| "A Romp In The Park" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: is it hot in here....?
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie On: March 21, 2006 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... now that was plenty hot!! Needs to have an ice cube bath to cool down.. fans herself... Is this going to be a free for all at the end(excuse the pun, hee hee) with all four of them mutually doing the deed with each other so that not one is left out. And how Do four people make out with each other at the same time? scratches head.. prephaps we will find out... I wonder would Inu let a guy at him? remembers the Jyakotsu incident... Or will-better yet-Kagome and Akane get together to make out big time to drive our two Takahashi boys beyond the brink of both Sanity and Insanity. And have them claim their girls for life? in the most unmistakable way possible.. That would be a treat. Man, I must say I am really enjoying this story!! You certainly have a delicious talent there going for you. I like the update time frame.. allows your readers to cool down enough yet not yet peak before the next installment!! (oh my... did I just really write that nsughty bit!!!) What can I say.. You write some seriously exquiste heavy loving. smiles... Heck if there is no plot.. I don't mind.. this is great stuff!! Please keep up the good work!! ponders prephaps Hojo should be just passing by and catch a glance.. maybe then he'd understand he had no chance... giggles evilly... anyway.... I look forward to the next update.. This is one very enjoyable fic!! thank you for sharing this story with us, your readers!!!
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Reviewed By: NO On: March 19, 2006 01:41 CST
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Huge no on the foursome way bad idea thats way too occ InuYasha would kill any guy that touched Kagome and same goes for Ranma and Akane
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Reviewed By: w_O_w On: March 19, 2006 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is really good please continue and fast
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: March 14, 2006 22:33 CST
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So glad you decided to continue posting ^_^ As for me, I would prefer not to have a foursome-- I think you're doing a great job of keeping Inuyasha and Kagome 'in character'--well, as far as this situation allows :) --and I think a foursome would be waaaaaay OOC for the two--don't know Akane and Ranma at all, so can't say--although I do enjoy the interaction between the two:) Anyway--keep up the great work--can't wait for your next posting--I'm thinking it might be more Inu & Kag time ^_~
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Reviewed By: SoGreat On: March 13, 2006 00:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really awesome story i cant wait till they all actually meet plus more InuYasha and Kagome !!!!!update!!!!!!!
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Title: i luv it!
Reviewed By: *rei05* On: March 12, 2006 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!! My most favorite couple Ranma and Akane (forever people!) and Kagome and Inuyasha (my other faves) together in a fanfic all bout the couples! its a very unique story! wonderfully creative!
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Title: keep going
Reviewed By: Zach On: March 12, 2006 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a pretty great fanfic, id like for you to continue it :D
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Reviewed By: ReaderRandom On: March 11, 2006 04:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. Most Fics i come across seem to be not well thought out or just more of the same. Very clever and very exciting to read. Can't wait for an update soon!
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Reviewed By: ghjghgn On: March 09, 2006 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your storty please continue
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Title: PLEASE
Reviewed By: Kelsey_Fantasy On: March 08, 2006 15:33 CST
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Hi I dont have time ti wright all the things that I like about you fic, so Ill just say ITS GREAT!! please please please please wright more. I hope they meet and talk to, but no hanky panky exept kag/inu and ran/aka seperatly.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: March 07, 2006 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, I rather like what you are doing. It is a great story and a truly delightful plot seems to be forming. You seem to have a nice grasp of the characters and what they are like without going out of character. I like your descriptions of the scenes and the detail you gave while describing the fight scene. Very nicely done!!But for reason -the romantic interaction - it just seems fast.. I guess this is because of the Jewels influence. Am I correct in thinking it has allowed the blockages/ insecurities to clear up and the couples feelings to come forth and for love to be finally acknowledged? And did Akane start wanting Inuyasha or was it like seeing a sexy guy pic in a magazine or movie type of attraction? I guess the latter otherwise she wouldn't let Ranma touch her. sighs.. You have a really great story going for you here. And time flow is very nicely progressed into the next chapter from previous. Very nice. I haven't really read any cross overs (usually find that from the ones I have read.. not to mix well or the writer can't merge the two to create a smooth blend. You have done this nicely. In fact I think you have an excellent talent for the cross over storylines. I am eager to see what will occur in the next chapter and I kind of am hoping for a long story with sweet chapters. I thank you for putting this story up for reader like me to read it. Also in this story I like how you have Kagome and Inuyasha and Akane and Ranma interact with the other. Very mature character growth.(I'm taking it as if several years have passed) Will Ranma/ Akane join Inuyasha/ Kagome in their quest? Please keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing another chapter coming out?
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Reviewed By: ~ME On: March 07, 2006 19:49 CST
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Ooh! I like ^_^ I don't usually read crossovers but this one is very interesting ^_~ I hope you get enough reviews to continue--I'd like to see what you have planned next....as if I didn't know--but you write it SO well :D Please, Please!! Update soon??!!
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Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: March 07, 2006 10:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good. I hope you plan to continue. Is there going to be any confrontation between the four? Hehehe. Cause that would be certainly very entertaining. Here's hoping for more.
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Reviewed By: moonwicca On: March 07, 2006 02:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o yes yes yes please please continue writing this is soooooo great
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