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Reviewed By: LadyKATT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi I realy enjoyed this fic...LadyKATT
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Title: Nice.
Reviewed By: Kimik0123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 15:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gr8 piece of writing... i enjoyed it
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Vegetas_Queen On: April 02, 2005 08:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, you certainly have Vegetas witty sense of humour in a bag D-chan! Awesome!
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Reviewed By: Catalina_NekoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2005 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic...wonderfully fantastic...what else is there to say...original but you kept them true to character...great job!
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Title: Wonderfuly amazing!!!!
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so cute and wonderfuly written!!!i don't find alot of V/B stories like this,but im very glad i stumbled across yours!!!good job Deb!!!!
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 23:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great job debbiechan! I really enjoyed reading this! I think my favorite part was when Vegeta asked Bulma if she wanted to talk and she said no, I want to fuck, LOL. It was really sweet to have an inside look at Vegeta's desire to come to terms with being a father to a human female. This is your first fic? Wow, awesome job! ~Claire
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Reviewed By: tiger_lord166 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2004 07:18 EST
Comment/Review:
You suck
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Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 10:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an unexpected find and made for a wonderful read. I was humbled by your expert sense of prose and "freaked out" by how thorough you were on the pregnancy-biological process. Your Bulma and Vegeta characters were extremely well written. You could not possibly improve on this fantastic story. Thanks very much for writing it!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Vejitalover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 05:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just discovered your work. You rock! I love the way you portray Vegeta's relationships with both Bulma and Trunks, and his ambivalent feelings about having a daughter. Beautifully written. I look forward to checking out your other work. ~Gail~
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Reviewed By: Rayten On: September 10, 2004 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so cute! I loved that you kept them in character.
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Title: spot-on!
Reviewed By: djFusion On: August 26, 2004 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll admit it - I haven't lurked in much B/V at all in the past few years, but every now and then, one like this hits you. I would say this is probably more of a Vegeta fic than a B/V, but the POV is dead-on and so perfectly in character... and I'm usually a sticker about that! This was one of the best Vegeta's I've ever read! Wow! Wonderful! It had me from the very first few lines, about him thinking about his unborn daughter and the tail issue. Absolutely beautiful, accurate (in every sense of the word), and very very very well written! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 13:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was fun. I really liked the attention to detail when it came to preganancy. The fact that you acknowledged that it is a little gross and messy despite being a fascinating process. Vegeta as the nervous male is a nice change, you kept him in character while dealing with this subject. That and your interpretation of Bulma and Vegeta's feelings about her made me smile. She isn't a shrieking harpy or a shrinking flower like she is portrayed in several fics. She is the strong independent woman who managed to subdue the wild prince. Thank you for the great read!
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Reviewed By: Gohan's Onna (someone is using my name!) On: July 04, 2004 22:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, completely excellent. I loved this story! Lol, and you are the first person I have reviewed on mm.org. I loved this story, it was filled with such knowledge! It sounds as if you know what you are doing! Hehehe! I am going to check out your other stories, to see if you have any more glorious ones like this. And if you haven't already, PLEASE, PLEASE continue this! I would read a continuation in a second! I would love to hear about the actual birth process and what Vegeta was going through. You are an excellent author! 10/10!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work. Vegeta is still himself, but softened and mellowed by an understanding Bulma. Never been pregnant, never really been around anyone pregnant enough to know about the things you described...but I like that you wrote it as a good thing. Bulma is so happy - none of those cliches of fat and waddling and only a quick mention of morning sickness. Beautiful description of Vegeta coming to terms with fatherhood.
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Reviewed By: vegetaspixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 16:53 EDT
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Nicely done for a one shot! I really like the way you protrayed Vegetas character and his feelings. I too, liked it when she wanted to do it and he didn't....I usually think of it as Vegeta coming onto Bulma instead of the other way around ^__^; Anyways, great job!
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