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"Lemon Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ]
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 Reviewed By: Creature of Shadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2010 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah, just as good the second time. And I still think the bolts flying would be hilarious. Lol!
 Reviewed By: Creature of Shadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2010 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was awesome too! How come this wasn't in the original story line?
 Reviewed By: Creature of Shadow [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2010 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked this very much. It was fun to see a different time with these two beside the one you had in the actual story. Maybe you could do a quick addition to it on what Sessaki does when he finds out. Lol, its funny when he's mad.
 Title: review for His
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 18, 2009 05:48 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know why it takes me forever to read a Sesshomaru story lines. I like him, but its just so easy to get him wrong I think. I wasn't surprised that this was wonderful though cause I've never read anything that I didn't like when it comes to your stuff. I was surprised by how funny this was. I read it in the middle of the night so I had to laugh into a pillow, but it really was funny. Even remembering that whole military joke, I'm still giggling.
 Title: Awesome as always!
Reviewed By: DreamBeamz [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 28, 2009 17:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah-ha! Found another one not on FF.net, yay! :) Anyways loved this one, explains what happened in that office, lol. :)
 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 15, 2009 01:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the September 2008 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by artist/author, Inuyashloverr and author, KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Links to all of the awards for 2008 can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/pickup.html First place awards will be on permanent display here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/2008art.html Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please pick up your award here: http://s286.photobucket.com/albums/ll109/FeudalAssociation/Fiction Dec08/ ~ Inuyashloverr & KnittingKnots Owners of the Feudal Association
 Title: One Hundred Thousand Lifetimes
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2009 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Good Morning again! I wanted you to know that I also plan on nominating this piece (100,000 Lifetimes) in the IYFG for Best Canon. I think you've done a lovely job of not only keeping all the characters true to their natures, but you have also incorperated in just oodles of authentic Japanese culture--something RT does herself that most of us 'foreigners' don't catch. Thanks again for writing for us.
 Title: Revelations
Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 04, 2009 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Morning! I just wanted to drop you a line and let you know that I intend on nominating Revelations for Best Lemon in the IYFG. It is wonderfully sexy and has plot with its porn. Thanks for writing for us.
 Title: One Hundred Thousand Lifetimes
Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2008 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 23, 2008 12:39 CST
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Title: 100,000 Lifetimes
Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2008 11:41 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Beautiful!!
 Reviewed By: LuxKen27 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 16, 2008 15:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Beautiful! I saw the piece of art @ KrisCynical's gallery and just had to come and read the accompanying fic. I love the feeling of absolute devotion between the pair at the center of the story, with the humorous touches of the peripheral characters. It was very interesting reading about a "real" wedding ceremony, and the fruits of the collective's labors are magnificent! Thanks so much for including the reference materials as well :) I commented to Kris that I thought the crest on Inuyasha's kimono was a nice touch so I'll extend the same compliment here :) I was interested to see how/where Sesshoumaru might fit into the story, and you had him fulfill a nice role. Having him provide the outfit was indeed a good way to convey just how much they'd both grown up re: their relationship. I just love small symbolism like that :D Thanks for sharing such a lovely post-manga scene with us!
 Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 20, 2008 16:32 CDT
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Hey again! I actually read this on fan fiction.net, and I loved it! It's very realistic, and I really enjoyed it. I think, as usual, you portrayed Inuyasha perfectly. Excellent job!
 Reviewed By: mylovemiroku [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2008 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfic. I do get alerted already when this story is updated, but I rather enjoyed this chapter. I thought it was definitely realistic and truthful. I would encourage you to explore this kind of writing in the future.
 Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 13, 2008 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
I would have to agree with Chase65 . . . I am rarely at a loss of words with fics but this latest chapter was awesome! It was so good I kept putting off reading it to savor the feeling of a well written fic. ;] I loved how you brought Inuyasha seemingly out of the tv and right next to you, it was a fun twist. Great job!
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