| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 21:53 CST
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Wow, that was a great chapter. Sooo sad. But very well done, considering Vegeta's problems with attachment. I thought you captured that very well especially considering you gave us a glimpse throughout the story of his more caring side. In the end, that's who Vegeta is and it must have crushed you to have to write him being so cold to Bulma :( But like I said, excellent. All in all, a truly great story that I will miss. I can't believe it's over! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next :) |
Reviewed By: Tessa On: January 29, 2003 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Blinks* It's...over? After all this time of reading and looking forward to new chapters? *Sniffles* Part of me is so upset that it's over, and the other part is so pleased that I was blessed enough to read such a phenominal story such as yours. I've been following this fic since it aired on FanFiction.net, and have been reading hungrily ever since. You have such wonderful writing skills; keep writing your stories. You shouldn't leave any of your fans hanging. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. *Hugs* Take care!
TessMort@aol.com
or
Sorna@dbzmail.com |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 12:03 CST
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Perfection my dear. Pure perfection. I must admit, I did't want this to end. you accomplished what so many writers cannot. You make the readers connect with the characters. You make us feel for them. That in itself is an feat to celebrate. Anyone can create a character, or use one already made... but you gave them a soul. A life of their own. From one writer to another, I salute you.
Aa' menle nauva calen ar' ta hwesta e' ale'quenle, tenna' telwan |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 11:34 CST
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Noooooooooo it is over?!!! I loved it, you took two anime characters and made them your own and wrote a beautiful story. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(wipes tears) I absolutely loved this story.
I'm sad to see it end, but it had to sometime, right?
I just wanted to say that you're a very talented writer and artist.
I can't wait to check out your future endeavors! |
Reviewed By: Typicalteen On: January 23, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it, you've got a great plot, the story line stays strong and consistant and you are very...descriptive with the scenes. I love everything about your fanfic, you did a great job and can't wait for the final chapter...
Sincerely...A fan |
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 13:56 CST
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That was great! I fell behind in reading so it was nice to not have to wait on the cliffhanger, lucky for me :) I loved the ritual and the emotions that encompassed it. Beautiful job. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 13, 2003 02:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My Kami, that was so beautiful. Fantastically written as always. Damn good lemon too ^_~. I can't believe that it's coming to a close after well over a year. Bravo girl, you never cease to amaze me ^_^. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD!!! This story just keeps getting better and better!!! I LOVE IT!!!
I love the way you portray Vegeta BTW-and I'm very picky about him (even though I screw him up mysdelf sometimes). |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 11, 2003 20:39 CST
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Oh wow! I really love this story and that last chapter was unbelievable! Can't wait til you update again, although it will sad that it has to end. |
Reviewed By: lexi On: January 10, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god totally amazing. you should be publish or sumthin |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings On: January 06, 2003 16:05 CST
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Ember! Why oh why must you leave it there? You just gotta finish this one up soon. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2003 21:20 CST
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Noooooooo it is ending , wow the tail chapter was beautiful. |
Reviewed By: Tessa On: December 23, 2002 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I'm really enjoying this Fanfiction story of yours so much. I've read all of your stories before, but this is by far the best work you've ever done. Every time I get on-line, I check here to see if you've updated. You are so evil for leaving us in such suspense! I hope it's Lemonade time again. Please update soon, I implore you. It'd be like a Christmas present for all your loyal Readers/Reviewers if you'd get it out before Christmas. *Puppy dog eyes* Please? Update soon!
~Tess |
Reviewed By: Susan On: December 12, 2002 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gotta love Bulma's mom. Sweet, kind and completely clueless. I also enjoyed the interaction between V/B and Kandai. Looks like Veggie was rather generous when giving her some of his power. And yes, you are evil for leaving us in suspense over what's gonna happen next. Could it be lemonade time ^_~? Guess I'll have to wait to find out. Great job Ember!! |
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