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Title: BEST FIC EVER
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well i really don't care that u made so that u will only take reviews from ppl who r regitered mm.org members the only bad part is that i have to log in to review*crys*...Well anyway i really like how u r prgressing the story and the relations that Duo and Heero r have..I can't wait to find out what happens to the kitten and i hope that it does not die...awwwww(can't take it..no kitty die)..ur writting was good and the grammer was good as every.I really enjoy thi fic i think the most out of all of the other that u have written.I know that this is not one of ur more popular fic but it is my fav...well i shall let u get back to all of the writting that u must do and have a MERRY X-MAS form me and all of ur readers...ja ne
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Title: Patty 40
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't understand why I can review her and can't review at you other stories ..I get this massege Write Review/Comment Error: Author accept comments ONLY from registered MM.org members. Register. If anyone knows why please e-mail me at dpuchtler@hotmail.com and let me know .Thanks Patty.
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: December 10, 2004 00:44 CST
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hey another geat job!! can't wait to see what u come up with next!!i really like how fast u up date and can't wait till the next chap. or i just might kill myself waiting and well whatever!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 19:22 CST
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: December 02, 2004 20:12 EST Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm so sorry it has taken me so long to review everyone's stories!!! You see my Dad has been in the hospital and I had to stay with him..So needless to say when I went to read my mail today I had more than 21 updated stories..and some of them where from the same Author and some from author's I haven't herd from in a while witch was a wonderful surprise!!Sooo all this means I have to do a mass update and I'm sorry for that ..You see I'm so tired I only go two hours sleep last night so don't ask me what is keeping me going..Now this is my review..I have read everyone's stories yes I sat here and read them all ..And I really enjoyed them..And to all of you,You did a great job ,good writing,great story line ,good imagination...Please update again soon...I think on one of the stories I've read some one wanted a challenge uhmm ok I would like to see an 1x2x5 3x4 with Duo leaving for a year at the end of the 2nd war and showing up at the end of that year with a child about 3 mounts old. The child would be Duo's and it's mother died in child birth so now the pilots will live together and raise the child... While 1x2x5 get together ..Well it was just a thought for a challenge...I have to go and get some sleep ..I will leave you with this if you keep writing I'll |
Reviewed By: Escagirl On: December 02, 2004 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it when Heero yelled at his boss! Go Heero! I hope you get the asshole fired! Yeah! And, anyways, great fic! Write more soon!
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: December 02, 2004 01:04 CST
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yay!! I love this chap. and OMG this is the best fic i think that u have written just b/c i love horses so much and that u do this fic so well and i have not idea where i'm going with this.Only that another excellent chap and can't wait until u update this fic again.Do update soon and good luck with the writting.One last thing that made this chap. really great was how Heero told his boss to shove it.HEHEHE.I really do hope that the man lose his job..,ja ne
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Title: Good story
Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good story. I love it. Makes me wish I was still riding. :( The chracters are great. I wanted to kill Heero's boss. Thanks for a great read. Please update when you can.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
it just keeps getting better and better! keep updating!
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Reviewed By: Yukino Maxwell On: November 26, 2004 12:09 CST
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YAY!~ i love that chap. and just want to kill Heero's boss.Zero is sure a funny horse and poor duoit must be hard for him to take care if his hair so much with it being long and all and trust me i know i hate when the horses play with my hair.lol well anyway i love this story lots and can't wait until u add the next chap...ja ne
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Reviewed By: kimpisces--not signed in On: November 26, 2004 09:31 CST
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what a jerk! *really wants to kick that stupid Mr. Donaldson where the sun doesn't shine* I think that Heero would go and work for Duo, he can be his personal secretary and that way everyone would be happy and Mr. Donaldson can go and wish that he had never told Heero to sell Zero *nods* ...Zero playing with Duo's hair was cute ^-^ ...^-^ ~KIM~
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: November 20, 2004 10:36 CST
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Lovely, romantic and good.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story, love the way you write. You are one of my favourite GW authors especially your 1x2x1 stories. This story is great because you describe things so I can see them and understand them, only excellent authors can do that. Keep up the great work and I can barely wait for the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: Yukino Maxwell On: November 11, 2004 23:44 CST
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EEEEEEEEEE! that was some great chap... u have to write another one and post it tomorrow plzzzzz!! i have to find out what will happen to them plz.I really like how they interact with each other and how they both explain to each other what they r looking for and also what they r to each other and the way u did it was so nice and very logical.Well anyway i hope that u had a good veterins day and all so the last thing that u have to say is UPDATE SOON AND GOOD LUCK WITH THE NEXT CHAP....ja ne
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: November 07, 2004 00:18 CST
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*crys and does a heppy dance* That was that best chap. by far.I loveed it so mech it was so touching and Heeros dream sounded scarey.I that happened to me i...not even goin' to think about it.I noticed that they r being so nice to each other.Well good luck with the next thing that u write and can't wait to read the next chap. of this fic. so that mean that u have to UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 21:57 CST
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Best chapter yet! Oh I can't wait until the next one!
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