| "Bad Influences" Reviews/Comments [ 344 ] |
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 00:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful chapter. Thanks for the update. I hope things go better for Kagome now. Maybe they will get together soon. *crosses fingers* You are very talented. Keep up the terrific work! Of course....please update soon.
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 02:30 EDT
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really enjoying this story, can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: alexus615 On: July 15, 2007 16:32 EDT
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please post the next chapter up soon. I love this story
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 09:06 EDT
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That was really funny.you should continue writting.
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Title: Sorry for being a kluz..even in English
Reviewed By: Roxas_is_Sorax On: June 24, 2007 18:07 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry, I left out the word "where" in-between the "what" and "those" of the last line of the rant of before. Without that word, the sentence doesn't make sense. Sorry for that. Hope this message doesn't bother you guys. ^-^'
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Title: Chaper.10
Reviewed By: Roxas_is_Sorax On: June 24, 2007 17:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just hope that Inuyasha doesn't have romantic feelings for this Maki or vice-versa...there's enough drama and trouble with the wannabe-Hojo guy for that. *coughtatsuyacough* Maybe Maki will make Kagome jealous of having Inuyasha giving attention to another girl apart from her, even just friend-wise? Lol, that would help make Kagome realise that she likes Inu more than just a contract-based friendship. XP Can't wait to see how this character will be developed, and what this mysterious 15th September is all about. And to find out what those 2 missed out paragraphs Maki wrote that Inu purposfully left out. On the whole, good job!
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Title: .
Reviewed By: dunworry On: June 24, 2007 17:42 EDT
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nooooo :( i admit the maki thing is a nice touch but im gettin scared that inyuyasha likes her and that wen she comes bak, hell ignore kagome for her. :(
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: June 22, 2007 00:47 EDT
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Pwesase!!!!! Update Soon, that last chappie was just TOO funny - lol - WRITE ON!
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 13:32 EDT
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Excellant mood lightener! Tatsuya does nag way more than Kagome does LOL! Yoko is a sneaky little twit..what the heck is she planning now??
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Title: Tooooooo Funny
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 16:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW THAT WAS FUNNNNNNY SOME PEOPLE CAN BE SO FULL OF IT !!!! BUT AT LEAST KAGOME HAD A GOOD LAUGH!!!! I'M A LITTLE CONFUSED ABOUT KOKOS ROLE THOUGH AT FIRST IT SEEMED WANTED KAGOMES PLACE IN SCHOOL AND WITH Tatsuya OR SHE WANTS HER PLACE WITH YASHA????? I GUESS ONLY TIME AND MORE CHAPTERS WILL TELL....I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:00 EDT
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hey there i can't wait to read the next chapter i hope you get it up soon i really love your story so please update asap
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Title: WRITE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 10:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE! *POINTS GUN AT YOU AND PULLS THE TRIGGER* OWWWWWWW! I SHOT MY FOOT AGAIN!!!!!!!!! JUST WRITE DAMN IT!!!!! PEAS?
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 09:46 EDT
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haha, thanks for using my idea of inu telling everyone that he's gay, oh and the mimicking was just hilarious with inu killing tetsuja "die, die ,die" haha I still can't stop laughing
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:48 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter and the Maki thing is a great touch to the story, maybe a rival towards Kagome trying to get Inuyasha? Well until then, hope you update and kepp it up. Peace...
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 04:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, isn't she still supposed to be feeding him if he goes to school regularly? . . . i read an article about many students in japan are terrorized by bullies some even commit suicide to escape it so i thought your portrayal of what was happening to kagome was frighteningly accurate. ~ thank you, ginny
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