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"Music" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ]
 Reviewed By: Sum Gai  On: May 27, 2008 07:28 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uh... there's a major problem here. Ranma did challenge Shampoo for her hand in marriage, during the reversal jewel arc. To wit, he even states the rule as has always, "If I beat you, you have to marry me." Not HOW he wins, IF he wins. Seriously, as much as the remark gets tossed around, you really should read the manga... you know, while you wait for your counciling sessions because you have a ton of issues you need to work out.
 Title: What a mess!
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2008 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
First, learn something about motorcycles...they don't have 'thrusters' (I'm reasonably sure that you were referring to the exhaust...unless Melody's motorcycle is equipped with jet turbines of some kind). Second, the basic concept for your story is a reasonably good one, but...and that's a BIG 'but'...Melody is FAR too powerful in comparison to the others and nearly everyone is EXTREMELY out-of-character. Not to mention that you are playing fast and loose with the Ranma series events and giving character motivations that aren't substantiated by canon. In short, this needs a LOT of reworking before it's even remotely enjoyable. Suggestions: Use canon behavior and events (IN CONTEXT) for motivation, you don't need to alter them to make things occur (i.e. 'demonizing' of characters). Next, lose the 'god-slash-super-cop' unless there's an actual REASON for his being present in the story.
 Reviewed By: Gnome Power!  On: August 02, 2004 01:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great, please update soon.
 Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poetry sheer poetry, I wait for MORE!!!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: Nina Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2004 18:19 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a great story! :) i like how melody acts. she'll definetly be a tough opponent for anyone in my story. lol. Even for my character. well anyways, you're a good writer. My story will have melody soon. Just keep checking back whenever you can.
 Reviewed By: Peter Kim  On: November 17, 2003 01:32 CST
Comment/Review:
As long as it is Anti-NWC includuing the bitch Ukyo and their families,it is going to be great. I would like to see terrible torture and death on them!

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