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| "The Ultimate Antidote" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] | | Pages (6): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Reviewed By: coldfission [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fanfic, the emotions Ranma has been going through because of what has transpired for him is communicated to the reader wonderfully. The only problem I have is the spelling and grammar, but that's because part of my major is Reading/Language Arts, lol. I know that there hasn't been an update in a while, and I'm hoping for one soon. However, if you feel that you can't update, I would be honored to continue the story for you.
| Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 19:25 CDT
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Not a bad start, from there it gets WAY to dark and angsty for my taste. The thought the rest the world, and Xavier just sit back and watch japan slaughter and capture mutant/humans indescrimently just doesn't sit well with me. I also feel the need to raise the issue I always do in these darker fics. If the bad guys suddenly up their evil ways into more killing and murder, the good guys have to respond. You can't just 'defeat' the bad guys and let them get away any more if they just come back to kill more people. Sort reminds me of a Ranma/spider man fic where Magneto killed tons of people that got in his way, and ended up imprisoned for it. Just doesn't make sense, even a normal human with a body count like that would be put on death row, not simply imprisoned.
| Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Too bad that there are several good Ranma/X-Men crossovers available but none of them finished. I hope that you'll update the story one of these days.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 16:01 CST
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well, no updates for over a year, curious about where this story is going now, personally. Anyway, I like this story, a lot, uber-angsty (and why do I see Ranma in Emma's bed at teh end of the night?) On top of that, did rogue do this, taking away Ranma's memories of akane? Could she even do that, or was this a result of something done by Jene, to make up for what she had done? Not one hundred percent certain, but I am bewildered. Neh, more info would be nice, but whatever. Gimme more chapters, or a sequel, please? Later
| Reviewed By: ashuraryu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the fic just got done reading it for the second time. I was wondering if your still writing this one? Only asking as there has been no update to it since October of 2005.
| Title: Wahhh... @_@;
Reviewed By: archphoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2006 08:12 CDT
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Man, it's been almost a year!!! Is this story (which is btheway the second MOST POPULAR on the mediaminer (in Ranma cathegory of course)) actually dead?? Dear Author??? Did Real Life managed to kill all your free time and your muse as well? ??? ... /sigh/ I really hope you'll find a bit of time to continue and eventually finish it for this is (IMHO) the best x-over with x-men. P.S. Oh, and I really think Ranma should be with Nabiki here. After all she is the last Tendo and he is the last (male) Saotome... and honour is the only thing they have left. I think that Nabiki is the only possible choice for him here, the only person who can actually understand him, the only person whos concept of honour is close to his. But that is IMHO... I really hope you are going to continue this...
| Reviewed By: goku_90504 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 16:35 CDT
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It has been awhile sense i last read the full story so my memory might or might not be shot as far as this story is concerned but i dont remember ranma loseing his memories of akane
| Title: Yo
Reviewed By: askthedonkey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2005 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice to see your not dead and still writing. Hope to see another chapter when ever you get the chance. But could you update, Why Always Me, first it is one of my favorite stories and i would really like to see another chapter when you get the chance PLEASE.
| Title: Author's Update
Reviewed By: Matdeception [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 03:12 CDT
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I'm way past due for an update, and I apologise for that. You all deserve to know what's going on, and I should be shot for making you wait so long. First, the story isn't dead, I don't have writers block, and has in reality been greatly worked on since my last chapter release. However, between my job, School, House/Social Life, and that blasted World of Warcraft game, I find my energies and times greatly divided. In fact, most, if not all, of the work I've done since the last post has been here at work, during the few moments I can get to myself to work on it. It's not dead, just so you know, but greatly delayed. I'll post an update as soon as I'm comfortable with the way I'm taking the story. Thank you.
| Reviewed By: MutantMFM On: September 28, 2005 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update this story it is the best Ranma/X-Men Evolution crossover fan fiction I have ever read!
| Title: wow
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: August 14, 2005 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow been a long time since i read this story hope we get to see the finish story's.
| Title: MORE!!!!!!
Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2005 18:16 CDT
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OK. I just found this story and have already read it all! Hurry up and post more.
| Reviewed By: Guess On: June 23, 2005 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More action! This story is turning into a romance novel. I agree that dealing with Teenage issue and personal angst are part of the concept in X-men evolution, but Bayville is too PEACEFUL lately. I have to agree with "Bob King of the Were-Lemurs" that while the earlier chapters has angst,tragedy, and depth, components of good drama. In the later chapters, it appear the characters are dealing more with hormones than advancing the story. Not that I mind the hormones of course. Anyway, the story as a whole still is very appealing. I am looking forward to when you introduce the events at the dance where the story should get interesting again.
| Title: curious
Reviewed By: rageycat On: June 03, 2005 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i am enjoying this fanfic... now I have to ask if the gene for mutation is male encoded, someone explain nightcrawler, whose fatehr was human and mother was the mutant. Or is this some new thing put out, because in the comics for the most part it was the mother that was passing on the mutant traits. there are of course exceptions to this, but really
| Reviewed By: iCe An6el [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm so far I like it, there are a few things that are bugging me especially the use of "duck tape" instead of "duct" tape, although it's nothing that a good beta wouldn't fix. Also, as far as continuity in the X-men universe goes, it's the males that carries the X-gene (the gene that codes for being a mutant) not the mother . But I guess since this is a fanfic and all that's alright. :) Would want to see more of the work.
| Title: Status Update Pt. 2
Reviewed By: Author again On: May 13, 2005 02:53 CDT
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Heh, didn't have enough room in the above post. I still haven't figured out how to space crap in these comments, other wise I would be able to give it that intelligent look I'm so fond of. In reply to the post below, I couldn't agree more. In fact, and I'm not so terribly surprised, no one has seen the major up coming shit in the rather obtuse way I'm known to write things. I hint, in a very subtle manner, things going on in the back ground. I'm not a big buff on giving antogonists their own little scenes, unless it's needed. Character development is one thing, intrigue and mystery is another. I like to leave people guessing, unsure of what's going to happen next. Anyone familiar with the Evolution series knows that almost immediatly after the dance ALL HELL breaks loose as mutants are revealed and the storm of prejudice descends on the populace. In fact, once I get the next chapter up either tomorrow, or the day after (There's a scene at the beginning I'm not happy with, and want to rewrite to make more sense) you'll notice a rather jarring shift back into the more physical combat aspect of the series. I've been carefully plotting the next 10 or so chapters, mainly on character development and the running/closing of tiny plot involving other, technically secondary, characters in the story thus far. Anyway, there's a heads up. Matdeception
| Title: Status Update
Reviewed By: The Author - Matty On: May 13, 2005 02:48 CDT
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Heya everyone! Let me try to get everything in here as quick as I can. No, the story is not dead, in fact I have the next chapter ready to go. I have, however, run into real life issues that have been seriously kicking my ass. Namely, work, sinus, lack of sleep, girl friend dropping the 'I'm pregnant' bomb on me. Joy. Work's been a major bitch, due to sinus attacks and the like. My sinus problems are completely my room mates fault, I've discovered. I have a minor allergy to dust, nothing overly big and generally it just causes sneexing. A culumitive effect, however, causes sinus attacks that floor me. I usually change the air filter in the air conditioner once a month, but because of my busy schedule my roomie was suppose to do it, and he did, sorta. He removed the filter and set it to the side. Yeah, that's it. So I've been breathing in non filtered air with a nasty dirty and dusty filter right next to it, which has been the primary cause of my hellish month. I should of realized, when at the beginning of the previous month everything seemed to be going my way (Hot chick I knew from high school, met her by chance, got laid and got a steady girl friend again. I took my boss on a five hour bitch fest that left him crying, and thanking me of all things. Got a raise too [uber]. And the internet from work was fixed). Everything turned to shit, at least work side, after that. Then the GF drops the bomb and I go apeshit on Trojan condoms. Anyway, I'lln post the new chapter soon.
| Reviewed By: Bob King of the Were-Lemurs On: May 12, 2005 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've really enjoyed this fic and am sad to see that you've aparently abandoned it. I think your biggest problem was when Ranma and Nabiki end up in bayville. Everything leading up to that point, the deaths of Genma and the Tendo's, Ranma revenge, and all that was great, awesome even. However the story seems to drag after that. You need to find something to add conflict back to the story (non-romance related) Maybe Ranma has to go back to Japan to rescue Mystique who went back to collect an important family heirloom and was captured or something like that. Ryouga showing up again would be a good distraction as well.
| Title: hay!
Reviewed By: maga man On: February 27, 2005 21:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad your back we all miss you knowing you come back someday.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:36 CST
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Stupid spam filter validation. Sorry about the multiple posts.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:35 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:34 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: Yarrow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 10:33 CST
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I really like this story--it's a fun read and I hope you update soon. The one thing that bothers me, though, is Ranma's curse. Since when has it ever just sat around for so long without causing problems at the worst possible time? Anyway, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: rhaziel07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i pray you update soon, currently my favorite fic anywhere. love that fact that jean may end up with ranma at the end(DIE SUMMERS DIE!!!!!HAHAHAHA). anyway, keep up the good work.
| Title: Status
Reviewed By: Matdeception I am On: February 02, 2005 03:43 CST
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Just thought I'd drop you a line. Writing stalled for this fic, and not because of anything bad persay. I found I had jury duty, and while there I discovered an inherit problem within the next chapter itself that I had to answer. It was a serious qeustion, and had to be answered. I didn't know if a certain character would do something, and it was pivotal that I found out. Now that I know the answer, I've worked on structuring and carefully laying plot development in the next chapter. I have 22 pages of text written for it, and I haven't even actually gotten to the dance yet, or the numerous huge scene's I have planned to give the characters involved something else to focus on for a little while besides the fucked up social interations currently taking place. Next chapter will, at the very least, introduce one new character, and a heavily altered character from the Ranma 1/2 manga into the main line. It'll also give some hints as to just what Ryoga is going through in Japan, his actions there are a side story in and of themselves, and I doubt I'll write it out until after the Day of Reckoning later on. Just a heads up. I'm at work right now, yippy! Matdeception
| Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: February 01, 2005 00:39 CST
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Please update, I love your fic!
| Title: could be true
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: October 29, 2004 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Kheram Coldstar guess is right and so does the other fan's that agree's with him. Look like ranma and jean are going to a have baby.
| Reviewed By: Kheram Coldstar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that I probably won't get an answer from Mat, but does anyone besides me think that bacause of Wamda's use of her power that Jean is probably going to get pregnant from her "tryst" with Ranma?
| Title: say hi
Reviewed By: marco cabrera On: October 28, 2004 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow i wonder if he working on a huge update?
| Reviewed By: darkwoofe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is hands down the best ranma/x-men story I've ever read. The story gives a very personal view of everyone involed while not getting bogged down on just that. The storyline is always moving forward. I can't wait to see the next chapter!
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