| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragon of the west On: September 26, 2006 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad so I guess Bakura will be staying with Yomi? And update soon! and those other fics you got try to work on them too I'm exited to read those I have them on my favorite's list. And add a whole yaoi chapter if you can(I am NOT aperverted person)
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Title: fallen through
Reviewed By: carol2flute On: July 08, 2006 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!!!!!! please continue writing. i love the storyline and characters. but i must protest to how ryou left the story so quickly and how his stalker is now gone. can u some how bring him back like maybe ryou was about to leave, but then his stalker grabbed him just before he was going and a dummy was put in his place so everyone thought he left. and that would be perfect because the stalker gets what he wants no body knows that ryou is with him so no body can come for him. yeah! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEESEEE!!!!! *puppy eyes* i really like how the story is going. i really want to know how karasu is planning the two days with kurama.
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Reviewed By: Amine ^^ On: September 24, 2005 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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dam!!! ur storyz sooo freakin good!!! shyte! now im startin 2 wonder y havent i read dis fanfic b4... 2 tell u da truth... i did started it a few times b4 wen u started ur 1st couple of chapterz.... but then i go bored... wen i went 2 ff.net 2day... i read how interestin ur summary was so i went here 2 read it... now i couldnt stop... i'm onli up 2 chapter 56(i read it from 1-56 in a row... wit a couple of interuptionz...2day) i'll finish it all 2mro... :) =D
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Reviewed By: hellcat805 On: September 19, 2005 19:04 CDT
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yay for updating.
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Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2005 21:27 CDT
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please update soon!.....i loved ur last chapter
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 19:50 CDT
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Hooray! Another good chapter! Please update again! I love it. ^-^
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 01:08 CDT
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Another chapter yeah! Please update again very soon, I love this story! o^_^o
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Title: Love the new chapters!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2005 10:43 CDT
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good ideas for the new chapters! very intersting
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:20 CDT
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please update ur story!
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Reviewed By: qtchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2005 14:19 CDT
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This is a wonderful story! Please update right away! ^-^
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Title: Love It!
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2005 18:29 CDT
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I love it so far! Please update!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chap maddy keep em comin. i really like them. AND I LOOK FORWARD TO A GOOD STORY WHEN I COME BACK FROM A VEEY SAD DAY.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2005 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh god. poor ryou. what did karasu do..? not bad. that was funny in a weird twisted way.hmmm haha. hope you get more chaps out ill be waiting! so keep em comin
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 17:14 CDT
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On the new chapter, WOW. That was really good. Ryou's really freaked. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: cool_as ice On: August 02, 2005 16:30 CDT
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are ryou, bakura, and kurama ever going back to the human world? this plot almost makes all OOC. plaesae tell you will let them go home? Yomi is an old man!! let them all go (yugi is going to be sad at you if his friends don't come home) and an no fighting kurama is boring ( we all know k-chan is his hotest when he is kicking butt in a rose-filled way)
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