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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Title: For Warp Wizard
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 17:17 CDT
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You have to understand their point of views. One, they don't have the papers needed for such things as getting a job. Nodoka only enrolled them in school, she never actually handed them the papers, so getting a job with out proper documentation is pretty much nil. With Ranma teaching, it's always been my belief he'd make a sucky teacher in the end, not as bad as say a moron who barely knows how to punch, but just bad. He likes to learn, wands to learn, he's a lot like Ryuu from the street figher series, he is a doer, not a trainer. Remember that old addeage. Those who can, do, those who can't, teach. Also, I've played Ranma's 'attractiveness' as it should have always be played, he's cute, not god awful handsome. Get him with his shirt off while he's sweating though, then you got a fire cracker. Besides, do you really think Nabiki's even emotionally capable at this point of selling her depart sisters fiancee off like that? As for teaching Japanese.. have YOU tried to learn it? It's so freaken unbelievable hard, with Katakana, Kanji,and another differnt language type mixed all into one language. It's hell. Besides, there was a measure of revenge for Ms. perfect from the girls, and now that they have a decent base to build off of, it's likly they will split off into other venues, such as loan sharking, ect. ect.
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 30, 2004 17:05 CDT
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Great chapters
| Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 13:49 CDT
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I'm enjoying things thus far, nice to see something other than totally polarized "they're villains and they're heroes". One quibble with the latest chapter: neither Nabiki nor Ranma could think of *any* other way to make money than selling nude pictures of their classmates? Not getting part-time jobs, selling martial arts lessons, selling dates with Ranma, teaching Japanese, etc etc Obviously, I don't expect you to change things, but that struck me as rather lame.
| Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 01:43 CDT
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Why is Nabiki hostile with the X-men? It mainly stems from the fact they gave her, and Ranma, a rather rude welcome when they first showed up. Then Jean was getting pushy with her, and was saved by wanda. She's also quite popular and known through out the school as Ms. perfect, and thats just some one I can't stand, personally, and I doubt Nabiki could either. Besides, picking on Jean to win over the Brotherhood is a perfectly viable tactic.
| Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 01:12 CDT
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why is nabiki so hostial aginst the x-men? usually she is smart enough to make her own decision and ranma should understand charles desire to keep his kids safe and respect that enough to give them a better chance with out his mother there pulling strings he should have joined up just for the free food
| Reviewed By: Kuno_Baby On: August 29, 2004 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Emma matchup. Nice thing you got going. I kinda imagine Ranma being nuetral, stopping fights if he comes across them and kicking ass if someone challenges him. I dont think he should join any team. If he is matched up with Emma or Nabiki they should shield him from psy attacks in fights.
| Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 21:22 CDT
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Similarities between Dragonlords Evolution fic and this one is to be expected, since that bastard got me interested in Evolution to begin with (Wish he'd finish his fic). The first thing I decided to do in regards to this fic, and Dragons, was remove his godly mutation. Ranma is literally a god in that fic, there is no question of that. He'll literally never run out of energy due to being able to suck in the air molecules around him to power himself. In this fic, I removed that, gave him a rather worthless one that doesn't have much impact - san's Rogue's ability to touch him/ Selene unable to drain his essense. And I incorporated weaknesses, all mental of course. Another difference is the relationship between Ranma, the Brotherhood, and the X-men. Being independant, he's going to enjoy both as friends (even though the X-men really aren't friends right now). As far as the Phoniex thing is concerned, Jean IS the Phoniex, it just hasn't activated yet. Like in all the other series, she's much older when it happens. Anyway, thanks for the words of encouragement, I'm pretty much pumping out a chapter a day, so stay tuned.
| Title: Similar fic?/Matchup
Reviewed By: Ahye On: August 29, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading this fic, I found it amazingly similar to a Fic called "Evolution". Chapter 1 is located at: http://www.sfcreators.com/atlantis/FanFic/Other/Dragonlord/Evolution.1.txt And chapter 2 is located at: http://www.sfcreators.com/atlantis/FanFic/Other/Dragonlord/Evolution.2.txt However, your fic seems different enough that it makes for enjoyable reading even having read the previous one. You do a good job getting into the emotions of the characters, and the grammar is good, with only a few errors; none of which are so bad that a person can't figure out what you probaly meant to have typed. Reguarding a matchup, I've always been partial to a Ranma/Nabiki match, however I admit that this story leaves some interesting possibilities open. Rogue seems to be the best choice, due to their compatable mutant powers. However having her as an adopted sister (that is what she is, correct?) might take their relationship into more of a strong friendship than anything else. I also like the idea of Jean being a match. They both have that whole 'phoenix' thing working for them, although Jean isn't Phoenix in this fic. Kitty might actually end up being the best choice believe it or not. With her phasing, she is very hard to hurt, which is something Ranma would be concerned about, although the 'valley girl' attitude is a big negative againt it. As a side note, matching Nabiki up with Nightcrawler would mean that the Tendo/Satome's are joined. Kurt is Ranma's half brother after all.
| Title: Rogue and Ranma
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:34 CDT
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This is one of my greatest fears. Not that they actually hook up, that would be sweet, but it's how you described it that will really screw their relationship up (if it happens). Ranma would, once he understands her power and situation in full, see her as if she were using him. Rogue chasing after him for hope, and not for actually feelings? Bad joojoo.
| Reviewed By: Shadowbakasama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:25 CDT
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Great story! I like that they are getting to know the X-Men and the Brotherhood, but don't see them joining any of the teams. That's not to say that Ranma wouldn't join theX-Men or the Brotherhood in a fight if something BIG comes up, like a demon, god, or squardron of sentinels. I wonder what Nodoka/Mystique has planned, she could be setting it up so that Ranma will have allies for when she declares a 'Blood Feud' with Agency Nero and goes back to Japan with Ranma to whipe out those mutant haters. So don't have Ranma be getting too guilty about killing those soldiers, they killed Kasumi without a thought, so they are rabid dogs that must be put down. As for a match-up. I'd say that Mystique will try and set up Ranma with Rogue, and Rogue will be all over him when she finds out that she can touch him. Rogue misses that so much, she might even get upset that Chuck and Logan didn't mention the fact that his actual mutant power makes him immune to her touch. MHUHHAhahaha. I'm looking forward to seeing her find out.
| Reviewed By: Shadowbakasama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I like that they are getting to know the X-Men and the Brotherhood, but don't see them joining any of the teams. That's not to say that Ranma wouldn't join theX-Men or the Brotherhood in a fight if something BIG comes up, like a demon, god, or squardron of sentinels. I wonder what Nodoka/Mystique has planned, she could be setting it up so that Ranma will have allies for when she declares a 'Blood Feud' with Agency Nero and goes back to Japan with Ranma to whipe out those mutant haters. So don't have Ranma be getting too guilty about killing those soldiers, they killed Kasumi without a thought, so they are rabid dogs that must be put down. As for a match-up. I'd say that Mystique will try and set up Ranma with Rogue, and Rogue will be all over him when she finds out that she can touch him. Rogue misses that so much, she might even get upset that Chuck and Logan didn't mention the fact that his actual mutant power makes him immune to her touch. MHUHHAhahaha. I'm looking forward to seeing her find out.
| Title: Chapter 8 (11)
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 06:39 CDT
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I am so not happy with that chapter. Once my muse dies it's horrible, painful death, that fucker is getting a rewrite and prolly erased completely, it's point stretched out over a few chapters for a climatic finish instead of this 'sudden' ness crap. Oh well. I did warn you all I'm not polishing chapters, and just writring until my muse dies before going back and polishing. yare yare yare, I'm rambling. Matdeception
| Reviewed By: darkbolt On: August 29, 2004 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. I've been looking for x-men ranma 0.5 xovers and this one is definitely one of the best out there. I like the arrogant streak to ranma but i think it'd be better if you mature him a bit. Reflect on what's happened because he does hold honour above everything and killing those people has got to affect him. I'm also wondering whereabouts in the ranma series this is set? I think it's after the saffron bit so it'd be cool if you did something with the fact that ranma ate the phoenix pill and then he was exposed to the ashes of a phoenix and the cat's tongue pressure point will eventually wear off. Oh and Ranma/Emma Frost matchup. I'd just like to see how that'd go ^_^ Keep up the good work!!!!111
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 28, 2004 17:13 CDT
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Great chapter.
| Title: Ranma's Infamy
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 15:05 CDT
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Valid concern. I've answered this on other forums, might as well put it here. Japan as publicly stated the 'Incident' in question was not real, but was in fact a movie currently in developement. Some how the final edit, after all special effects and such had been included, got aired live by a radical group of Media terrorist, similar looking to the girl who attacked Gainax. Heh. Besides, he's in America now, and four weeks have passed since then. Most people won't remember him, and those that do would probably just want to ask him if it was true, (What japan said) and if he had another other movies out. The fact Japan has disavowed the existence of Ranma Saotome helps in this, if you think about it. Matdeception
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