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Reviewed By: Ladyblade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 20:47 CST
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*chuckle* Oh my, body piercing... if Ryo actually goes through with it, what will he pierce? A gold hoop or stud in his ear would look cute. Argh maties! lol bad joke i'm sure. I can't really see him piercing anything else, but then again he's not my character either. The Ryo you picture could very well end up piercing his nose for all I know. Now a tattoo... hehe I won't go there. Sorry to see that you're not feeling well (if i read your A/N right). I find apple slices and vanilla carmel dip to be a good pick me up sometimes. ^_^ I'd just like to also say that I agreed with your response to the reviewer who called Ryo and Nez's mating "glorified rape". There was nothing to even remotely suggest that. Ryo is a baka for forgeting, but such can be the consequences of too much alcohol. Enough of my senseless rambling, good work as always. I enjoy it more and more with each chapter. Now if only I could one day acquire such a faithful following of reviewers :)
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Reviewed By: Zatanna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 20:42 CST
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Keep them coming. I really love how quickly you post new chapters. You make your characters so real, it's great. I really giggled when Nezumi said Body Piercing. Heehee. I wonder where that will be....
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Reviewed By: Chokolatte [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! wonderful story as always. Um, why is everyone flipping out so badly on Ryo. If he blanked out, doesn't that mean that his Youkai was taking over, like it did in the manga/anime to Inuyasha? If Ryo's youkai chose her, there was really nothing he could do about it, it would have happened sooner or later, like with Toga. why doesn't his family realize that?
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Reviewed By: kyonarai(nsi) On: March 14, 2005 20:07 CST
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OMG! 'body peircing'! *laughs histerically* God I adore this story! Must...stop...laughing... *just fell out of chair and got wierd looks from other family members* damn it! I did it again, I have got to stop falling out of my chair laughing! I did it on the last chapter of purity 2 when sesshomaru found out about the calendar! GREAT STORY! (I could never say that enough times)
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Reviewed By: Akihana(too lazy to sign in) On: March 14, 2005 19:40 CST
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I like this fic a lot. Why do you need your feelings to calm down? (if you don't mind me prying) I personally agree with oyu on the topic of rape. I never thought of thi story as rape. I really like it. I love your original characters from Purity. Nez and Ryo really have some issues, don't they? Being friends really is helping them though, i think. Imagine if they didn't know each other very well? i know the one time i had a crush on a friend I wouldn't have pulled through without his support. Excellent story, i love it, and till next time.
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Title: WTF????
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy(not logged in) On: March 14, 2005 18:33 CST
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There's no way that could be seen as rape. That was just nuts. Rape is nothing like that, that was sexual tension with an oppisite sex friend breaking. And an amazingly real account of it too. I love the sword!!! It rocks, there's no beating both Inu and Sessy! Question on hanyou: Is is cannon that all hanyou are human on the new moon? I thought that was just Inuyasha because it's a secret. If they were all human it would be widely known. Did you just decide to make it genetic?
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Title: Sometimes I wonder...
Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
M'kay, I haven't left a review in a long while because I have had nothing constructive to say. I still do not. First off, wonderful fic. Ya gotta love Ryo and Kich. And I do. So much so that they have taken up residence in my subconcious. For example: Last night, I had an odd dream with Kichiro in it. I do not remember what HAPPENED exactly, but it was insane, non-sensical, and I was a werewolf who ran around in wolf form barking. But this still means that I had a dream with Kichiro in it, and he had a ponytail for some reason. This means either A) I need some help B) You have created entirely too vivid characters for the saftey of the general public, or C) All of the above. Like I said, nothing whatsoever constructive to say, but that you have managed to created characters so rich and vivid that I have dreams about them as if they were real people. *applause*
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Reviewed By: fruitcake On: March 14, 2005 16:18 CST
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heh.
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 14, 2005 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off let me tell you this story Rocks!! And I thought "Met" was just as outstanding as the rest...It's sad to think someone has nothing better to do but destroy a good story with ficious words... I was always told if you don't like don't read it...Well I'm done venting now, so I'll see ya next chapter as always!! thanks to you I have something to read and enjoy...
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Title: Sometimes I wonder...
Reviewed By: ThePioden [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
M'kay, I haven't left a review in a long while because I have had nothing constructive to say. I still do not. First off, wonderful fic. Ya gotta love Ryo and Kich. And I do. So much so that they have taken up residence in my subconcious. For example: Last night, I had an odd dream with Kichiro in it. I do not remember what HAPPENED exactly, but it was insane, non-sensical, and I was a werewolf who ran around in wolf form barking. But this still means that I had a dream with Kichiro in it, and he had a ponytail for some reason. This means either A) I need some help B) You have created entirely too vivid characters for the saftey of the general public, or C) All of the above. Like I said, nothing whatsoever constructive to say, but that you have managed to created characters so rich and vivid that I have dreams about them as if they were real people. *applause*
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Reviewed By: serendith (NSI) On: March 14, 2005 15:59 CST
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I am curious - is Nez unsure of herself or Ryo? If it is herself then is it because of her childhood with her father? Is it something that is going to be gone over later in the story? I must say I am curious. When Ryo talks about never having to explain anything to her - I can understand that because she seems to know and understand him ... but I get the feeling he is not as aware of her and the internal conflict she is going through.
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Reviewed By: tinkerbell-not signed in On: March 14, 2005 15:57 CST
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Okay, these two drive me crazy. They take one step forward and two steps back. When are they ever gonna talk out their issues. I think they have the potential to be the cutest couple yet.
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Reviewed By: foamyfanpa15010 On: March 14, 2005 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm, things are heating up... :o) I wonder if Ryo knows what he's gotten himself into...? lol I just love your stories, they're so well written. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Reviewed By: Suze (too lazy to sign in) On: March 14, 2005 14:08 CST
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O.O You scared me for a second there...I thought they might end up having sex on Ryo's human night and we all know what that leads to! Actually...um...I'm assuming that his parents went over the hanyou birds and birds with him - they did, didn't they? And yes, crawling men are VERY sexy. :)
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Title: Purity 3: Forever
Reviewed By: LadyMoonHawke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following along avidly since Chronicles (sorry to take so long to say something) and to be franks, I'm enjoying your Inuyasha fic very much. I'm very sorry to hear you got so much flak over Metamorphosis. What made it different also made it special, and I found myself realy liking it by the end. I'm getting quite a kick out of the Purity spin-offs as well. Poor Ryo's in quite a bind, isn't he? And the mutual lack of communication skills between himself and Nezumi seems to be leading up to a marvelous comedy of errors, much different in tone than the heartache and angst of Purity 2. Anyway, I just want to say don't give up, even if it seems like all the reviewers are against you. It's YOUR plot. Do it YOUR way.
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