| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what happend to ryou. y he not in here, lol. oh well i wonder what itsuki ganna do. its a cliff hanger! haha. have ther been any and i have not notices ya. i bet im just to stupid it see em. keep the chaps comin plz and ty
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2005 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha finaly. took bakura long to do that. haha, love it, just love it. and sorry i have been gone for 6 days i went to see my grandma. haha so im back now. haha. keep those chaps comin cause ther good
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 28, 2005 19:43 CDT
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yay u updated, update soon lol that was kinda short, I wanna see what happened to Bakura-kun and Yomi-chan!!!
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Reviewed By: Dreamweaver77 On: July 28, 2005 19:15 CDT
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what happens to ryou? is he all alone!! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 22, 2005 20:48 CDT
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Aww poor Karasu lol he's gonna end up sexually frustrated. FINALLY! bakura stopped trying to get away, i was surprised that he said i love you though. Shorter than your other one...hint hint...Hope to see another one soon
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 12:26 CDT
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please update soon!
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Title: About time...
Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 17, 2005 23:12 CDT
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finally you put Bakura in there, poor Kura-chan, Yomi-kun hit him, what an asshole! lol Kurama's hilarious, you don't know how hard I laughed at his situation. Hmmm what's going on with itsuki, well update soon! p.s. Bakura is pissing me off, lol he needs to stop hurting himself and/or stop trying to escape o.O
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thi is like torture. lol. but you know my rants. haha. plz maddy get on msn im rally getin bord now. good chap and keep em comin
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Title: luv the new chapter
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 13:10 CDT
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keep up the good work....i always look forward to reading a new chapter from you
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Reviewed By: NubianQueen413 On: July 15, 2005 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Yay! i just read your last two chapter, about time you got some more Kurama/Karasu stuff in there, and what about Kura-chan and Yomi? Can u pwease put him in the next chappie? .:looks hopeful:. Well bye now
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 12:20 CDT
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i luv ur new chapters!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: IceAngel's Hikari On: July 15, 2005 04:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good I like it a lot but it needs more Ryou drama if you ask mE.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
did karasu do what i think he did. * oh karasu!* karasu:ya me:you do know what im ganna do to you now and y ,right? karasu: umm yes and..*gulp yes... lol good chap poor poor ryou oh ya and kurama.update soon so i can se what happens next. and see who kills who. lol oh ya and maddy im ganna be workin extra shives on sundays now so i wont be on as often any more but i will be on and plz dp up date. ty. haha. i have lots of stuff to tell ya.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe man i thot karasu would be out forever. o well.nothin i can do. and now i hate karasueven more if it possible for..for.. *gulp* kidding kurama. im so ganna kill em. *taked out hally* karasu: oh gods! me:you basterd, youl pay!. any hoo plz hurry and update soon. lol *chases karasu around*
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Reviewed By: Dreamweaver77 On: July 10, 2005 22:32 CDT
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poor ryou!!! another good chappie!!! please update soon.
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