| "Equinity" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: fayli08 On: January 31, 2005 14:22 CST
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hey keep up the great work and don't forget to update soon.^^
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 31, 2005 14:20 CST
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I love the new updates that u made on the last 2 chaps..i really like how u tell how in Duo does what he does..in other words love the detail. i hope that the horse does turn out to be well in the end and that Duo will not have too hard a time with the riding..I'm sure that Heero will make a great trecher..by the way u described the horse i would have to say that is sounds really good..most of the stuff that Duo said about text book and real life experence i would have to agree..it is very different ..well updater soon and have a good day with whatever ur doing!^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshoumarustruluv(not logged in) On: January 30, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic so very much. I like how you go into detail in explaining the procedures that Duo performs. I also like how you include definitions of what things are concerning Zero's care. I'm an animal lover myself so that last chapter really got to me. I've enjoyed all your stories that I've been able to read. You have a wonderful way with words and you go into great description and make me get lost in the story. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, story moving perfectly, love the Heero and Duo moments, loving this story. Only one problem...I want to shoot the b@##@#d that ill treated the horse at the end. Nice to see Quatre and Trowa added to the story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Jupitor Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2005 09:43 CST
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Trash and treasure sounds alot like The flea market we have in New Mexico, You go they charge you for parking then you can go and look at peoples stuff and sometimes buy stuff that people make, it's really big in Alburqurque where you can buy los of indian jewelery, and stuff, i love to go and buy kachina's.
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 24, 2005 01:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great update and i can't wait to see what u do with the story from here!! ^_^ ...ja ne
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Reviewed By: One of the authoresses (too lazy to sign in) On: January 23, 2005 11:12 CST
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I likies! Keep up with the cute story! ~Azure
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Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das Bloot{not logged in} On: January 20, 2005 01:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A wonderful piece of work, and I hope to see it updated soon! Keep up the good work. ~*Peace*~
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 16, 2005 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love what u did with this fic so far..i have noticed that i don't have to log in anymore to give a review(jumps for joy)Well anywhooo i love the update of the fic and must say that my fav part was how Heero talks to the horse which i do all the time but am not embarresed to do..I like that Duo was going to give Heero a job even thought he got one..it leaves hope that he will work full time for Duo and not take the other job.. and last was the part when Heero say Aishiteru to Duo and he did not know what it ment even though i think that he knew what it meant even thought it was not in english..Last thing that i have to say is that i have only heard that the thing that keeps the flys out of there eyes as a Flymask...but then again there are many differen names for many different things..well i shall not keep u and just say hope that u update soon...ja ne
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Reviewed By: Inulover16 (not logged in) On: January 10, 2005 23:45 CST
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awwww the kitty dies..that was soo sad..but it made it even better with what they did to confort each other..though i had hoped that the cat would not die but that is how life goes sometimes..i'm happy to see that Zero is doing better and can't wait to see what will happen in the next chap. and if heero will get on of those jobs that he is going to..hey great job with the character development and all..i love how the story is progressing and not moving too fast..well i will let u get back to ur life and have a good day or night which ever time that u read this and whatever..Update soon..ja ne
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 19:47 CST
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Great!update soon!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 01:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh i hope that the kitty does not die and that if so Heero will be ok..plz let Heero not get the job so that he may be able to work for Duo..well have fun writting and keep up the good work...ja ne
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 06:43 CST
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good story!! I love it! I hope Heero doesn't get the job so he could work with Duo instead! That would be nice. Keep up te great work!
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story so far! Hope you update soon!
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Title: Apologies
Reviewed By: GW_ShenLong [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 09:03 CST
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My apologies to those of you who are trying to leave a review and can't. I haven't changed anything on my profile, I still have the 'accept all reviews' button ticked, however Media Miner has decided to only allow people to pop in a review if they are logged in. Apparently this is to stop people from spamming. For more info check Media Miner's main page where all is explained. For those who wish to leave a comment and don't want to log in I'd love to hear from you, what you like/dislike about my works etc. You can email me if you prefer at; gwdeathcythe@hotmail.com Many thanks to those of you who are reading and have dropped in a review. Feed back is always appreciated and I thank you all for taking the time to read and post a comment. *hugs and Gundam Pilots to you all* ShenLong. ^_^
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