| "Lights Out" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Meepingcheese On: February 22, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u are tormenting me! this is the only story that i have read that left me interested for more that wasnt hentai. i generally hate fanfics! (thats y im reading these right?) i find an excelent author who decide not to continue it in a reasonable amount of time why? all ur reviewers love u! keep this story going! I shall check back every day for a year and if u still havent updated... i will... um...ya so u better update!!;) (my apologies if i sound bitchy but this is a really good start for an amazing story! plz continue!)
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Reviewed By: QTcutie On: November 03, 2004 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You REALLY need to add stuff to this fic.It's like a really cool story that's just begun!There are many things to question, such as "Why was IY there in a hospital place in the first place?" "What's w/the whole in-a-cabinet-&-unknown thing?" Keep up w/the great work!
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Reviewed By: Okibi Usagi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2004 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG U HAVE TO UPDATE THIS STORY! (well you dont have to but id really reallt like you to) ITS SOOOOOOO GOOD!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 05:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This has a very effective and mysterious ending leaving the reader, me, to wonder how the heck Inuyasha ended up in the morgue and you, the author, to laugh maniacally as you taunt me. A kind author would continue the story but it is great the way it is.
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Reviewed By: Shine Lumiere On: February 20, 2004 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this new story, this story is off the beaten track for most fanfics and yet it is still interesting to read
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Reviewed By: shatteredjade On: February 09, 2004 19:42 CST
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wow. whatever the heck i was expecting it wasent this. please dont abandon this fic, its amazing! eagerly awaiting your next update.
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Reviewed By: kagome768 On: February 03, 2004 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love any story with sessomaru in it and well inuyasha to and i just loved ur fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 08:03 CST
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I like it. I like the description, and I'm curious about why he woke up in a morgue. There are so many reasons running through my mind. I guess if you decide to continue this, I'll find out ^_^
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Reviewed By: kira the evil lil sissie ^^ On: January 29, 2004 07:20 CST
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OMG! This is one sick fic....but you what, I enjoyed it!!! I have that same creepy fear of waking up & being thought to be dead when I'm not, so this this really spoke to me....Good work as usual. Just one thing, I think this would have more impact as a one shot rather than a multi chaptered story. luv kira
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So... he was in a morgue? Who is John Doe? Why was his cabinate labled that? He's still Inuyasha, right? Who put him there and why? See, these are the questions you need to answer when you update!! Through telling the story, I mean. Kudos on the descriptions!! I can't tell you how many times I have seen a story with a good plot, but then it turns out that they can';t describe a paper bag, let alone emtions like fear, let alone claustraphobia.///////////// Update soon!!!! ^____^ this story truly deserves a perfect 10!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! It is really different from your normal stuff, but I love it just the same. Can't wait to see where this goes. Ja ne!
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Title: Good gravy!
Reviewed By: Alesyira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 23:36 CST
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Wow! Scariness! I'm slightly claustrophobic, but good god, to be afraid of the dark like THAT and .... *shudders* I'd hate to be caught in a situation like THAT. Scary. Very scary. No thank you ma'am. I mean, yes, please continue if you can, it's an excellent start to a story! Just way too scary for me to want to experience. Yikes. Yikes! *falls over*
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