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| "Drifting" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 22:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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you have such a great story, its absolutly amazing. i have a knot in my stomach...its like i can feel their pain...which might i add is an acomplishment to make the audience feel the agony and angst. such great tidings you have brought in this story. i can completly see this truely happening in the story plot itself, because of exactly how much time she spends over there. wonderful story and keep it going.
| Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: December 06, 2004 04:39 PST
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uPDATE SOON!!
| Title: EVAAAAAAAAAAL!!
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2004 04:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wicked, wicked woman! LoL! Poor InuYasha . . . Poor Kagome . . . poor readers who just can't look away!!! What can I say that hasn't already been said? I think, though the dynamic seems wholly 'off' as far as a healthy relationship, I can see where the entire InuYasha/Kagome dynamic you display could have turned into something like this. I think that, in any really intense relationship, there is some certain kind of angst, some little bit of oneself that can be easily lost. I think that's what you touch upon here. It can turn so easily, something tender can become an obsession, something wholesome can become a little darker, a little more 'needy', and when Kagome entered that well and continued to do so, I think that she had to rely on InuYasha, and in so doing, it could have grown into something quite like this . . . . Awesome, as usual! Keep it up!! ~Sueric~
| Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 16:40 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!!! Another chapter I can anguish over!! I loved it, but now, I gotta wait for another... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update this as soon as you can. I need to know what happens!!
| Reviewed By: MyogaM34 (not logged in) On: November 30, 2004 15:13 PST
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I really luv this story!! Please, Please, Please update soon!! ^_^
| Title: Ch. 9 Confronted
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2004 12:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With every chapter you post, I get more and more involved in your tale! Exquisite wordsmanship, you're really evolving as a fantastic writer! ::sniffle:: and I can say I knew you 'when'... LoL! Great chapter, awesome, awesome . . . it reads so well it hurts! Your style is punctuated by your choice of wording, and I'm just in awe of your ability to spin such a melancholy tale! Though I don't really know where you're going with this, I'm sure that you do, so I'll leave it to you, dear, and again, another superb chapter! Keep it up, and, as always, ::hugs:: to you and may your muse continue to shine! ~Sueric~
| Title: INU-KAGLOVER
Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 04:06 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You STOPPED!! WHY did you STOP!!! ARGH!!! Next chapter, NEED NEXT CHAPTER!!!!
| Title: Generosity
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2004 18:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is so great, it tugs right on the heart strings! While I really wish your updates were, say, every day, I can live with it, so long as you keep up such a great intensity! Fabulous! Loves it, I do . . . :) Can't wait to read more!! Write on, RadiosNmyHead! ~Sueric
| Title: Refusals
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2004 21:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This keeps dragging me right in. I get soooo happy to see that you've added another chapter! Let me be the first to join the RadiosNmyHead fanclub, ok? :-D Keep up the great angst! I love it! How odd, I love something that ties my stomach in angst-y knots! Go figure! :) Keep it up!!!!!! As always, you manage to refine your style with every chapter, and as for the slow updates, so long as they're of this caliber, I can wait . . . though I admit to bugging you for said updates, yes? Astounding, girlie monster! Absolutely gut-twistingly amazing! Best, ~Sueric~
| Reviewed By: szmadad [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 15:26 PDT
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I read through all of the posted chapters last night but needed a little time to process it. Your writing really kicked me in the gut (and that's a compliment)...you describe Kagome's feelings so well and paint an excellent picture. I'll admit, I'm an obsessed Inu-Kag fan and have never considered the image of kagome as an "addict" for Inuyasha before. But you've laid out a very plausible chain of reactions on her side. Now of course, what the heck was Inuyasha thinking?! Taking off for so long without a word to kagome...leaving her like that when he had to have known that there was a desperate quality to Kagome's time with him. Bad Inu! Especially for him to think that everything would be ok when *he* decided to show his face again! Though I honestly don't think he'd be able to last for that long without her presence... Me personally, while I appreciate the angst...I do so as long as there is some sweetness to temper it. Sigh. I'm too much of an idealist and have to plead for a "happy" ending...meaning I can't fathom Inu and Kag *not* being together. I do hope your writing muse inspires you along those lines as well... :)
| Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 20:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The feel of your fic is awesomely macabre. I love this. Granted, probably not something I'd want to read if I was standing on the edge of a bridge, thinking about diving to my death. Still, I'm amazed at your ability to weave that tight knot in the gut, the one that says, "Oh, I can't read this!" yet I get all happy to find the emails that you've updated! Great job, girlie! Don't stop now! (Because if you do, I'll die of curiosity!) Okay, for critique? None, actually. Good chapter flow, awesome use of angst, great use of words to make your thoughts really pop off the page! This really is a great fic, and I hope that others discover it, too!
| Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 19:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was difficult to read. I can see what you're doing here, with the 'withdrawal' type thing, and it is truly remarkable. I look forward to reading more, in a somewhat warped, twisted way lol. Keep up the fantasic angst! It's spellbinding! Though I'd love to see longer chapters, this one was packed with emotion! Keep it coming! Awesome!
| Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 21:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another awesome update. You're putting me to shame in the angst department. Loving this :) Fantastic! Keep it up! With every chapter, I see marked improvement (not that you need much, you know!) Your words are flowing freer, and your style more refined! Keep up the remarkable work and I eagerly await your update! ~Sueric
| Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Sueric [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 09:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Angsty is a great tool, and you seem to do well with it! Fun yet torturous, I'm loving this! Great start! Can't wait for more! Kagome seems almost like a drug addict, and it seems like he is her drug of choice. Interesting viewpoint! Keep going! Fantasic chapters thus far! ~Sueric
| Title: Wow! Back so soon! w00t.
Reviewed By: BakaBokken (not signed in) On: September 04, 2004 17:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! what a brutal place to leave it hanging! XD Great work, and I can't wait to see you develop this more! I'm itchin' to find out what happened to Inuyasha, and how they got to this point in the story! w00t. Keep up the fantastic job, and I will be back to read more! Hehe, and you updated soooo quickly! w00t!! (Haha, you better be careful or you'll spoil us readers!) Keep it up!!! =D Jaa! ~Baka
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