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Reviewed By: pepe a On: January 17, 2008 22:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well what can a say of the fan fiction that i haven say before. one think comes to my mind is the grates one don't think i write a review to all the fan fictions that i think that are great so por favor go go write your best
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 21:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a bit on the short side but still a good chapter. But for some reason, I see Mana joining the White Wings soon.
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Reviewed By: OverMaster On: January 14, 2008 13:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, simply great stuff, and it keeps getting better. I can't wait for the next part! Ayaka's informat is obviously Yuuna, however, so I wonder what is the point of trying to keep her as a secret despite such obvious clues.
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Reviewed By: pepe a On: January 01, 2008 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
one think i can say is the fan fiction is on of the greatest i have read sow please finish it i can,t wait this is the boom
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Reviewed By: NCanimefreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 19:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story (like all of your other stories lol). fianlly someone has written a decent negima fanfic, however i wish you'd update this story like you've been updating your newest love hina story.
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 10:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great idea and I'm waiting for the next chapters. The only problem I have with it is that you keep changing Fei Ku's name around. And maybe you could make the chapters longer. Besides that it's got a good premise and captures the characters in a way that fits what I know of them.
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Reviewed By: Touko On: December 15, 2007 19:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very good start. The girls all seem to fall very easily into the 'I will not be jealous of my beloved's polyamorous harem' mindset, but a) you signposted this with the misapplied Pactios, and b) it's not really a fic by you without polyamorous non-jealous harems. :) Will look forward to more.
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