| "Miscalculation" Reviews/Comments [ 49 ] |
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Reviewed By: pepe a On: January 01, 2008 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
one think i can say is the fan fiction is on of the greatest i have read sow please finish it i can,t wait this is the boom
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Reviewed By: NCanimefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story (like all of your other stories lol). fianlly someone has written a decent negima fanfic, however i wish you'd update this story like you've been updating your newest love hina story.
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great idea and I'm waiting for the next chapters. The only problem I have with it is that you keep changing Fei Ku's name around. And maybe you could make the chapters longer. Besides that it's got a good premise and captures the characters in a way that fits what I know of them.
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Reviewed By: Touko On: December 15, 2007 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good start. The girls all seem to fall very easily into the 'I will not be jealous of my beloved's polyamorous harem' mindset, but a) you signposted this with the misapplied Pactios, and b) it's not really a fic by you without polyamorous non-jealous harems. :) Will look forward to more.
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