| "A Romp In The Park" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: Great CHapter!
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter, and how the two couples (Ranma and Akane, and Inuyasha and Kagome, obviously) seem to be so comfterable with each other no matter what. I'd love to have a friendship where everyone was so close (though not in the intimate way though. that's be kinda weird, but it works for your story). I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Akane making ramen? Bring it on! :) sincerely, seacil
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Title: Hey Fano!
Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 15:05 CDT
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Yay, you're back! Snuck this new chapter in between lecture/test writing/taxes this pm...nice illicit break!
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 15:49 CDT
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Welcome back! This kept me giggling the whole way through but was still VERY hot and I don't even like yuri. The reaction bits from the guys made it great.
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Title: Adding To My First Review On The Other Story
Reviewed By: seacil [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wrote a review for the other part of this story (aka "A romp Through Time"), where I said that I would make it as a review for both of these stories, but after reading chapter 17-21 (or so) of this one, I just wanted to add to it. Ahem... Oh, I can't WAIT to find out if the foursome discover Koga and Ryoga! (Though how embarrassing it'd be for the two males, neh?) The idea of the two couples, Ranma and Akane and Inuyasha and Kagome, being together as a group and not minding it is a strange (I guess) unity that somehow managed to create a stronger bond between the four than anything else. It's intriguing. Anywho, I can't wait for the next chapter. Something tells me it's going to be very funny. :) sincerely seacil
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Reviewed By: lorerom1218 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS SERIES!!! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!! CONGRATULATIONS!!! You simply combined the two best Anime series in this world. THANK YOU!
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Reviewed By: snovelor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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heh! You do the yaoi thing well :) I need to re-read the chapter (it's 1:30) but I read it and the first impression of the yaoi is excellent :) Oh...Koga...
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 14:37 CDT
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2 -- "Prey" that he was. 6 -- Is zero to nothing supposed to be "zero to sixty" or something?
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Title: Chapter 1: A Fight!
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 13:13 CDT
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"Pigtail" is one word. I'm a bit surprised that Inuyasha would find it odd to hit a girl. He faces female demons all the time, and he works with Sango. I believe "envelope" snuck past your spellchecker: The verb is "envelop." The ending's a bit abrupt, but all in all, it's an appealing setup.
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Title: Ouch!!
Reviewed By: Nekomata [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kouga!!! and poor me to have to wait for what happens next. Talk about a cliffie! Will InuYasha finally kill Kouga? Will Kagome let him? Will Ryoga jump in the fountian and stay a piglet forever rather than admit how much he enjoyed a yaoi romp? Will Ranma pummell Ryoga or laugh at him? Will we get to see some multi-player hentai games??? I've really enjoyed both this and A Romp Through Time. They are both really fun reads, but the hot yaoi action and the suspence ending have me on something between pins and needles, and tenterhooks waiting for the next chapter! Great stuff!!!
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Title: Quite hot indeed
Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 21:44 CDT
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It worked for me. I like the earthier aspects of yaoi, and threesomes and so forth. Carried away in the moment and all that. I hope you'll consider writing more yaoi. I thought this was hot and more hot. Kouga has a great capacity for mindless lust. Amongst other things. :)
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Title: hot!
Reviewed By: Wheezambu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 21:38 CDT
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Hot hot hot hot how how HOT! I just love frocking scenes. Now that you've gone yaoi, you'll forget all about het. It's an addiction, lemme tell ya!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Ranma said it best...Wow
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:47 CDT
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That was HOT.
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Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:03 CDT
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Um, well, this chapter certanly lived up to it's title, didn't it? I'm hoping for a triple pay off next time.
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Reviewed By: tm On: April 14, 2007 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEE PARK PARK PARK!!!!!!! the ratings don't go high enough for this fic. perfect escapist fare.
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