| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: JadaKirin On: July 24, 2002 00:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story even when finished, will remain one of my real favorites...
This chapter was excellent.
Please don't let him torture himself for too much longer...it breaks my heart.
Jada |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2002 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
very kool |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awsome. I hope Vegeta wins. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 01:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
you know.. I'm thinking.. that sentance is not going to work... if you want to live.. no I think a better sentance would have been.. Turn off your scouter if you want to WIN.. then he might actually do it *HEHEHEH* |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 01:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRR!!!! Man how could you end it like that! man I've been waiting for an update and you end it like THAT!! hehehehe hurry up, I'm falling off the cliff to my death over here! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 20, 2002 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that chap was intense. You've got me at the edge of my seat now. Please update some more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 21:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
So this is what you were doing while I was gone! I like, I like A LOT! Keep it up and I'll talk to you soon! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 19, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an incredibly inventive way to get dr. briefs to communiacte with vegeta! and so detailed! awesome! |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Ember!
I reviewed this on ffnet already (seems the author update finally works:-)
Man I love this! The writing style is so fluid and instense.
Keep working on this and update soon! |
Reviewed By: lil debbie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yeah! An update! and it was so-o good!! |
Reviewed By: Darke Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Ember, you have no idea how long I've had this story bookmarked and I'm only now finally sitting down to read it! What the hell took me so blasted long?! This story is fantastic! You always take the time to review my own stories and I finally want to repay the favor. Keep up the incredible work! |
Reviewed By: Naomi On: July 12, 2002 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fics I have read yet. Keep up the good work, Ember, I can't wait for more!!! |
Reviewed By: JadaKirin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is such an incredible story...It's taken me two days to read all of it...but I love it!
Please hurry with the next chapter!
Jada |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Bulma dead! NO NO NO!
Update soon (yeah I know you already said you don't update fast, but I can dream can't I?)
Love this! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 07, 2002 21:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting turn of events. I really like how Vegeta took Bulma's words completely the wrong way. Aaah! How is he going to get out of this one?? Also liked Goku being his "life support" -- I'm sure he would freak out if he knew. :) |
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