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 Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild (not signed in)  On: December 04, 2004 15:03 PST
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Well, good that finally someone told Inu-Yasha the *other* way. Hmmm...of course we all know he's going to tip-toe around *that* issue for another 5 chapters. LOL. I don't think Kagome's dream was quite a dream at all? I wanna know what it Inu-Yasha dreamed about that night....
 Reviewed By: notzathros  On: December 04, 2004 14:42 PST
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Another great chapter. I'm curious why Inuyasha was so vivid in Kagome's dream. It certainly seems like they were sharing the same dream. (Which is pretty cool BTW) The question is, why? What was different about the binding? Maybe it was the time jump, but what a strange effect for it to have. Curiouser and curiouser. Thanks for writing! I look forward to each chapter and savor them as I read! Hope things improve for you. Good luck with the FIL and kidpack.
 Reviewed By: Yoraeryu(not signed in)  On: December 04, 2004 13:45 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh dear, sexual tension... Love it! Now I've been having this suspicion that Hisadaicho is the ones in these dreams, just not creating them... But I better be wrong! lol Will we be seeing any relief for Inu-kun and Kagome anytime soon? *nudge nudge* Poor Fluffy and Mokomoko-sama. Bring Kagura back, I say! ...Oh, and I feel awful for you having to deal with all those kids by yourself... Ganbatte! Get some chloroform if it gets really bad! XD
 Title: The BEST!
Reviewed By: FullmetalArchivist [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 13:43 PST
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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What to say, what to say? First off, fantastic! I never thought Kagome would start having dreams like his, and then to figure out that he's having the same dream? Woo hoo! What happens if they have the same dream and are within reach of one another? I'm a little torn with that. That would have to be funnier than funny, the two of them fumbling around with that. Then again, I would hate to see them 'mated' because of unconscious thought, if that makes sense. I know this is your story and that there is always a method to your madness. I just can't wait to see what else you have planned in your devious and oh-so-terrific mind! As for your father in law, I feel for you! That has to be a tough thing, but fear not! I'm sure that he'll be right as rain! With as many people as you touch with your writing, you really ought to believe that enough people are pulling for your family that I'm sure God hears the prayers! Thanks for taking the time to post anyway! Best, best best! =Diane= PS~ Sexxhoumaru is still mine!!
 Reviewed By: LeeLu  On: December 04, 2004 13:35 PST
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Show and Tell? Really? LOL I wonder what's to show and what's to tell! HAHAHA! Oh yikes about you being by yourself with those kids. I know how you feel. I have tons of lil' cousins and being that they call me "The Nanny" of the family, I'm constantly taking care of kids. Eek. So, this vial thing, is it like affecting Kagome now instead of InuYasha? 'Cause it seems like things are getting a lil' heated for Kagome. hehehe
 Reviewed By: kougasprincess [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 13:26 PST
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*falls down* Whew! So, Kagome and Inuyasha are sharing dreams now, huh? *giggles* Lucky girl! Another great chapter, and just because I can, I'll say UPDATE SOON!
 Title: Take your time and be happy!
Reviewed By: IfICouldMarryInuyashaIWould (has chronic neversignsin-itis)  On: December 04, 2004 11:50 PST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Hey hey hey! What's this show and tell business? That's the first final note from one of the characters that made me say "WHAT?" Is there going to be some serious sharing of feelings, emotions, and dreams in the next chapter? I'm holding my breath until it gets here. But take your time, because if my favorite writer has a nervous breakdown, NOW how would all those Sueric-dependent readers feel? Breathe, enjoy all those kids in your house, and tell your father in law to FEEL BETTER! You're amazing. Ja ne, ~I.I.C.M.I.I.W. P.S. *By the way, I laughed out loud, HARD, when I real the "hanyou in hell" red, description of Inuyasha's blood. Not even kidding. You're lucky if you get me to crack a smile at a funny joke, and that was seriously perfect timing, and payback for Miroku after the whole "monk in pain" red thing. Have a better weekend than your week! ~J
 Title: lmao...my undying gratitude to the hentai betas.... roflamo!!!
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 11:50 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wishing she could return to that dream, huh? ::snickers:: Well, I have a pretty good idea of how the two of them will react (if they can even face each other in the morning)... but does the rest of the gang get to find out? Not that we need to give Miroku's hentai mind any more ideas, but wouldn't InuYasha and Kagome want to find out why that occured? LoL, I mean, then they could repeat the experience! o 0 (hmm, now did I really type that out loud?! ^_~)
 Title: 13 Kids? Oi!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 11:19 PST
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Well, I always fall back on Disney movies and board games. With that many children running around, your role is more like a referee to keep the peace. I once had to deal with 20 at one time...by myself. Do you have help? I would reccommend it. ----Great chapter. I laughed all the way through InuYasha's verbal bout with Myouga. 'Are you wearing...BLOOD?' I can almost hear the drool hit the ground. And Kagome's dream...she doesn't seem to be too embarrassed about it, but then again, there is no one around to witness it. ----Gee, I just love these stories of yours. I'm completely addicted. You realize now that your contributing to a 'reading junkie'?
 Reviewed By: asiancherries (not signed in)  On: December 04, 2004 11:04 PST
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something that has been piquing my mind: is Kagome pregnant in the dream sequences? on the one hand, it would be difficult for her to maneuver too much and she'd be more conscious of hurting the baby. on the other hand, you can do anything in dreams. i guess, in the end, it all boils down to how Inuyasha sees Kagome in his dreams, and how Kagome sees herself?
 Reviewed By: cj flutterbye [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 09:00 PST
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Hentai dreams all around!! Since the binding, I think they have been sharing dreams - except that Inuyasha hasn't really been sleeping well. So maybe they are just Kagome's dreams - and InuYasha comes and visits?? oh heck, I don't know anything - just keep leading me through the story.. I'm following as best as I can. I hope your father-in-law has a good recovery.
 Reviewed By: Shadow_Within (NLI)  On: December 04, 2004 08:50 PST
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They were dreaming the same dream!(I think...) That's hilarious! Jeez that's like Miroku perfect fantasy! He could make out (and do other things) with Sango literally 24/7! If she Hisadaicho was able to make Inu smell different things then couldn't she amke Sesshomaru smell her as a hanyou and her really be full Youkai?
 Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 08:19 PST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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loved it! :)
 Reviewed By: holly [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 04, 2004 08:05 PST
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that was wonderful.. this is ixchen by the way.. this computer is stupid and won't let me sign in to review.. wonder how inu woke this morning
 Reviewed By: Lena17  On: December 04, 2004 07:59 PST
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Good luck with that housefull of kids!! lol I know your pain. Anyways, great chapters. I can see how Kagome is wallowing in embarrissment from those dreams. ANyways, keep up the good work!! lol
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