| "A Romp In The Park" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sailor Sarcasm (not logged in) On: March 17, 2007 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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"Squiggled." Teehee. So cute.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 22:01 CDT
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http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php/193495 add this to your story.. Winks!!
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Reviewed By: pollygator [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 09:43 CST
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WOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. I loved it! And it's RANMA AND AKANE! AND INUYASHA AND KAGOME!!! Oh man, what a good time this was :D
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Title: coolio
Reviewed By: badassmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never knew crossovers could be such hilarious fun...
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Title: Romp in the park
Reviewed By: Crazed One On: August 27, 2006 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update soon! You managed to put fighting in a lemon fic which is quite enjoyable. Thanks for the great fic.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm, this is the first fic that has really left me without words to review it. My gods! You must have the best descriptive writing skills I've ever witnessed, lol! This was hellaciously addicting. I'm not really familiar with Ranma and not particularly fond of cross overs (since I'm one of those nuts where you get certain pairings in your head and find any deviation sacriligious). BUT I have to say that you forever changed my mind in this. I really enjoyed Ranma and Akane and think I ought to investigate Ranma a bit more. At any rate, this fic was more than hot and amazing. I hope that you continue to update it. Not that my sanity can take it or anything, but I'm willing to push it to its limits. lol. Thanks!
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Title: The one word review
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn
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Reviewed By: nelson bannaba On: July 09, 2006 20:02 CDT
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Oh Smexxxy! I must say this printout made my ride in the car much more interesting this afternoon. I was so thrilled that, after all, Inuyasha and Kagome finally got what they both wanted and it was just as hot as I could have wished for.
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie nsi On: July 08, 2006 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Literary Goddess!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!!! Awesome!!! Bravissimo!! (does your husband know that you have written this?) In the words of the Mask "SMMMM-ooooKInnnn'!!!!" and of course Ron Weasley - Bloody Brillant!! That was an amazing chapter!! Sooo Damm-mnnn HHHhhhoooottttTTT!! I'm still steaming!! And I have to wipe the fog of my monitor!! I ran out of Pocky with this one!! I need a ice cube bath!!You have kept them so in character it made it even more pleasurable to read!! I loved how you had Inuyasha gently remove Akane gi from Kagome's body. It was so romantic.. sighs... I love Inuyasha's confidence!! I'm so glad they got pointers from each other before they were able to enjoy their loved ones presences!! Real cute with the teasing of sit!! Naughty Inu!! holding Kagome in place not allowing her to touch him back... it really drives a partner up the wall. I love it!! And the 'These were not difficult instructions to follow.' I will treasure this line!! Awesome touch!! The details you used, the way you write I am in awe!! I really enjoyed when you kept Inuyasha using his Demon Moon in this chapter and having Kagome learning off of him and using her own powers to 'touch' Inuyasha back!! They will both greatly enjoy this new skill in future encounters.. They are so into Public displays of sex... Giggles even though no one is in the park right now. Ponders if Kagome will put a barrier on their special spot...? Thank you so much for writing and for sharing this story with us!! Thank you for being a Goddess!! I thrill to read your story!! Can't wait for the next update!! Please keep up the most excellent and brillant work!!
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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U roks!!! Awesome fic!!! Please update soon!!!
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Title: Hot hot hot!!!
Reviewed By: doggieearlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My! (gets out fan and heads for cold shower)Well, that was just HOT, no other word for it.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: June 13, 2006 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.. rolls lazily over in bed onto her stomach, sheets a complete mess and mostly on the floor. She reaches blindly over to the package by her bed. Eyes closed blissfully and pulls out a long slender item and puts it to her lips. Relishing the sweet taste of her chocolate mousse Pocky she sighs out long and sated. Opening her jade yellow/green eyes.. Damn Literary Goddess, THAT was heavenly!! That was one helluva hot scorching love scene!! Kudos!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!! What a story!! What a writer!! What a Woman!!!! You have a brillant grasp of the characters and written the scene so masterfully!! The depth, the details!! The talent!! I loved the love scene. And Armie was happily helping Ranma along with his explorations. Nice unique touch with getting it off of Akane this time around!! As Ron Weasely would put it- Bloody Brillant!! I enjoyed how Ranma let Akane know about the Armour and what it was doing. I giggled when Akane made him "pay" by going slow. I could just picture him with the delightful Takahashi expression she gives all the male characters with the wide open eyes and slight pout. What a little vixen Akane turned into with her Ranma. Go Akane!!I can safely say I was drooling a little. The descriptions that you wrote in this chapter was oh my kami!! awesome!! Loved that sentence.. his hard on would have untied his pants for him if it could have.. I laughed at that one. That I can see as being a scene written by Rumiko as well. And Akane isn't done yet??!! My word... What fun they'll have!! I can't wait for the next update and please keep up the most awesomely excellent work!!
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Reviewed By: Nokomarie the snake On: June 10, 2006 10:30 CDT
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Uh, yeah, I guess that rates as a cliffie. Why not?
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Reviewed By: Nelson Bannaba On: June 09, 2006 22:52 CDT
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*pant* *wheez* Holy shit, Batman! I carried around this print out all evening trying to find time to read and now I'm glad I waited until I had time to myself. What can I say, that was unbelievably hot sex and so worth waiting (or being titilated near to death, haha) for. Your inspiration...can only imagine where that comes from. I think I'll go what Ed's doing right now.... to be continued.
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You're the most AMAZING author that i read!!!Please update soon!!!
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