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"What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ]
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 Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 05, 2002 12:10 CST
Comment/Review:
That was good! I was waiting for a darker chapter to appear. My only real complaint is that you don't post often enough! ^_^ I love reading your work!! Je ne!
 Reviewed By: Carbunkl [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 04, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, Vegeta isn't the only screwed up one, they both are.
 Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee  On: March 03, 2002 19:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was sad and touching. (sniffle) That was his mom wasn't it? Poor Vegeta. That poor baby...
I hope you write more soon.
 Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 02, 2002 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice chapter. This one has been written in more common english therby making is easier to read. I think the borders between now and then arent that clear, and I miss Bulma, but i think its certainly a very good chapter... and i like them dark!
 Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44  On: March 02, 2002 01:25 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW!! this was awesome!! such creativity my girl! it was VERY good, i'd have to say one of the BEST chapters yet! definately DEFINATELY can't wait to read the next one! i'll talk to ya soon dude! ^_^
 Reviewed By: Susan  On: March 02, 2002 00:30 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Thank you for reminding me why I enjoyed seeing Freeza get his just deserts from Trunks. What a bastard. The baby part really broke my heart. I hope you update soon. Great chap.
 Reviewed By: catgirl26  On: March 01, 2002 20:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Oooh! Great chapter! That poor baby though...feel sorry for it...sorry for Vegeta too...I'd write more, but I'm in a bit of a hurry, but great chapter! Can't wait for more!
 Reviewed By: Kathy  On: February 28, 2002 18:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Please! Please! Please! Write another chapter!! I'm completely hooked into the fic! I really want to know what is going to happen next!
 Reviewed By: angeliz  On: February 24, 2002 19:00 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a kickin mad HOTT fanfic, i absolutely loved it!!!! u've gotta get out some more chapters, i'm dying of impatience here!!! lol, plz!!!!! this is interesting, and really cute, not going overboard, but enough to keep u on ur toes, ur really talented!!!
 Reviewed By: Arista Pendragon  On: February 17, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wonderful! Once i start reading i can't stop O.o;
Everytime i arrive to the last chapter done i can't wait to read the next one. I love it!!!!!
*hugs the fanfic* this is my favorite B&V fanfic ever!!!! ^________^ *thumbs up* ((i wish i had more then two thumbs)) Keep it going girl! i'm closely watching for the next chapter. hehehe
*Arista Pendragon*
 Reviewed By: Vegetas Gurl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2002 17:15 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow Maan! This is sooooooo cool! I luv u're fanfics ember but i have to say this is my favourite one! I can't wait to find out what hapens next! u have to tell me! tell me woman! pllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
 Reviewed By: Kris  On: February 14, 2002 12:10 CST
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GAH!! Don't end there!! You have to post more soon. I'm trying to figure out Bulma's train of thought here but it's just not working. Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: crystalnight  On: February 13, 2002 18:40 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS!!! this has got to be the BEST fanfic i have EVER read in my ENTIRE LIFE!!! holy crapola! i love vegeta! i love bulma! i love bulma AND vegeta!! oh my goodness, you need to update!!! and soon!! i love it! its brilliant! wonderful! a masterpiece! im SO excited about this fic, its what keeps me going through the day! you have to see me in school, all i talk to my friends about is "the bestest best fic in the world that i have to read tonight"! (im a slow reader, so it takes me some nights to read) but OH MY KAMI! this is just amazing! i love it! i cant wait for more!
 Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 13, 2002 01:09 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
EEEEEEPPPP... man I hate it when a really good fic ends up being incomplete.. how am I supposed to sleep now *hehehe* this is one of the best fics I've read on the site yet! it's not often you read a fic, where the story evolves so much that it takes on it's own life.. you've achieved that, and I'm now here dying slowly at 2am.. ;) I can't wait to read the next chapter! (I can't rate grammer cause I suck at it, but nothing has screamed out at me) so I'll be watching for more chapters, try not to keep me dying here for to long *lol*
 Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 11, 2002 14:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now this chapter is a mystery to me. Please keep going.
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