the hint that there may be a sequel made my summer! go, go goddess girl--keep on with that writing streak! debbiechan
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Title: Comfort - Ch 35
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 10:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to be kidding? You are new to writing fanfiction? Uso! You are such a pro! You've become one of my absolute FAVORITE fanfiction authors out there! I have you saved under both my favorite authors and Maintaining, along with some of your one-shots, are saved under my favorite stories. Ok, enough reviewing the author... =) I loved this chapter, as usual. I especially loved the teasing going on between G/V. I have three theories on Vegeta's scar: 1) When Frieza did that last experiment on him, the one before he and Raditzu got to make love for the final time, Frieza implanted some device inside of Vegeta or 2) When Vegeta died and went to HFIL, Frieza put some kind of 'curse' on Vegeta and that scar opens up whenever anyone, other than Vegeta himself, touches it. Kind of like Harry Potter, in a way of sorts. ;) or 3) I'm still totally way off from the real reason behind the scar! =))) Anywho, onward with the next chappie! =)
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Reviewed By: MysticRose [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 22:53 EDT
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Impressive. I love it. By all means keep up the good work. I believe I'm going to miss not being able to read multiple chapters a day. Do hurry putting up the next chapter. I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
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