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Title: LT: Revelation
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I, well, er, just...wow! I know, I know...it's not often that I'm not at a loss for words - LOL! Thoroughly enjoyed the latest twist very much! Nice fleshing out (yup, on purpose!) of the 'Pink' convo. And with that, I am off to the ficlets! :)
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Title: i is not asshole! :(
Reviewed By: Kitsune_Magic_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter! If you're writing more, I can't wait to see it. Definitely worth another read one day in the future :)
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Title: Lemon Twist
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 13:48 CDT
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You make me smile, laugh, get thoughtful, misty eyed, but most of all, when I read your stuff, it's like I'm part of the story. I love your work, even thought no one's given any one else a hairy eyeball lately. You have NO IDEA how hard that made/makes me laugh. You have a real gift with words, and I hope you continue to share them with us. thank you so much Fenik-sama
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Title: I'm not an asshole *pout*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2008 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol...very nice lovey dovey stuff you smashed into this one shot.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 21:33 CDT
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absolutely amazing. i feel like Inuyasha came right out of the screen and into the story haha. the characterization was dead on and i loved reading it! he's just a big ol marshmellow =P
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Revelation is AMAZING!!! I love how you have him talking to us! Although it made me feel a little guilty.....my voyerisim here is just that much more obvious when he tells me to shut the hell up...haha...It was awsome!!! Do you think you'll do anymore big works like TL?
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2008 17:03 CDT
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"That led to her wondering exactly where Bakusaiga had been stored inside Sesshomaru..." OMG When I first read that chapter, I turned to my husband and honestly the first words out of my mouth were "He DID have a stick up his ass! And it turns out it was really, really sharp!!" -_-;; You know - I'm really, really picky when it comes to stories written directly from InuYasha's POV, because I feel like he's really difficult to pull off, but "Revelations" was FANTASTIC. I feel like you really got inside his head - he wasn't too eloquent, but he wasn't a freakin' caveman, either :) A thousand points of awesome, right there!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 22:11 CDT
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chapter nine....who'd though sesshomaru would be into dirty talk...always took him for a shirts on, lights off, no talking kinda guy....not that your wasn't better, very entertaining ^-^
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Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 20:54 CST
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Ah, you fooled me. Thought for sure someone would be wearing it, but I can't say I was disappointed in the least. Laughed so hard that I might have ruptured something when it bounced off Miroku's chest and then again Shippo went to eat it. Ok, I get the symbol of virility of the dragon carved into the ivory, but what was the deal with the red chords? Nice touch, by the way.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 16:44 CST
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lol i will never forget the line about her "girly bits". great as per usual! man i love this couple.
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Title: The Ring
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 13:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That was absolutely amazing! The details, details, details! The slow drawn out descriptions were terrific. I could actually imagine every single detail! WOW! I loved every single bit of every single word. The ending was priceless, loved the bit of comedy to top it off!
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 13:11 CST
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*whistles* Woman, this is a lovely addition to the initial part you put up on InuE! Hope you're satisfied, ya left me all hot and bothered ;)
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 21:30 CST
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Love this! It was wonderful and funny the first version, but this just sends it over the top. Very nice, steamy and fun.
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Title: Crackalicious!
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 13:07 CST
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Awww..this is hot and poignant all at once, really almost perfect. One tiny nit: I didn't like the term "girly bits." it seemed overly cute to me, and broke the (deliciously sensuous) mood. And I'm glad you didn't have them USE the cock ring...that's what sequels are for. Now back to work!
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Reviewed By: FallenAngel_205 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 11:37 CST
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Omg, Yes! This is sooo good. I can't help myself from re- reading the chapters. Keep it up. :)
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