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Title: HUUUUUUUMMMMM
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY NICE CHAPTER A LITTLE SHORT BUT STILL INFORMATIVE!!!! BOTH OF THEM WALKING ON AIR FEELING GIDDY FOR NO REASON JUST THINKING ABOUT THE OTHER ONE.... JUST TRY NOT TO OVERLOAD KAGOME TO MUCH!!!! I MEAN HER FIRST REAL LOVE, FIRST REAL KISS, FIRST REAL BOYFRIEND AND NOW A ROAD TRIP WITH YASHA OOO THE POSSIBILITIES,LOL NOW IF WE CAN GET HER TO HONG KONG IT COULD BE A REALLY INTERESTING SUMMER??? .WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT,,,, ONLY TIME AND MORE UPDATES WILL TELL!!!! Sorry but here comes the bad pun "WRITE ON" I just Can't seem to stop doing that..... . I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS, PS NEVER FORGET THAT THERE ARE 100 RABID HAMSTERS JUST WAITING FOR THERE NEXT VICTIMS hehehe
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Reviewed By: Clover_eve [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love your story i always look forward to geting an email saying theres a new chapter. i expecially like the way you potray the characters expecially the character Maki she is so cool. hope you up date soon and have many more ideas for later chapters
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Title: Another High School Fic
Reviewed By: MN On: August 18, 2008 11:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you noticed the title you should have about guessed what I was thinking. LMAO, I was looking up more high school fics so I could write my parody on bad, what else?, high school fics. Imagine my surprise when I stay up all night reading through 22 chapters of a good story. Oh, that sounds kinda insulting. Trust me that's a compliment. I've read tons of stories on here and I groan when I see that they go on for 40-some-odd chapters. I could pull my hair out. This gave me a new respect for them. I liked the pace of this story. It was neither rushed nor drawn out to take the rest of my life to read. Why is it that high school fic normally go through each day? The story has it's cliché moments but it's not totally far fetched. Truthfully I tend to like it when the best friends are flopped. But for the purposes of your story it makes sense that the boys would be best friends. I mean even though it's normal I find it not to my liking when a older girl dates a younger guy even if it's only a year difference. You've added a hint of mystery to this. My guess is that Satoshi's brother died. Yea, really vague, ne? Urgh, I have so many scenarios running through my head it's hard to choose just one. At first I was going to stay it was cancer but that doesn't explain the bullet wound. So of course it was something big, really big. I even like, if not love the Ocs. Gives the story a personal touch. Overall your style of writing draws the reader back, along with your plot development. The story is original, if not completely you've written it in a way that leads the reader to think that it is one of a kind. Hmm, there I go sticking my foot in my mouth again. It's a wonder I have any toes left. How about this: The story is creative and original enough that the few cliché moments in it add a touch of humor and brighten the piece. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors in it but not enough to take away from the overall enjoyment. I'm sorry I wasn't here where you started the piece as I'd would have loved to have been able to review each chapter. As that would take to long and take away from *my* enjoyment of reading, I thought I'd just give you an overall review. Some parts seems over dramatic. Well I may be wording that wrong. Not so much dramatic as over worked. Hmm, I guess dramatic is the word I'm looking for. For example: The whole deal thing. It didn't seem that serious to me. I mean there was nothing illegal or unethical about it really. I guess if we take the bribe aspect of it, it could be considered unethical. But I saw it more as an incentive. He was missing school because he had to work to eat. She offered to feed him if it would get him in school more often. There was a problem and a solution was found. Sounds clean cut to me. Another thing, maybe I was never a normal high school student but the way the rumors spread and got started and why. Dude, that did seem a bit farfetched to me. I don't' think I really understood how Yoko mind was working. And coupled with the whole InuYasha-living-hell threat totally reminded me I was reading a high school fic. LMAO, I say HS fic like it's an insult. I should change that habit. Well now that I found it I'm going to keep up to date with it. Nice work you have here. Sorry if at any time in this review you felt insulted. I'm learning to fix the way I review. Taking away the bluntness is my first step. As you can or can't tell it's going to be a long road. Well you can email me anytime, for any reason. Need a beta? Want to run an idea pass someone? Want to cuss me out? :-) I'm here. Nikki MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: SummerNightsxx On: August 17, 2008 17:53 EDT
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Omg! You dont actually realize how long I've been waiting fro you to write another chapter! This is by far my favourite story by you! S THANK YOU for pdating and PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO NOT KEEP ME AITING LONG FOR THE NEXT ONE!!! xxx
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Reviewed By: vampireskiss [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 19:28 EDT
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omg plz plz update soon!!! its an awsome story and i love how bubbly Kagome acts. its so kawaii!! anyway...yeah plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2008 06:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, cant wait until the next one... the real question is can Kagome use the techniques that Maki uses? or does she need to use her feminine charms on him to get him to be a "good boy"
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Reviewed By: mrskouga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2008 20:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay *grits teeth* when are you goin to update i want to know what happens next!!!i feel like my head is goin to pop off!!!!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 01:50 EDT
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*taps foot furiously*....WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE!!!! It's been close to two months already!! PLZ continue!!!! I loved this story so much I nominated it at the IYFanguild!!
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really great story! please don't wait too much longer to update!!
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Reviewed By: yashielover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 18:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story and can't wait until the next chapter comes along. Please update soon:)
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Reviewed By: FoxyLove [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is sooo good! I absolutely love it! I cant wait until your next chapter. Im really glad that kagome and inuyasha have finally gotten together. Your a great writer and i would definetly read your other fics. Well update soon! Foxy Signing Off!
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2008 14:59 EDT
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I loved this chapter!!! The budding relationship between them is very well written, and the fact that Kagome is having such intense reactions to Inuyasha is giving me giggle fits!! I almost fell out of my chair when the car alarm went off, and his comment about "kids and cars" had me in stitches!!! Keep up the great work!!! hopefully you will reveal the big secret about Inuyasha's aversion to hospitals and what happened in his past that has the group of friends so worried for his safety.....
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Title: Awesome fic!
Reviewed By: AlliecoolGurl On: June 10, 2008 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not signed in, but I decided to write a review anyway... i think that this fic is pretty awesome, and I liked The way Kagome was freaking out about liking Inuyasha... Can't wait to read more! -Alliecoolgirl
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 02:21 EDT
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loooooooved it
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Reviewed By: Arelia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2008 20:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! I can't wait for the drama to unravel. Inu and Kag are really so adorable... it makes me want to find someone like that. ;_; I get a bit confused with your timeline though. I pretty much just read this thing in one shot, so I don't know, it got me confused. First Inu has only known Kag for a month, then he's worried about September coming up while shes worrying about finals and summer. And then they've only known eachother for 3 months or so when he had joined at the begining of the year on the first day of school. Could you please clear this up for me? Other than that... I love the story and please keep updating!
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