| "Bad Influences" Reviews/Comments [ 344 ] |
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Reviewed By: snowfire2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 04:24 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this chapter had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. i like your style of writing and your story is original. i'm curious to know now when your going to put an end to this mystery. well i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 03:25 EDT
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im so glad u updated u r really a great writer i love ur writing this chapter was very well written and enjoyable as the rest update soon plz! ~abby
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Reviewed By: werxa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 12:13 EDT
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awwwww man, you said you will tell us more about what happened to him, but with this chapter you made it all worse, now I don't understand anything :(
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Title: WOW WOW WOW
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 04:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW WOW WOW TALK ABOUT AN UPDATE !!!! NOW THAT WAS GOOD,YOU FILLED IN A LOT INFO WITHOUT GIVING ANYTHING AWAY,BUT ENOUGH TO START YOU THINKING AND WONDERING WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM.... IT IS VERY CLEAR THAT YOUR EXTRA PEOPLE ARE GOING TO PLAY AN IMPORTANT PART IN THIS STORY AS IT GOES ON.... THE WAY YOU SLIPPED IN THE THOUGH ABOUT WHO WAS GOING TO BE PISSED AT HIM WAS PERFECT!!!! GLAD SOUTA WASN'T HURT TO BADLY BUT A COMA CAN BE A SCARY THING!!!! NICE INSITE INTO KAGOMES PAST I KNOW WE WILL FIND OUT MORE LATER!!!! BUT FOR NOW WE WILL HAVE TO WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT RAPIDLY APPROACHING UPDATE;}LOL Now here it comes the bad pun WRITE ON AND DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE SOON!!!! I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 23:55 EDT
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something happened, he has scars from gunshot wound, flashbacks of trauma in a sanatorium... something went down. . . anybody going to tell kagome that yasha was the one who gave souta's identity to the medical personel? good descriptions ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it Poor Souta he got hit and what about inuyasha why did he freak out when he got to the hospital with him? well i guess i'll find out next chapter Update soon Okay :)!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 17:29 EDT
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Lol This story... Im likin it. Thou Im wondering about the point for adding the OC's into it. They seem unneccesary at the moment. And KAgome lol .. wow sheis 'special' someone cared that much about rumors and being in Student Counsel. I was in student counsel and all I could think about was geting out. :Sigh: But I wanted the darn Rope when I graduated. HEHHEHEE wells so far its good. Though one thing does bother me ..whenKagome says 'Parents' I guess ina a way her gramps is a parent but to me it makes no sense.. bt Im a loser like that. Update soon! =D p.s Yoko a loser!!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 01:15 EDT
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omg omg omg update soon!!!!!!!!!!!i loved it
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Title: HUUUUUM HOW DO I REVIEW THE E LET ME COUNT THE WAYS
Reviewed By: OLDDOG333 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 00:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HUUUUUM HOW DO I REVIEW THEE LET ME COUNT THE WAYS???? O MY THAT IS JUST TERRIBLE, BAD EVEN A LITTLE CORNY!!!! LOL VERY NICE RECOVERY ON YASHAS PART ABOUT KAGS MATH SKILLS.... AND HOW YOU SLIPPED IN THE INFO ON HIS MOTHER WAS JUST PERFECT AS I SAD BEFORE THE INTERACTION BETWEEN THEM AT THIS POINT IN THE STORY IS NEAR PERFECT,JUST THE LITTLEST HINTS OF GROWING ATTACHMENT... YOU NEED TO OPEN YASHA UP A LITTLE MORE NOT IN WHAT HE IS SAYING BUT WHAT HE IS THINKING ABOUT HER OR THE WAY HE REACTS TO HER WITHOUT REALIZING IT TILL AFTER IT HAPPENS!!!! O YES THE SOUP ON THE HEAD WAS CUTE BUT A LITTLE OVER THE "TOP" hehehe if you know what I mean....now here it comes the bad pun WRITE ON AND DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE SOON!!!! OYEA A LOT OF GUYS ARE VERY SENSITIVE ABOUT HAVING THERE HAIR PULLED ON!!!! I am OLDDOG333 KEEPER OF THE DEMON HOUNDS
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Title: OMG YAY
Reviewed By: blackr0s3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 22:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG YAY YAY YAY you UPDATED! I just love your story especially the part about Kagome washing his hair that was just TOO KAWAII!!! Im not even kidding when I talk about how much I LOVE this story and ur style of writing! ur such a GREAT writer! EVERYTHING is just WOW!!! PLZ update SOON!!! lotz of lub xoxo~abby
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Title: Terrific
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 20:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful Chappy! We got to see Inuyasha's nice side. That was great. I love the interaction you do with them. Keep up the terrific work! and of course.... update soon! --- Amy
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Reviewed By: Nanimochan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 16:00 EDT
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awww its cute!!! can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: September 20, 2007 14:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is great i am glade to see another chapterand up date soon please.
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Reviewed By: rinabeana [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 00:54 EDT
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It's a really good story PLease right more i love Kagome and inuyasha stories they warm my Heart lol but it's really good please continue
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Title: comment
Reviewed By: Inkotoma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 15:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story line. I hoope you add a chapter soon!!!
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