| "I am The Brother Of The Winged Knight" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: FeatherDragon On: April 12, 2007 19:24 CDT
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Nice start on the redo. Please continue.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (ya know ^^;) On: April 12, 2007 05:31 CDT
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Yay, I'm glad it's coming back! ;-; Baka... now that's strange enough to come from Zero to propose it isn't him. xp Bad bad, Zeron! His name will still be Zeron, right? Keep posting whenever you get the breaks! :3
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 21:03 CDT
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Grr I forgot to fix that last follow...Illius me paenitet, dux! ^__^
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 10:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
So you revamped this, eh? I haven't got around to reading much of the old one, but this is coming out pretty good. Much better use of description, and you've got the characters personalities down pretty good. I'm liking this. Please continue. ^_^
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2005 10:38 CST
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murahahahaha..i love that one..zeron is so cool..i love that prank lol^^
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Reviewed By: EntengoThe Great [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2005 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Please DO keep going. Thanks
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2005 16:13 CDT
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That was song was sweet. Poor Zeron lost his memory but he still remembers Zero? Okay whatever. Please keep going.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (I LIVE! o.o) On: July 08, 2005 23:08 CDT
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wheee, that's good. Aww, does that mean this fic is gonna be wrapped up soon? *pouts* Aw, dun worry, I've updated less often recently. x.x And if anyone wants a good excuse, my dad went threw surgery this morning since a freak case befalled him and now he can't see out of his right eye. I promise I will get out of this Naruto kick and return to writing soon. Anyway, I love that song, maybe coz i never saw the movie, just heard the song. ^_^;;; update soon please Lor!
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:32 CDT
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I hate it when my stupid computer won't let me read reviews/write reviews X__X -.-+++
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 14:29 CDT
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Hey great chapter. Camra action LOL. Anyway keep going please. and read mine while ur at it
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Reviewed By: May-VegghieGirl1 (ya' know the deal) On: April 09, 2005 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, yes, nice camera action! ^_^;;; heheheh. wow, you updated more recently than me!! O.o X_____X *dies* I will not go into coma--- I refuse! x.x.x
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Reviewed By: DragoneyesBC [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 05:52 CST
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~sniff~ I'm loved! ^__^ thanks guys. Also yes I'm trying as best I can to get better at the things Juu-Chan mentioned. The reason my 1st chapter suck is because I was so excited to get it up I didn't really care what it sounded or looked like. So thanks everyone!! ^__^
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Title: Mesa Juu-Chan...
Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 20:57 CST
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She has a point you know. i have been writing a fanfic myself that I will soon begin to post. Your comments are a little harsh. maybe you should read the entire thing then say somthing.
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Title: But wait! There's MORE!
Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (sorry, can't log in at the time) On: March 14, 2005 17:19 CST
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Sorry I ran out of characters and had to finish my little defensive rant in another review: this is still commenting Mesa Juu-Chan's review- Again, because your review was aimed with good intentions, I am fine with your ideals and am trying not to be a real pest. To me, Lor is like a little sister that I never had, so it's understandable if I am a bit overprotective of her feelings. And in the future Juu-chan, please try not to be so entirely pessimistic toward an artist's blood, sweat, and tears. Especially if they haven't been in the field for the longest of time.
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Title: response to Mesa Juu-chan's review
Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 (sorry, can't log in at the time) On: March 14, 2005 17:10 CST
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Mesa Juu-Chan, it's very nice for you to give her your 'constructive' criticism, but it is a bit harsh. OF COURSE the first chapter is lacking critical elements, it's her first fic, first chapter! Doesn't EVERYONE'S first attempt lack many things? If you read the chapters following, you can defintely see it progress in many of the elements you listed were lacking. SINCE you haven't written anything yourself, you wouldn't understand how hard it is to write for the first chapter, or any chapters afterwards. Writing is a passion that must be overcome by numerous obstacles- including flamers, writer's block, deadlines, and life in itself. Anyone can read a book, but it limits to a very small populus that can have any potential to write something of their own. If in fact you have written something yourself, I'd like to see some guts displayed through action before through your bitter words and display it on the internet. I strongly believe that people that have opinions on these issues must experience the hardship of writing themselves and have enough self-esteem to put their name and not 'annonymous'. I'm very thankful you at least signed your review to her, but I please ask of you to try your own hand at writing. Also, I am slowly mentoring her myself in anything she feels she needs to change, while taking in and creating my own style at the same time. Melady101 also agrees with me, but her computer isn't loading mm.org right lately, so she cannot speak to you herself.
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