| "Lemon Twist" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Title: w00t!
Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* man oh man, what a story to wake up too.. @ 7:17am.. I absolutely loved this little oneshot of lemony goodness. And my roommate wondered why i squealed so loudly upon opening my email. keep up the excellent work. You write, i read. lol
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 20:17 CDT
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Fantastic lemon scene! That was perfect because they weren't. Is it making sense??? Love it! Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Hug from Brazil!
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Reviewed By: twin_star_of_suzaku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 16:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waii~ as always, Fennik-dono, you are a master at crafting the perfect scene for good smut, or just a good story in general!
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Reviewed By: pinkmoonusagi513 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 20:08 CDT
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So I stumbled across this little collection of yummy smut gold! I just wanted to say thankyou! Your work is amazing and I will be checking out your other stories as well.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT DAMN! You are a master. That was definitely hot and with all that leather involved I practically cried because he's not real. I adore this story as you know and was absolutely DELIGHTED to see a happy little lemon for it! Huzzah!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yup! That was one helluva riding lesson...:D
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Title: Evil Twin Approval
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 14:28 CDT
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Woo hoo! What a great 'birthday present'...! Thank you so much for those leather pants and all the wonderful things inside them;)
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This was an excellent one-shot. It was full of lemony goodness, but so richly emotional at the same time. I loved it.
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Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 23:48 CDT
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Hmm...obviously that last review was for 'Darkness'. Oops...gotta learn to place titles in my reviews.
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Reviewed By: Crysalie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 23:46 CDT
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Oh...I finally got around to reading this! (Slow, I know. :P) Great job! I especially loved the reference to the 'Darkness' throughout the entire piece. It created a lovely, beautiful feel to everything. Made the peace deeper than it would have been otherwise, I think. Anyway, loved it! Awesome job! :D
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 01:55 CDT
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What, what, WHAT?? I feel as though I just stumbled upon some delicious hidden treasure, hahaha! *evin grin* Phoenix Blade is by far one of my favorite stories of all time and the whole torturous Yashita/Kagome situation with them not being able to be together drives me nuts. Of course I wouldn't have it any other way since the story is wonderful, BUT stumbling across these two great lemons based on those stories made me so giddy. It's like eating dessert before dinner, lol. I mean, from the other lemon scenes you've written in those stories, I know the lemon for Yashita and Kagome will be great in Phoenix Blade and these two little goodies just reinforced that fact. I also loved the other little lemons, but the Phoenix Blade characters hold a little place in my heart and I'm so glad I found these. Love your writing, as always. If only everyone had such a great command of language and creativity! ;)
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Reviewed By: yanna_enoah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 01:53 CDT
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body language -- awesome...totally wicked...hentai with a taste of gentleness...i so love it.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 10:41 CDT
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Oh, I loved all the Kagome/Inuyasha lemons VERY much! Each one was very creative and interesting in it's own way, and I loved how you just totally disregarded any set restrictions in your story to write that one lemon, LOL! Maybe it can just be chalked up to a 'very' vivid imagination on the part of a sex-starved hanyou. Oh, and I also liked the one set before the story, because it gives you an interesting glimpse into how the poor guy spent his time in the years leading up to the beginning of the story. As for the other two, they were also really good! The underwear thing in the first one had me laughing, and the second one was great because of how you really built up to their end encounter. Because them just jumping into bed together in the cannon storyline is just a bit too much to believe, but I can see them working themselves up to it. I really hope you continue to write these, and perhaps sometime soon you'll another timeline oblivious story? Those are fun! ^_~
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Title: In need of a Shrimp Roll....
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 00:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
yummmmmmmmm. it just keeps getting better. you go girl and keep writing these damn good lemons!
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Reviewed By: Licentia poetica [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woof. I love how you write, Feni! Body language is a great addition!
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