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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (12): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 › » ] | Title: No need to Change this!
Reviewed By: Lord Rance-sama On: September 05, 2004 12:50 CDT
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NO! Don't erase this. It's pretty well done, and it's really logical. With Jean's momentary psychic connection with Ranma, it was BOUND to happen. Jean, in X-Men Evolution anyway, has a mask, which you already brought up. She's like Akane in some aspects, trying to be someone she'd rather not be, but was forced to be. You can imagine the sexual frustration on the girl, especially since she's a 'goodie two-shoes girl'. Frankly, a release might do a whole world of good for Jean. And, this also produces a chaotic love square for you to exploit. Emma might succumb next, since she's another person who got into Ranma's reaaaaally chaotic mind. You can also include Nabiki too. As you've said, it doesn't mean that whoever Ranma bones in the fic WILL become his partner for life. Whether people like it or not, society nowadays believe in Casual Sex. Also, as I said, Jean would probably freak BIGTIME since she's kinda out of it when Ranma and Jean did IT. No, you don't have to erase this chapter. It's very well done. I love it. It explains how human every one of them is, no matter how powerful they might become. Not that Ranma's a pretty powerful mutant in the first place. A momentary loss of control for someone as self-assured as Jean would help the girl loosen up some, and would probably cause her to become a lot more relaxed in the next few years of her life, with that mental anguish she undergoes everyday. And now we get to see Scott rant, an' Logan boggle.
| Reviewed By: the g man On: September 05, 2004 12:01 CDT
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So he banged Jean. Big deal people. I feel that the story should be left the way it is. For good or for bad the story should be the path the author chooses. I have been reading this story since it came out and I've rather enjoyed it. So what if its OOC at times. It makes the story to me much more interesting. Those that usually think that the charaters need to act in-charater all the time are the ones that usually have no imagination what so ever. This is my opinion so don't take it to serious like some people would. Anyway, I hope to see more chapters in future soon. As for match-ups, let's go with Rogue. I haven't seen to many fics with them as a pair. Jean/Ranma isn't a bad match up either so if Rogue doesn't work out. Go with this match-up.
| Reviewed By: lagrange On: September 05, 2004 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't really like this last chapter, it seems a bit OOC for both of them. you said in notes that any guy with a social life would know stuff... but Ranma doesn't have a social life like that. I like it, don't get me wrong, but it seems like a bit too sudden of a change, with very little set-up. yeah... and I want to vote for the Rogue, Jean, Emma, and Nabiki option (was it all four? whichever one had a bunch of them way at the bottom of the chapter.
| Reviewed By: Ahye On: September 05, 2004 10:00 CDT
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While I like the idea of Ranma and Jean getting together, somehow I feel it should be done in a different way. Of course I'm still hoping for a Ranma/Rogue match, but Jean should fit in there somewhere. As for Emma...I don't like her. Not sure why, but I'm personally against her getting anywhere. The last few sentences with Nabiki complaining to Wanda that she needs to put out faster are both funny and have the potential to lead to lots of interesting situations. I wish there was a way to scrap most of the Ranma and Jean thing, and keep that last bit. Ah well. On the other hand, I like the fact that you pump out the chapters fast, and keep the pace going. Backing up also seems wrong. As a last note, I spotted the 'ripped condom' part of it. Do I sense a pregnant Jean? I'm still voting for Ranma/Rogue and Nabiki/Wanda, but you're certainly making some very interesting twists and loops in the plot.
| Reviewed By: Wha? On: September 05, 2004 09:42 CDT
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Well i don't like how taht turned out at all!
| Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 07:27 CDT
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Show me canonical proof of this, wether it be Manga or Anime, I'll accept either.
| Reviewed By: chichi_krillin On: September 05, 2004 07:21 CDT
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i belive ranma was ignorant of sex the whole time he was in nerima ranma is not perfect he sticks his foot in his mouth alot but also know that with malnutrition and the kind of exercise ranma gets its not unheard of for puberity to set in reallly late from some of the things i heard it would be possable ranma did not hit puberity till 18 or 20 which means ranma would not nessary be a "man" instead of a little "boy"
| Title: To Darkbolt
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 06:18 CDT
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Send me an email. I have that same problem, with mediaminer not updating. It's not hard to fix, only problem is you got to do it often to make sure it works.
| Title: To erase, or not too.
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 06:14 CDT
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So.. should I continue where this fic is going, or should I scrap the fact he banged Jean and instead take it down a slightly differnt path. In the end not much would change, sans not screwing Jean.
| Reviewed By: darkbolt On: September 05, 2004 06:01 CDT
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I hate it when it doesn't show the fact that you haven't updated when in fact you have. Gets really annoying since i spent my whole day waiting for you to update. I need my fix of the next chapter coz i love reading this fic. Keep up the good work ^^
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 05, 2004 03:14 CDT
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Great chapter.
| Reviewed By: MogtheGnome On: September 04, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm slowly but surely getting through my problems of finding chapters by finding clever ways around them. The story is amazing, even not polished, and will only get better when you do. But I'd rater see the story finished before you start the polishing : ). Oh, and I add a vote for Rouge.
| Title: HVulpes; Lu.
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 23:36 CDT
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Well, being as I don't talk to these people, I couldn't say. From what I've heard through the grape vine Lu's been writing Harry Potter fics, and alot of people hope and pray he'll continue working on such fics as Star of War, and of course, Evolution. I don't remember ever reading Hvulpes X-men fic, but that's not surprising. I don't generally go around hunting fanfictions to read, at least not anymore. I have a list of authors I check constantly, and on occasion people point out other good fics which I check on for the hell of it. It's a shame Tannim's is no longer going to be updating anytime in the near future, most of the fics I watch were posted there. In case you didn't know Tannim threw in the towel for the time being, having your comp get fried and losing all your Thesis files tends to piss people off.
| Reviewed By: Daniel de los Santos On: September 03, 2004 22:14 CDT
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I'd like to see a Ranma/Rogue pairing in this, I've seen enough Ranma/Nabiki pairings, I'd like to see something different even for a Ranma X-men Evolution cross. I like the idea for someone being able to touch Rogue, I mean come on the girl needs something to give her hope that she won't be alone for the rest of her life. Not only that I'd like to know when HVulpes, and Lu Dragonlord are going to update their Ranma X-men Evolution crossovers as well
| Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 03, 2004 20:54 CDT
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Another great chapter
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