| "Live and Let Die (Part 2): Awakenings" Reviews/Comments [ 151 ] |
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Title: Nice finish
Reviewed By: FarAwayEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice finish to this story. I like how you wrapped up several of the plotlines yet left it open enough for us to see what might be yet to come. It'll be interesting to see if Shippo goes along on the next trip and if so how he'll behave. Will he in turn take lessons on his youkai powers from Sesshomaru and Inuyasha? It'll be interesting to see how Miroku and Sango work their issues out, considering they are unable to really have sex until Naraku has been eliminated from the picture. Sango really has to deal with a lot of her resentment, and while she seems to have apologized and come to grips with Inuyasha being Kagome's mate, I have a funny feeling it's not the last time she'll be pretty upset and possibly lash out at Kagome, or even Inuyasha. Miroku MUST get over his tendency to flirt with and grope other women if he ever wants Sango to be willing to be with him---even if they can't take that big step towards sex. It'll be a nice way, I think, for Inuyasha and Miroku to bond, if he and the hanyou were to talk about what's expected of a man, at least somewhat. You've already set some of that up, so it'd be really nice to see how that develops. It might also make them more willing to trust one another with personal problems rather than just fighting together. I am also curious about the training that Inuyasha and Kagome will undergo. What other abilities are they hiding and how will they factor into their battles and travels. Nice hint there that Naraku will know about their mating. Lord only knows what type of twisted ideas he's coming up with to use that against them. I do think he'll be in for a bit of a surprise, because while that bug was watching them, well, you know, they never said anything about their new gifts. I don't think his new advantage will be worth as much as he thinks it'll be, but that could just be me. As long as they don't have control over those abilities, I guess it's possible. I do have to wonder, though, will Kikyo ever show up? And on one final note, nice touch with Kagome showing off a little to Grandpa. Silly old man oughta know when it's best to leave alone.
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Reviewed By: Inuashley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 10:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story, I love the story line, also Great Lemonade. I have read lots of your stories and though this one is the one I chosse to review, the other ones were great also. You have a good imagination.
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Title: Live and Let die (part 2) Awakenings
Reviewed By: inutama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, it had a strong plot and hope part 3 will come out soon. inutama.
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Title: The Grand Dungeon Master
Reviewed By: Hosagi Matissmo On: May 29, 2006 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A really well written story. I cant wait to see whats in store for Part 3.
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Reviewed By: inu hanyou nikkie On: May 27, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot!! Whoot!! Kudos!! Cheerio!!! Whoot!! Bravo!! What an awesome chapter and a spectular end to the second book of the series Live and Let Die!!! You are sooo Totally AWESOME!! You rock Literary Goddess!! Though I am fairly sad to see this book end I cheer to see there will be more!! This is quite a pleasing and wonderful style that is going on!! I can't rave enough about your style, stories and talent. Damn that Miroku is at it again. He is going to overstep his limits with Inuyasha's tolerance pretty darn soon if he doesn't smarten up fast. I can see Inuyasha whipping the stuffing out of him to make his point very clear and have Miroku start being respectful towards him. And man is Sango ever seethingly super jealous of Kagome and Inuyasha's unwavering commitment and devotion to each other. Perphaps she should talk to Miroku and make it clear in no mistakable terms how she feels about his lack of respect and devotion to her. I appluaded Kagome for telling Sango off Loved the comment that she expected that kind of cruelty from Miroku but not from Sango. That finally hit Sango a little too late. I also cheered that Kagome reminded Sango why Inuyasha had Kagome curled up with him. And Wow to Miroku for also reminding Sango why they have to be better about this. And the love scene was sooo touching. Inuyasha can be tender and gentle at times (though.. don't mention it within earshot of him). I enjoyed Kagome's comment to the others afterwards as well- don't knock it til you tried it. lol.. that was great!! And the reunion with Shippo was sweet. I think maybe he is starting to accept the facts and coming to terms with it. Thank you also for having Myouga pop in with more information. Nice touch!! I liked how you had Grandpa behave. You never cease to amaze me with the accuracy you have with capturing the characters personnas. WOW!! I wonder if Inuyasha will bop Grandpa on the head one of these days. I wonder what new adventures and trails will Kagome and Inuyasha go through in the next book... Please Keep up the most excellent work!! Can't wait for the next book to start.
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 08:04 CDT
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LOVE IT!!!!!! Sango needs to learn how to shut up.So........ update soon!
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please 'del' may we want more! Thank you!
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Reviewed By: OpinioVana [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always I love your work. I can't wait until you have the inspiration and the time to start Part 3.
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Title: Loved it!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 09:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I LOVE your stories! What I love -the most- is your characterizations. The way they grow up, the way they interconect, their feedback. I LOVE your Inuyasha cause -with you- he is so natural and, at the same time, so Inuyasha. Love the way you "worked" Shippo, Sango and Miroku. I think that Sango can really be so dense and obsessed w/her "friendship" disregarding limits and rights. I think that this issue is not over... things do not end so easily! Hopefuly the 3rd. part will be up soon, ne?! HAHAHAHA... take the time you need but know that here you've got someone waiting anxiously f/your next post! Congratulations! Mage
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Title: KOnnichi ha
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW AWSOME OJB I LOVED IT WOOT WOOT WOOT! Can't wait for the 3rd part ^^ Woot, I loved the whole part were Inuyasha & Kagome came becak and it turned out that Sango & the guys probably heard them *SNicker* awsome joB!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: May 22, 2006 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
squeals with glee! this was an awsome end. foreshadowing bugs anyone? i'm loving how well you are capturing the characterization of everyone. i can completely see sango as being in character with her comments. she was raised as a slayer after all and she watched how much kagome hurt with inuyasha running to kikyou. she's not an easy one to convince that people (or half demons change) miroku loves her and wants to marry her and he still can't keep his hand to himself. the good thing there is he's maturing wonderfully and provides a wonderful grounding point for sango. and shippou! he's trying so hard in that breif moment but i'm sure it'll slip every so often. he is just a kid who was spoiled for quite a while. and poor gramps. his paltry powers are no match for the mighty hanyou! so much to look forward to in a next installment. will the third book be the last or will there be more to come?
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Reviewed By: KhayenRose [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your stories! Cant wait for the next one! Keep up the Great work
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Reviewed By: jammies2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 20:23 CDT
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Cool chapter I am sorry to see this is the last chapter but I look forward to the next part of the series. I am sorta upset that Sango can't let things go and keeps saying things. I know she thinks of Kagome as a sister but she is taking things a bit too far. Thx for posting
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Title: OHAYOU FROM JAPAN!
Reviewed By: Lady_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! Another awsome chapter, I loved it so much, guess what I'm in Japan right now, woot it's awsome i love it, and your story also lol anyway nice job continue asap WOOT!
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Reviewed By: GuardianOfTheShikonNoTama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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My gosh, this story is so ausom, But if you dont continue it soon, I may just die from bordom! Please update?
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