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| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 13:56 CDT
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^^ The choppiness is starting to go. However, it would flow better if the paragraphs were longer. I mean, you only need a new paragraph every, say, seven sentences, and whenever someone new speaks, so that leaves alot of room for long paragraphs, and that helps the story. Kurama, be nice to Kara-chan!! He loves you!! Mean ol' Kurama...*pouts.* ^^ Update soon, 'kay? Oh, I updated Pure Insanity...Couldja read the newest chappie?
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2005 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey sorry, i havent been around. Anyways, it was so cool! I mean Kurama said Karasu was his mate! That is so cool! Wait, not cool! Well...i dont know! Anyways, please update! Even thought you might not have many reviews, its the many people that reads your fic. Thats important
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 16:00 CDT
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Kurama, you are so mean to poor Kara-chan!!! Be nice already!! Yeesh!! I mean, he could enslave you and rape you if he wanted, but no, he's being nice!! Return the favor!! ......Sorry....^^0 I'm a rabid Karasu-fan. Bwahaha...Anyway, update soon, okay? Sorry I didn't review in so long, I was momentarily obsessed with Yu-Gi-Oh!, so, yeah...Update soon. Oh, and could you review Pure Insanity? It's got, like, five chappies....
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! RYOU! OMG! THEY REALLY ARE BROTHERS?! And is this really a Karasu/Kurama fic or Kyrama/Hiei fic? Oh well, update![One more thing, Goddess_writer625 emailed me the last week and told me to tell you sorry that she haven't been reivewing. She was in a holiday for about a month and she said UPDATE!]
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 21:55 CDT
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Poor Kara-chan...Kurama's so mean to him. Karasu: Not like I care.... Me: Whatever. We all know you love him. Anyway, it's good. Still a bit choppy, and you should work on not saying people's names so much...Vary a bit on sentence structure. ^^ Other than that, it's really good. UPdate soon, 'kay?
| Reviewed By: yamiyugikun [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2005 21:08 CDT
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Hi Foxgirl! Thank you for reviewing my fic. I've never read a Yuyu Hakusho/Yugioh cross before. Most crossovers are Yuyu Hakusho/Inu Yasha. It's great that you wrote something different. Please update! There's a few mispellings that need to be fixed, but other than that its good.
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2005 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOLIES!! So cool! I hope they read Kurama's letter! Riz: Hope that Kurama is already healed, anyways, UPDATE!
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2005 16:28 CDT
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Shacel: YES! Kurama's healed! WAHOOO!!!/ Riz: AAAHHH!! ROYU MUST BE SO KAWAII FROM BEING A KITSUNE!/ Shacel: HE IS!!!/ Riz: PLEEEEAAASSSSEEEE!! UPDATE! MORE, MORE CHAPPIES! *ahems* sorry, ^^ i'm always hyperestic, anyways, update!
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(This is Shacel's cousins)WOW! Shacel is right, this story is good...and chills! LOVE IT! Please update! Oh, I also agree to Goddess_writer625, Ryou/Kurama, it looks so good! Anyways, update!
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinda weird thought but i was having thought that Kurama and Ryou might be lvoers...just a thought, you know, ANYWAYS UPDATE SOON!
| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2005 20:32 CDT
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^^ It's all, like, cool and stuff. I LOOVE Karasu/Kurama...*drools.* Er, sorry. Anyway, it's awesome, if a bit choppy *but we're all used to that, aren't we?*. Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Shacel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 21:29 CDT
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| Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 22:58 CDT
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^^ Still a bit choppy, but better. Karasu was reading this over my shoulder....He is now wanting to know why the hell we all think that he's in love with Kurama. 'Cause, Kara-chan, you act like it. This is, like, my FAVORITE pairing. ^^ Update soon.
| Reviewed By: Sandra-Serena [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 23:14 CDT
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WOW! This is the most amazing story i have ever read!!! PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!
| Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2005 23:12 CDT
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OMG! Shacel is so right! You n\have the most Chillest, Scary, coolets, and greatest fic you wrote! YOU ARE SO GOOD AT SCARING PEOPLE! ^^ I Like YOUR FIC SO MUCH!!!! Wait, I don't really like it........I love it!!! can't wait for more! Please update!
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