| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very kool!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bubbles On: July 06, 2002 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is amazing!! Keep up the good work. I'm really enjoying your story so far. Love the plot and the character personalities!! ;o) |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 05:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Woman... I'll buy you a new damned keyboard, just GET THE NEW CHAPTER UP!!!
*sighs* Actually, I understand, my keyboard started doing that on my last update, and I just wanted to rip my hair out... I feel your pain...
But I STILL WANT MY UPDATE!!! NOW!!! |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2002 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... oh...
*grabs bat and takes a few practice swings*
That chapter was absolutely fabulous as usual... but Sister, you just don't know how bad I wanna getcha right now for that cliffie... again... your only chance is to get the new chapter up like RIGHT NOW.
*blinks*
*sighs* Alright, fine... I'll give you till tomorrow... *smiles sweetly and smashes closest object with bat before turning and walking calmly away* |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 20:22 CDT
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woohoo.. great chapter! a long wait but always worth it in the end :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 01, 2002 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my Kami what a chapter! I felt like I was sitting on the edge of a razor. This was brilliant and emotionally overwhelming. Bulma is alive YYYYYYAAAAAAYYYYYY!!! I hope Veggie beats the crap out of that asshole! Can't wait to see how the good doctor plans on communicating with Veggie. Sorry you're having probs with the keyboard. Mine started acting up 7 months ago. Got a GE, a great replacement at Target (of all places) and it's the best keyboard I've ever had. It was under $30 and well worth it. Update when you can. Bravo on this incredible chapter!! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaii!! Bulma is alive!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 01, 2002 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you're not alone in the keyboard's bein' a piece of crap, department. mine's doing it too. i don't even use capitalization anymore; it's just not worth the hassle! anywho, enough of our keyboard woes.
your last chapter was incredible! wow!!!!!! hee hee, now we're getting somewhere, dr. briefs has a plan! alright! hope bulma will be okay... |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: July 01, 2002 12:48 CDT
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WHOOOO!!! Dr. Briefs has a way to get Vegeta to realize what's going on!!! YAY!!! And I'm glad Vegeta can move now, and that the Elder isn't keeping him captive. I hope that damn elder gets his ass kicked!!! *giggle* Anyway, great chapter! I can't wait for the next one!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 11:49 CDT
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*Bows down before Ember and worships her for the goddess that she is* I swear it just keeps getting better! I gotta know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: TTrin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 10:58 CDT
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*stares* Unbelievable" You had me on the brink of my seat there, that was awesome!
Will Vegeta realize it's a game? And what kind of idea did Bulma's father have? That image about him startling Goku was hilarious!
I need more! :-D |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is great ember. Can't wait to read it all! |
Reviewed By: jewelsunicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2002 12:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
very kool !!! when will you write the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 11:03 CDT
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not funny...u ended it too soon. if there's anything i hate, itz cliffhangers, and u just made the biggest one i have ever read...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon. i'm going to go insane. no offense or anything...but ur updates are pretty slow...then again, so are mine, but whatever...please update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't let this be the end. I want both Bulma and Vegeta to live.
And it's okay if you are late for putting this chapter up. I'm taking forever to finish any of my fanfics. |
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