| "Purity 3: Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 1105 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aitu- not signed in On: January 16, 2005 00:51 CST
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hahahahahahahhahaha. "shit" indeed, Ryo. Ohhh, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction. Hopefully you will tease us later by adding even more chapter. Does reverse psychology work? If so: No matter what you do-- do not add more chapters. ;)If no, pretend that I never wrote that last sentence. loves it, loves it, loves it! I can't get enough, hehehe. Fabulous job! Can't wait for more. bye! --Aitu
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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: January 16, 2005 00:50 CST
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Toga had told him that he'd wake up mated one day and not know her name.. So at least he knows her. what a baka
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Title: TASK-- better review than sari-15
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 00:11 CST
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::grumbles:: There was no ignoring going on... no DELIBERATE ignoring anyhow... my little sister called and she was upset about something at home so =P She gets attention too. And another =P as I already finish Rakehell. And you weren't supposed to post this yet anyways, lol. What a shocker! Ryo! The better behaved of the two (IMO anyways) has accidentally mated his best friend... goooood job pup. Leave Japan with her while you can still breathe and walk, rotflmao, cause when your parents get a hold of you...
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Reviewed By: Sari-15 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:35 CST
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IGNORING you.....This beta resents that remark (but doesn't stop her reading) I EVEN took a break from Rakehell to reread this AGAIN....I mean....it IS a lemon and all. But I was at SUCH a BAD spot to stop and switch stories at....I mean Adam and Jericho just met and fought....and now they started to make out....and you updated P3.........YOU ARE EVAAAAAAAAL!!!!!! So......how the hell are Yasha and Gome gonna take this 'mating'???? MUHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHA I have a feeling poor Ryo has a LONG road ahead of him...with NO help from his parents....since he got his baka self into this situation. MUAHAHHAHAHAHAH brilliant!!
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 15, 2005 22:34 CST
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Wow, a lemon so early. I was prepared to wait a good long time for one. I was wondering about the whole mating thing during the first chapter. Yikes! This is a really nice setup for what promises to be an interesting story! What a great way to complicate a relationship! I loved when Ryo was hoping maybe his brother had robbed a bank. Heh, been there - well sorta. Ugh, my brother was always too smart to get caught. Great sibling but absolutely useless as a distraction.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:34 CST
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YES!!!!
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Title: Me again....
Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:34 CST
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Just one more thing... something tells me this is going to be one big oops and a helluva hangover in the morning! Just had to add that! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, I just love your summary! And I can't wait to see how you continue to torture Inu's naughty bad twins! Something tells me that someone is going to get what's coming to him. Can't wait!!!! ~pagan_sedjou
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: January 15, 2005 20:35 CST
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Good start. Looking forward to more. Sorry about your computer!!! How frustrating!
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Title: mmmm, the hentai betas favourite bad boys
Reviewed By: angelica incarnate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 12:26 CST
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I agree with sari-15 in that our discussions involving Ryo and Kich are always beyond entertaining if unrealistic, lol. I can't believe Ryo is doing this and doesn't even realize he's drunk. ::sigh:: The old man will NOT like this and Kagome...... well, I'd run away and never come out of hiding personally. Good to know Toga and Sierra get to return to Japan--at least for a visit, lol who knows if it's permenant. I know all will end well with them, but I wondered where they'd end up. Even knowing what's coming, I can't wait to read it because the edits are sooooo fun =)
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 17:00 CST
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Wow...bad-bad little boys. By the gods, I can't *believe* they're Inu-Yasha's boys! I mean, sure the attitude is there but where the hell did they pick up that womanizing? Hmm...Miroku's revenge from across time, i suppose....LOL.
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Reviewed By: Akihana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 12:25 CST
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Well, i think that gives away what happens with Toga and Sierra...Oh well. I don't really mind. Poor Nezumi. Baka Ryo. I love the story though. Out of curiosity, how were Toga and Sierra there? Well, happy birthday, and I wish you happinness. I think i misspelled that, but, whatever.
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Reviewed By: Jaxomruth@aol.com On: January 14, 2005 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am always amazed by your writing skills. This is the third story that you have going right now. How are you going to keep them all straight? I can't wait to read the next chapter. You did give us a little spoiler when you referred to Sierra as Toga's mate. I guess that means that they are going to get together in the end. I can't wait to see what Fluffy will say. I read about your computer breaking down last night. Bummer. Mine is in the shop right now too so I am having to rely on school computers to keep up with your posting. I am sorry you won't be able to post as often (you have really spoiled your readers by posting so often). I look forward to your next posting.
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Reviewed By: GgBg (Not Signed In) On: January 14, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though you've sucked me in with this story, I can wait seeing as I love P2 and have been waiting on pins and needles for you to add more to it. I actually think that you enjoy torturing us your poor readers by deliberately writing amazingly fantastic stories for us to fall pray too while putting your others on hold. Bad, bad authoress, don't make us come after you (ha, ha). Great story Sueric, I will add this to my favorites and keep my eyes peeled for it.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 01:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so far. I'm guessing that somethings going to happen between the two but then Ryo might forget? Just guessing. Sorry you had a crummy birthday, but it might seem silly but Happy Birthday (Is your birthday January 13th? Because if it is, its the same day as mine) So happy Birthday. ^__^
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