| "Lemon Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2007 16:08 CST
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"...as he came into her with five centuries worth of repressed desire." And we all know what *that's* like...LOL. This was a tasty treat. Thanks for keeping your loyal readers occupied between chapters.
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Reviewed By: redney [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whenever I see that Feni has written a new story I just have to read it. This story was great. I think that this is a good example of everything I like about this writer. Imagination, creativity, humor, a little smut are almost always included in her stories. This was very funny and at times touching and I enjoyed it very much. I like how she's tried to explain why Inuyasha is so stand-offish with Kagome. The manga can be so frustrating at times because Inu/Kag never kiss or cuddle. My 15 year old has even said enough already just let them kiss! Thanks for fulfilling a wish on my part to see the affection and love between these characters come to life. Keep your stories coming, I need my Feni-fix every now and then.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 22:51 CDT
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That was so funny.....hehe....your a good writer......love your stories...XD.............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 06:07 CDT
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that was soooo.. wow. Really, I have .. wow. I liked it. It was .. wow. heh, im kind of speechless, which never works when you want to leave a review. I adored this little oneshot. It was incredibly well written and soo in charachter. I loved the part where two kit-n-kagomes tried to seduce Inuyasha. But Inuyasha's little talk with Kagome before they did their lemon was so heartfelt. Damn. Double Damn. You work magic, thats all i have to say. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ha ha, great job, now I have to sleepy.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 21:39 CDT
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i have no words haha this was so fun to read, incredibly interesting, so hot and really clever. i loved it.
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Title: Score! for 'The Score'
Reviewed By: BrownRecluse [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 19:07 CDT
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Loved this! If R.T. were to gift us with an adult-themed episode, I think it'd look very much like this. So envy not only your knowledge of the canon, but your ability to seamlessly integrate it into the narrative. Wonderful characterization throughout ... and Inuyasha... Typical! ;D ROFLMAO! Bravo!
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Reviewed By: Li Hudson [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 18:30 CDT
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I loved this story, I love all your stories, but it really bugged me that Yoh was not more regretful about using her or punished AT ALL for his actions. I get that this was his "nature" and all, but Inuyasha never even got a swing at him!
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Title: For "The Score"
Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When Butteryasha mentioned you were going to try and tackle that picture seriously, I honestly couldn't see how it was going to be done. Then poof, 20 or so pages of awesome appear. Much as I hate to sound like a sycophant, I'll say that I'm envious of your talent and the people who get to live with it. Seriously, wow.
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Title: Just plain h-o-t
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 18:16 CDT
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Loved this -- highly evocative writing, great pace and, um, rhythm. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 17:11 CDT
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This fic... *twitch* it pushes my 'non-con/rape' alerts a little, but the exquisite angst there is in it is appreciated... I personally would almost have preferred this one to end up a little more tragically, with a broken-hearted, distant Kagome and a closed-off, infuriated Inuyasha... there was so much scope for tragedy there that it's not even funny...
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Title: **shakes vigorously**
Reviewed By: iloveanimecartoons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew! Yanno, those cold showers'll do only so much... THese works are just Calgon/Herbal Essences quality! Yes, that's a compliment...very tasteful! I love the inner thoughts and the plotlines are believable and I can see them happening to real people. KUTGW!
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Title: Loved them..
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm an Inu/Kag lemon addict, so I had to read those - THEY WERE GREAT! Soooo satisfying...
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Reviewed By: mysticneko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 04:53 CDT
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This is one of my favorite lemons of yours to date. My only complaint is that I didn't know some of the Japanese terms. It would be cool if you could put them at the end of the fic. Also I would like that LJ link. I may be a bad writer, but I love to read.
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Reviewed By: Kurinju-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 10:27 CDT
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Fucking Hell. One of THE Best lemons I've ever read. I loved this to fucking death! How do you do that?! Kami, best lemon writer ever is what you are girl! Kudos!
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