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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 08:57 EDT
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oh my god. How could you end it that way!? *growls* Now I have no idea what the heck is going on! Agh! Though I d love the chapter. And normally it's Kagome getting jealous over Kikyo. I like how you made it someone else. That's an awesome idea. Lol. Can't wait to see a update sometime soon if possible. Please Update Soon! And Have A Nice Day! *waves* XD
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Title: Hmm.
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 08:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I was in love with the way you ended it. Lol. I wonder what'll happen next. I HOPE Kagome says yes but knowing writers these days they love to do the opposite of what the readers want just for the aftershock. Lol. Update as soon as you can. =]
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Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 01:22 EDT
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You so have to update and like soon. I love this fic it is great!!!!!!!! I cant beleive that InuYahsa is going home though!! And I still cant beleive that InuYasha could hate his father, hating Sesshoumaru is understandale but Inu no Tashio! I cant even phantom what he could have done to InuYasha to make him feel like that. I bet it has something to do with his mother!!!! Well update soon, I'll be waiting!!!!-HCDK^_^
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Reviewed By: :) On: March 28, 2008 01:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'll admit, i'm one of those people who reads whenever you post a new chapter but never reviews, but this is me making up for it... every time i read, you make me sooo angry! i'm waiting for SOMETHING to happen and it's pissing me off, haha. (not meant in a bad way, that is) i wait a month for a new chapter and then you just leave me hanging! but you do cliffhangers so well... too well, honestly. :P but it's the promise of great things that keeps me (and apparently, many others) coming back -- and that's always good. you have a few grammatical errors, a few misplaced words and such. it's a bit distracting to someone like me (the perfectionist type) but it doesn't keep anyone from getting the meaning so it's alright. i do love your style of writing though... witty conversation is something i always look forward to (and am never let down by in this story). i love how you portray inuyasha and his 'whatever' attitude... that's always sexy as heck. and the smoking... mm. hate it and the smell, but there's something attractive about it. maybe it's the bad boy appeal... i'm always a sucker for those types. i'll admit, high school fanfictions can get a bit repitive, but your approach is refreshing and original. i'm hooked! and eagerly awaiting some answers to all of my questions (plus all my new ones... xD). be kind, update soon. :) (and for god's sake, let's see a little action in the next chapter! :P)
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Title: forgeting the seatbelt
Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:08 EDT
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ahhhhhhh!!! ive been waiting for a kiss!! lol, but i trust you, and WHAT A CLIFFHANGER!!! haha, i want you to know that this is my favorite fanfic out of any that i have read!! i love the personalities, the conversations, everything!!! wow, thats a lot of exclamation marks.. but anyways, im sorry if my review is short, but its a lil after one in the morning, so, yeah.. when i read the title of this chapter, i almost peed myself, i thought someone was gonna get hurt! but all was well XD so yep, keep up the good work! your an awesome writer =D ((p.s. spelling error i think when you put "whipping" you mean "wiping")) cant wait to see what you have up your sleeve for the next chap!!
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Reviewed By: koinuyami1 On: March 20, 2008 15:13 EDT
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that was great so far, ahh i hate this, ur story has gotten my attention and then it just ends...lol could u do me a favor and once u add another chapter plz email me with the link kaylabrownrigg630@hotmail.com ok thanx cuz ive become really attached to the story and i wanna know what happens next :)
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Reviewed By: crazyaboutinu On: March 18, 2008 23:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahh the suspense! lol in the next chappie will you be revealing why inuyasha doesnt like his father? what the 15th smybolizes? and will kagome find out any of this? ooh i cant wait!
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Reviewed By: crazyaboutinu On: March 17, 2008 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg im am totally enjoying this story nd i wish i read it soon i love it! you inspire me to want to write myself
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 00:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: tora92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 00:10 EDT
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ooooooomg!!! this is only your 2nd fic?? your AMAZING!! i love it!! and its so well written, good grammar, style, and all!! there isnt a whole lot of talent out there these days.. good ideas and storylines, but a lot of them are poorly written. you definitely have a good story going here XD
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Title: NO WAY!!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 15:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Way!!! I can't belive it ended there!!!!!!! You are soooooo mean ( but i can't really sya much since I haven't updated my fanfics in over a month..... -_-) This is a frickin awesome fic!!!!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 15:08 EDT
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There are a few Inuyasha Ranma crossovers out there already, but seeing another would be wonderful. As to who would win... Ranma consistently gets beaten then trains and in a rematch is victorious, this is the formula for most of the episodes. Inuyasha on the other hand refuses to ever quit, so a battle between them would be very interesting, except for the fact that Inuyasha seems to be repulsed by the idea of fighting humans. He avoids it. He also holds back if he thinks his opponent is weaker than him. Ranma isn't evil, never will be, so in order for Inuyasha to even want to fight him there would need to be a rivalry or misunderstanding, and even then Inuyasha wouldn't go for the kill. On the other hand seeing Kagome and Akane teem up could be very interesting. Can Kagome learn to use Hammer space, that mysterious ability Akane has to pull gigantic objects out of nowhere? Can Kagome teach Akane to cook, or will curry become a danger to everyone? The possibilities are endless. You could even have them go on a quest to stop the girl from drowning in the Jusenkio (sp?) pool during the feudal era.
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Reviewed By: kawaii yashie On: March 13, 2008 10:37 EDT
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that was a good chapter but sad. but yeah a ranma and inuyasha story would be awsome! mmm i'm thinking that ranma and akane can travel via well and as well some of their friends. oh man i can just imagine it... yeah write it and i'll read it.
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2008 13:42 EST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 03, 2008 22:05 EST
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wuuh? why is inuyasha going home? he's not gonna leave kagome is he? Good chapter, can't wait for the next one!
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