| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyashasluverforever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, Kichiro REALLY fuched up this time. Bad boy! Why I adda. . . . . . . . . . . . Well. . . I have to say. . . they DO make a good couple. .. . . Oh, there I go again. . . *dramatic sigh* I'm such a romance freak. I guess it runs in my blood. . . .or at least. . . . MY actual blood. Oh well, who cares about me? Love the chapter!
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Reviewed By: foamyfan15010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. Not at all what I was expecting, but not in a bad way. I can't wait to see how it ends...
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Reviewed By: DaNi_CHaN [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just luuuuuuuuuuuuv your stories... can i say anything else? the way you make things unfold is incredible!!! can't wait to see where this one is going... ^-^
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 13:21 CST
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Okay ... the paper could wait for 4 chapters. I must say this has the beginnings of a *really* amusing story!!! I love it!!
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Reviewed By: Deirdre On: March 09, 2005 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to agree with tinkerbell-nsi here. Poor Nez. So out of place with the girly-girls. I can't wait to see how the rest of this is going to turn out. Ryo has a lot of kissing up to do!
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 06:01 CST
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my goshers Sue, you've done it again! you've made me fall in love with another one of your stories, and now I shall have to read it until its finished, and has a sequel :P, then read that xD after being on MM for over a year, I shall have to say that you are by far my most favorite author **gives her a Inuyasha plushie donned in a sequin version of his clothes(SHINY XD)** I can't wait for more in this story, I see some good and bad times ahead. . . and a twist of some sort :P you never fail to please
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Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 05, 2005 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! How funny!!! The situtations are incredible, and I can't wait for more...Thanks again and again for what you give us to read....You ARE a talent to behold!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-nsi On: March 05, 2005 19:40 CST
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These two sound almost like "The Honeymooners" to me, or Fred and Wilma. I wish they would just be honest with each other. I think it was kind of mean of Sierra and Gin to make Nez go out to lunch someplace she was obviously not comfortable with. I'm sure they weren't trying to be mean but still, they should have thought it out more. So far, I feel pretty sorry for her.
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:37 CST
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Okay, I may feel like castrating Inu-Yasha's boys right about now (good gods....) but I have to admit, the banter is pretty funny and it's hilarious when Toga is added as well! Poor Nezumi. I'd be pissed too!
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Reviewed By: suzehowe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 17:23 CST
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Oh boy...these two definitely have a long road ahead of them. I was prepared to feel for Nezumi, given that she had NO clue what she let herself in for, but I'm finding myself feeling for Ryo, too. They both just seem so in over their heads. Poor kids! This strikes me as being very similar to teens who find themselves pregnant, you know? It's that same sort of situation where they don't fully understand the consequences of their actions until it's too late, and now they have to do a lot of growing up in a short period of time. Whoo... Can't wait to see how this is going to turn out!
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Reviewed By: cynbad146 On: March 05, 2005 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Boy, have I been waiting for this story to continue! Ryo reminds me of his ole man; Nezumi reminds me of Sango, sort of, mixed with a little bit of Kagome's tenderness. I can not wait to see which direction this story takes. Hot head versus hot head. Ugly duckling turn beautiful swan. Testiness and sexual angst. Lots of possibilities. Makes for an interesting concoction. (Hey, did I spell any of that right?) Thank you, Sueric, for all your wonderful work. I'll be checking in. Roger, Dodger, and Out, Cynbad146
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Reviewed By: da baby beta On: March 05, 2005 16:04 CST
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hmmm... guess neither of them really have realized what they've been sucked into yet... I wonder how long it will take for Ryomaru to start actually communicating and understanding how ovrwhelmed Deirdre feels and I wonder how long it will take her to start really listening to him. Will the girls of the family try to help the romance develop smoothly (aka meddle ^_~)? How long will it take Nez to find out about the rogue demon hunting? Will Ryo learn to cook?? ^_^
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Title: yeh
Reviewed By: Kikyou_104 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 15:54 CST
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so are you going to start updating this fic regularly cuz i really like this one....actually i really like all of them..lol...well great job keep it up
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Title: Yay!!
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:53 CST
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*rubs hands together gleefully* Oooh goody...more Ryo torture...although it looks like Nez is taking a few hits too. I wonder if Ryo ever gets the guts to ask her what she wants, will she be honest about it? God I love this story...don't know why. Maybe it's because I'm hooked on Inu & Kag's "little angels"...their depravity has so much potential for entertainment it's addictive. -- Great Chapter and I will eagerly await more!!
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Title: RYO!!!!
Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have I told you HOW much I adore Ryo and this story?? I cannot stop laughing! Poor clueless Nez has a LONG road ahead of her, doesn't she? She so can't believe that it was his first time...not to say that I blame her. But to find out all this stuff about your best friend, someone you thought you KNEW...that's an adjustment in itself. Let alone all the changes ahead of them in their relationship, all because...he couldn't keep it in his pants and she just wanted ONE night... Ah...the webs we weave...and you weave them BEAUTIFULLY!!! The scene where he brought back dinner was SO cute! I loved seeing their interaction...the proof that they really do have a close and strong friendship to base their relationship off of.
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