| "Fallen Through" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dangit. i has hopeing that karasu would die. oh well now that hes out of the pic.lol. im so sorry i have not been on iv been soooo busy. lol. with wwcm, and work. but now im on and really wanting to read the fic. lol. so like i have said before.... HURRY!!!lol
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2005 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, you updated at just the right time because i needed something to read.
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 16:34 CDT
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your latest chapter was really good. plz continue. I cant wait to see Hiei and Karasu fight... i think it'll be funny whoever wins.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh hell ya. go hiei. thats one of the only times ill cheer for hiei, any hoo. hiei you better win or ill whoop you butt if your still alive. kurama and ryou dont want to be with hentai karasu..lol nice story im really lovein it.cant wait to see what happens. so you get it out soon ya gat that. lol. this one was really funny for me. talk to ya later maddy
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 20:20 CDT
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sorry im not any more but. with the wonder work shop im so busy. ill try to get on more to read you chaps im always trin to, but my brother that i hate so much wont ever let me on. any who. i love this chap. good work on it.lol, poor kurama, if karasu so much as makes one move on kurama, im ganna kill him. " you hear me karasu, im ganna kill you, hentai" lol. ok hope you get your chap out. and plz hurry with this one too. hehe. ja
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2005 15:42 CDT
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The latest chapter was really interesting. i dont know whats gonna happen to Bakura, or Ryou, or ANYBODY! i like your style.
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2005 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh boy. yami is way over his with yomi.lol. good fic. the best so far. bakura got in the way of kurama telling ryou. man, lol.plz hurry with the chaps i love em all. a read em twice too. lol.thats how much o love this story. ja
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Indeed, everything is so going great! It's obvious that Hiei loves Kurama! Hiei X Kurama! ^__^ Anyways, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one here. good idea. and you sound so much like jin. cant wait to see what hiei does. hmm i wonder what would happen if hiei found out about karasu likeing kurama.... lol. hope ya get your next chap out soon. ja
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 22:22 CDT
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^^ Update. The chappie is misnumbered, though. It's thirty-nine, and you said it was forty. ^^
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im really happy with your fic. likr i think iv said yours is the best. and if ya cant remember this is alexis. i cant waut to see your other chap. you no my i get bord easy so im still waiy=tin for ya.lol. i told a friend about your story i tell her how you get here she might read it. i dont know. ja
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Title: Totally Awesome Story
Reviewed By: shadowedsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love ur story!!!! please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Yugiohfreak5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVVVVEEEE this story! It's soooooo cool! Please update!
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Reviewed By: Goddess_writer625 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, sorry ain't here again...I got...problems...anyways, everyhting's going good, please update!
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Reviewed By: velox kit fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thats a good fanfic you made.tho i dont like karasu i still read it ,and i think you shuold make a kurma/ryou thing if this is one but it seems more like a karasu/kurama one. so plz plz plz make a ryou/kurama one for me. if this is already one email me. crazy_alexis_1993@hotmail.com
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