| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 15:29 CST
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Wow. I love what DV wrote. But "ditto" would be kinda cheating, huh? Okay... I really like how this chapter shows the different sides of Ryo. Yeah, he knows he's charming and can pour it on when he wants to (ala his teasing of Nez and telling her that she kiss him if she wants LOL!). Obviously, these are the kind of moves that he's been using on the ladies all these years. I'm glad that Nez doesn't give in to that (good thing she knows him so well!), as I think it does cheapen their relationship. But then we see Ryo really thinking about this major event in their history and it shows just how much he cares and has always cared for her (breaking up with girls over Nez - big clue!). Nez isn't just the next conquest - there's so much more there. I think it's going to come down to how they can establish a new level of trust between them. Nez has always trusted Ryo as a friend, but trusting her heart to him is a whole different issue. I'm not sure that Ryo fully understands that yet. By the same token, Ryo hasn't yet been able to trust his vulnerable side to her yet. I can see it coming, though, and I'm loving the journey. :)
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 12:31 CST
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I got all choked up at Ryo's remorse at his thoughtlessness that got Nez hurt. He's finally having to think about more than the next bootie call and it's slow going for him. He hasn't had much practice at really thinking things through. When he considers each old thing that is reminded to him, things that he had said or done, the odds against him just keeps growing higher and more seemingly insurmountable...it's a good thing that he has his father's stubborness. Anyone else would have probably given up by now. But this is Nezumi/Deidre, his best friend...long time best friend...meaning as much to him, if not more than, his own twin. She's held his heart even when he didn't know it...and she kept it safe for him. Maybe thats why all the others never made an impression on him. His heart was given to a little girl on the playground so easily it went unnoticed. His confession that he'd broken up with more than one girl over his and Nez's friendship showed that, even back then, she was first in his mind and heart. Now he needs to find a way to make it up to her...for making her feel second-best as a girl. Maybe that's one of the reasons she accepted her role as 'one of the guys' so easily. She couldn't hang out with her cool silver-haired friend if she was gossiping and trying on make-up like most girls her age. Then when his eye started roving, she felt like she couldn't compete with that, so she'd stay his friend. -- o.O Gee...that was a little long-winded. LOL
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 21, 2005 12:08 CST
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I think he understands now what their shared history means to their relationship. I love that whole leaning over her and calling her by her name... Ha! He's trying so hard to let her come to him... *sigh*
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Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 11:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so sweet! I like your mating ritual, personally. The bite is a bit dumb since youkai don't get scars, there would be no mark.
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Reviewed By: blzzrd53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 00:44 CST
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And I'm Back. I keep getting the feeling you have plans for that piercing that we don't know about yet. Like there's going to be something more to it that just continuing comedy at Ryo's expense (though I do love the laughs at his expense).
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Reviewed By: Ladyblade not logged in On: March 18, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, this is getting interesting as usual. My grats on keeping the story full of twists and turns. Nez seems like a pretty level headed woman... when Ryo's not around lol and even then she keeps things in perspective. I think her terms will be something reasonable should she decide to actually set terms at this point in time. *shrug* just my observation though. Again, good work and maybe you can mention a good fic or two to read? lol I saw you enjoy reading others' works, especially when you find a really good one.
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 18, 2005 18:32 CST
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I love the way that they interact! Everything seems so very natural and realistic! *sigh* I am curious. As of yet all the girls your characters have "ended up with" were virgins. I was wondering if a "mating" could happen if the other human partner wasn't a virgin? (Don't get me wrong - I personally like the way that you and your characters put a lot of value and thought into it before they take that step but I was wondering if it was a requirement even for the humans ...) Have fun this weekend!
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Reviewed By: Kyonarai(nsi) On: March 18, 2005 16:15 CST
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I hope nezumi says yes, I mean he already spends most of his time there anyways right?
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 16:03 CST
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Okay...So Ryo's come to his senses? I don't quite understand: Has he realized that he's like-liked her (sorry, couldn't help myself)for a long time? Or is it that he's doing the mature bit for once and doing the right thing in giving an honest relationship a go?
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: March 18, 2005 14:46 CST
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Another great chapter. Thanks! I don't know how one gets to be a beta but I'd be honored to help out if you'd like. My MM id is laptawenzell if that helps.
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Title: .....
Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you keep incorporating the nipple ring into the story! lol Hilarious... Ryo is a sneaky one. I wonder if Nez will take the bait...?
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Title: chappies 8-11 ::cringe::
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 12:37 CST
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Piercings, coats no longer not for loan, piggyback rides, picnics, flowers... lol, he is trying hard for her isn't he? It's amazing how quickly Ryomaru has completely accepted this situation. Deirdre IS his mate, and he's trying to be a good one. I personally find his efforts adorable. Unfortunatly for Ryo, he's relied on Nez just being there for so long that he forgets how much of his not so good side she's seen. I think I'd have a bit of trouble trusting him as well--I really can't blame her. It's sweet that Ryo got a kiss in there... the setting Nez of on a trip to Babble-on was hilarious and so NOT what we'd expect of her. So she doesn't like blood much, hmmm? Could be interesting if she found out more about Ryo's job by seeing him injured, ne? Ryo moving in somehow makes that seem like a very real possibility, lol. Wonderful chapters Sue, these two characters are so incredibly lovable, it's just amazing how quickly you draw us all in and make us love them.
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Reviewed By: Suze-nsi On: March 18, 2005 12:13 CST
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::chuckle:: Well, that was fun! The previous description of the twins as "tussling puppies" just seems so appropriate! LOL (I also love how they always manage to drag Toga into the fray, too). I find them both endearing and exasperating at the same time. :) And I guess Sesshy realizes that he didn't get such a bad deal in Toga after all! LOL!!! Anyway, I guess we'll have to see what conditions (if any) Nez comes up with for Ryo's return. Hmmmm....
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 12:10 CST
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Hehe, I just reviewed and here comes another "alert" in my mailbox. -- You had me rolling again with the Nipple Noogiefest at the doorway. Toga had no warning at all; opened the door, halted by bodies blocking the way, and *twist* in stereo. And I about died at Sesshoumaru's reaction to the 'ring'...LMAO! -- Ah, bribery...the Harley for squatter's rights. Poor Nez is so confused. Dare she believe him now? Or will her memories of his past behavior be too strong for her to overcome? -- Loving it (as if you didn't know! LOL)
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: March 18, 2005 12:05 CST
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Ah, entertaining, as always. I was just waiting for someone to interupt Nez's nipple squeezing. And you're right, the piercing suits him... there's something irrisitable about that bad boy image... What exactly? Not really sure-- I think I read once that women go for the bad boys because they think that they will be the ones to tame them. Ha, that hasn't worked yet in my experience, haha. But yes, loves it. I think that I can see Ryo going out to get the other one pierced as well? lol. Maybe if he fucks up bad sometime he might think that getting another piecing makes up for the bad? haha Or maybe he'd just go out to do it for fun, hehe. Oh the possibilities! te hehe. Well Sue, love this story. It's so utterly fabulous that I cannot even express it. Great job!!! ---Aitu
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