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Reviewed By: Hopeful_dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to thank you once again for telling me the link so i could continue reading this story! I think your plot is endlessly creative and the original characters well thought out and developed. Your fic is a pleasure to read and i will continue doing so!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 22, 2005 16:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter as usual...They seem to be getting alittle closer huh? I think Ryo will fall down and passout when she does finally give in and give it a try...LOL!! See ya next time!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, that was awesome! I know this is probably my fault but I can't get this story on animespiral! But I think it's my fault. Anyway, great chapter and perty please update soon! TTFN! :0)
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Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooohhh awesome!! OK, I know this is probably my fault but I can't get Purity3 on aniespiral so I came here. Anyway, great chaprer and I hope you update soon!!! TTFN!
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Reviewed By: Shiga On: March 22, 2005 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I couldn't find this story on teh usual sites I go to so I stalked you here =P Are you not writing on animespiral and adultfanfiction anymore or did I just type it out wrong? Anyay doesn't matter, at least I found the fic! Awesome job!! Keep up the good work! I thought it was a really cute chapter!
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Reviewed By: Washuu Ogami On: March 22, 2005 14:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo,another heart-stuttering chapter--I know what it is to wade in a wintry creek (chasing after my stupid niece who wouldn't listen) in isolated, snowy woods, and the veracity of your writing shivered me timbers all over again!! Oi,is it the mating bond that's softening Nezumi infinitessimally to Ryo, or her own buried longings? Oh, Sienna's ride home w/Nezumi on her 'cycle--LOLROTF, I just LOVED the confrontation! Hadn't expected Ryo, baka moi; heh, Grrrrrrrreat scene! Oi, is it only when Ryo's enraged that he'll suddenly 'recall' more advantages to the blood exchange? LOLROTF. You are such the MASTER at drawing at the suspense here 'tween the two of them. :) You'd also left to the readers' determinations as to whether or not Sesshomaru *knew* of Sienna's mode of transportation, and was he hoping Ryo would chastise his mate, as is his perceived duty and right for endangering them both? ;) ;) ;) Love this!
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 14:37 CST
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Heh, Nezumi zinged Ryo again. Her "Date who? -. . . all the guys I knew were just a little too much like you." That was a hit...maybe below the belt, but definitely a hit. And even Ryo knows he has it coming so he just braces himself and takes it. How can you argue the truth? Life's lessons are never easy.
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Title: question please sue
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 14:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter I am beginning to understand that nez view of herself is more masculine than femine. Am I right? Also, if nez decides that she doesnt want to be his mate or with him does that mean that ryo will die or can he be with someone else? hope you will answer this because I am not too clear on the mating thing. thanks J
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 22, 2005 12:54 CST
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Poor Ryo. To quote Farscape, "why so difficult?" BTW I love the names you've chosen for the characters in this fic (particularly the nicknames). "Ryo" is my fav but "Nez" is a close second. Thanks for the chapter.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 22, 2005 12:07 CST
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I really, really like this fic - I think this is one of my favorites from you. That being said I have to wonder about some of your reviewers. From the small answers I can see after the names listed I am led to assume that people are still harping on about the "marking" thing. First I have to say that I can see your point - with the care that inuyasha shows kagome for things like a small cut on the finger - I find it very hard to believe he could willingly hurt her no matter how important. That being said - why are people arguing this with you? I understand asking questions for clarification or general interest but arguing a point on a personal fiction is beyond me. I have to wonder if these people write authors of the physical books that they read as well ... I have heard of authors who have had fans argue some point with them and I always feel the desire to slap them on the back of the head and say "you realize this is fiction right?" If someone doesn't like the way your story works there is nothing stopping them from imagining it differently or writing their own piece of fiction that follows their "rules". I honestly am having trouble grasping people's problem with just accepting that this is the author's (your) world ... I would love for someone to explain this to me because I obviously can't grasp whatever it is that is driving these other people.
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Reviewed By: LadyBarrista [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 11:38 CST
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Great chapter Sue. The visualization produced by the line... 'He took a corner a little sharply. Nezumi leaned toward him, her arms tightening around his waist though she didn't comment. It took him all of ten seconds to figure out that the faster he drove, the tighter Nezumi's arms gripped him, and the tighter her arms were, the closer her body pressed against his back'... caused my glasses to fog up. Boy I wish I could trade places with Nezumi!
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in. Ever. On: March 21, 2005 18:32 CST
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Beautiful insight. Very nicely done. For a second i was confused and thought that this was happening in the near past, if that makes sense. Like a few days ago.. and I was like "how could Ryo's parents ground him? Isn't he adult enough yet?" hahahha. And then I hit my self across the face for being so stupid. hehe. This added a nice layer in the relationship of the two. Great job. Can't wait for more!--Aitu
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Title: Well now..
Reviewed By: Inca On: March 21, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well my dear, you have yet again won me over. I have been an avid reader, and been slightly afraid to review (No logical reason behind this AT ALL) It's amazing really, how even in you heart you know that the story will turn out well, but you still hope. Nez will give him the time of day...the second she realizes what it is. Right? RIGHT?! I feel like smacking Ryo, I really do. ANd a barbell? A Barbell? A ring would have some vestiages of taste but a barbell... I'm surprised InuYasha didn't clice it off. Ah the pwoer of love... do make you do amazingly stupid things. Write on!
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Title: Very realistic
Reviewed By: adamile [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi sue, well once again, you have a hit of a story! Although I love ALL of your stories, this one I feel is the best because to me a lot of the plot hits real life situations. How many times have we loved and trusted someone only to be hurt by them in the end. I wouldnt be surprised that Nez doesn't tell him to "go away" because really how can someone believe a person like Ryo. Mated or not, she knows him like a book so I dont blame her for not trusting him. thanks for another great Chapter. J
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Title: loving it!
Reviewed By: fudge On: March 21, 2005 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait 'till you update. Please do it soon Your story just keeps getting better and better. Great job!
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